Success is My Middle Name

Adventure American Contemporary

Written in response to: "Write about the moment a character succeeds (or fails) from the POV of someone close to them." as part of The Hunger Within with Denne Michele Norris.

"Yes, we have Jane Doe here to take the stage." Jean, the CEO of the company, handed the mic to me and I stepped up onto the podium with a little grin on my face, my speech was rehearsed a million times over and over again, and I was sure it would hit their hearts.

I began with a sigh and then said, "Dearly beloved. I don't know how else to start LO. L, we are gathered here because we won the race. The contest, the competition we are number one in all e-commerce platforms," and everyone clapped and cheered for a minute.

There were about 30 people in the room. It was a meeting room, the doors and windows were closed. So I was having trouble breathing all of a sudden, then everyone, the press started asking questions, what how did you do it? What was your role in the success of the company?

And I said, "Well, it was all a team effort and everyone put in their share, and we worked well together as a team," and everyone nodded, except for one girl, in the back was frowning down on her phone. That was Gina. The one who always had an attitude. I think she had trouble at home. I didn't know what was going on with her.

And then I stalled and faltered. And John, the tall older man with graying hair stepped up and took the mic and said, "OK. That will be all, any more questions. I will answer them."

Then, I kind of felt faint and actually fainted on the floor. Some people came to my aid, and the emergency crew was called and I was taken out on a cot into the ambulance to the hospital.

"Wait", I woke up. "What was that all about? Where am I?"

"You fainted at the meeting," said my faithful co-worker Sue, standing by my side. The Doctor and the nurse were taking my pulse and my Blood Pressure.

Wow, I thought I was dreaming or something, that was real. Yeah, and then all of a sudden, everything faded out again. I didn't know what was going on. Maybe it was a result of exhaustion from working, so hard at becoming the top dogs in the industry. Between me and my teammates in the company, so I went into a deep-sleep. And when I got out, they said, I was in a coma for 4 hours and I said, "Wow, am I lucky to be alive or is this normal?"

And they said, "Yeah, it's kind of like your heartbeat slowed for a while. We were praying and hoping you wouldn't be giving up on your life, I mean, you must be really burnt out."

I said, "Yeah," but then they put me in a wheelchair and wheeled me down to the bingo room.

I said, "Wait, is this a nursing home. I'm not that old, I don't need to be in a wheelchair or doing bingo with old people. I'm only 55, my life is, at its peak. I have a family at home that's waiting for me, did Gary call?"

"No, he didn't call," answered Sue.

"Oh, yeah, that's right. He brought the kids to the baseball game. Okay. Well I guess I gotta get going. Can I get out of these clothes and put my regular garments on? I need to get in my car."

"Yeah, your car is back at the job."

"Well, I'll need a taxi. Can someone give me a pass for taxi?"

"Yes," the Doctor said and he made the arrangements and the cab came and picked me up. I was on my way back home and I put the keys down and I noticed that Gary had left a note, he said he took the kids on a trip to Massachusetts, and I was like, wait.What?And then he added that he would be back in a week, I was like, wait.What why did you do that?I called him desperately.

The End

Now this is going to repeat, I guess. Yes, we have Jane Doe here to take the stage. Jane, the CEO of the company, handed the mic to me and I stepped up onto the podium with a little grin on my face, my speech was rehearsed a million times over and over again, and I was sure it would hit their hearts. I began with a sigh and then said dearly beloved. I don't know how else to start LO. L, we are gathered here because we won the race. The contest, the competition we are number one in all e-commerce platforms and everyone clapped and cheered for a minute. There were about 30 people in the room. It was a meeting room, the doors and windows were closed. So I was having trouble breathing all of a sudden, then everyone, the press started asking questions, what how did you do it? What was your role in the success of the company? And I said, well, it was all a team effort and everyone put in their share, and we worked well together as a team and everyone nodded, except for one girl, in the back was frowning down on their phone. That was Gina. The one who always had an attitude. I think she had trouble at home. I didn't know what was going on with her. And then I stalled and faltered. And John, the tall older man with Graying hair stepped up and took the Mic and said OK. That will be all, any more questions. I will answer them then. I kind of felt faint and actually fainted on the floor. Some people came to my aid and the emergency crew was called and I was taken out on A. Cot into the ambulance to the hospital. Wait, I woke up. What was that all about? Where am I? You fainted at the meeting, said my faithful co-worker Sue, standing by my side. The Doctor and the nurse were taking my pulse and my Blood Pressure. Wow I thought I was dreaming or something that was real. Yeah, and then all of a sudden, everything faded out again. I didn't know what was going on. Maybe it was a result of exhaustion from working, so hard at becoming the top dogs in the industry. Between me and my teammates in the company, so I went into a deep-sleep. And when I got out, they said, I was in a coma for 4 hours and I said, wow, am I lucky to be alive or is this normal? And they said, yeah, it's kind of like your heartbeat slowed for a while. We were praying and hoping you wouldn't be giving up on your life, I mean, you must be really burnt out. I said, yeah, but then they put me in a wheelchair and wheeled me down to the bingo room, I said, wait, is this a nursing home. I'm not that old, I don't need to be in a wheelchair or doing bingo with old people. I'm only 55, my life is, at its peak. I have a family at home that's waiting for me, did Gary call no, he didn't call answered Sue, oh, yeah, that's right. He brought the kids to the baseball game. Okay. Well I guess I gotta get going. Can I get out of these clothes and put my regular garments on? I need to get in my car. Yeah, your car is back at the job. Well, I'll need a taxi. Can someone give me a pass for taxi? Yes, the Doctor said and he made the arrangements and the cab came and picked me up. I was on my way back home and I put the keys down and I noticed that Gary. Had left a note, he said he took the kids on a trip to Massachusetts, and I was like, wait. What? And then he added that he would be back in a week, I was like, wait. What why did you do that? I called him desperately.

Posted Sep 26, 2025
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