Submitted to: Contest #320

The Hidden Path

Written in response to: "Center your story around a character discovering a hidden door or path."

Fantasy Fiction

Joyce’s retirement had not gone at all as she expected. In truth, it had gone better. Those first weeks in the log cabin had been dreadful: alone, anxious, and shadowed by the forest pressing in on every side. She barely dared step beyond the porch. Then a half-starved bobcat appeared one morning, bold as brass, demanding food. She named him Ginger, and through him found not only Robert, the vet next door, but a circle of neighbours who walked their dogs each day beneath the ponderosa pines. By the time Ginger was strong enough to return to the wild, Joyce had decided she would stay. The forest, once an enemy, had begun to feel almost like home.

Her cabin was no longer quiet. Two kittens, Poppy and Raison, now prowled its corners and curled at her feet as she wrote. And then there was Boris, Robert’s ageing golden retriever, who was deposited on her doorstep so often that Joyce had begun to think of him as hers by proxy. He was her ticket into the walking group — and into the forest — and she soon realised that, with friendly company, her primal fear had steadily ebbed away.

Joyce loved her walks with Boris. The old retriever had grown heavier and slower, stopping to nose at every bush as if each leaf hid a secret, but his whole body still quivered with joy whenever she reached for the lead.

She, of course, did not put herself in the same way. Her mirror disagreed daily, but Joyce had learned to squint until it showed the version she preferred — a trick she recommended to anyone over sixty, though few ever seemed eager to try. Her waist had softened, her skin had begun to fold into little pleats, but she told herself her step remained light and youthful.

When she looked at her neighbours, with their silver hair and gentle, rounded bellies, she liked to think she was doing better — though, if she was honest, it was only thanks to the strategic addition of a scarf to disguise the folds at her neckline. It wasn’t denial, she reasoned, just advanced accessorising. After all, she insisted, the only thing slowing her down was Boris. She waited patiently while he limped to catch up, never once imagining how well suited to each other they were.

One afternoon, after typing the last line of a chapter, Joyce shut her laptop with a snap. She stretched, yawned, and glanced around the room. The kittens were asleep in a heap, the cabin was too quiet, and she felt suddenly restless. She reached for the phone and called Robert.

“Any chance I can borrow Boris for a walk?” she asked. “I need air — and an excuse not to fiddle with my book for an hour.”

“Not going with the others?” he asked.

“No. Just me today. I need the forest without the chatter.”

There was a pause, then Robert chuckled. “Alright, but I’ll warn you now — he’s moving slowly these days. Old age is catching him up. Might not be much of a walk.”

Boris was even slower than usual that afternoon. His nose seemed magnetised to every clump of undergrowth, his tail swishing lazily as he investigated each leaf as though it contained a personal message. Joyce trailed after him with patience, though she couldn’t help muttering, “Honestly, Boris, if we stop at every bush, we’ll never make it home before supper.”

The deeper they went, the quieter it grew. The forest, normally a chorus of birdcall and rustle, seemed to be holding its breath. Joyce was just about to coax Boris along when she heard it — a rustling in the thicket. Distinct, deliberate.

Her skin prickled.

“This takes me back to when I first met Ginger,” she whispered, trying to steady herself. “Remember, Boris? When I was terrified because something was in the undergrowth?”

She turned to smile at him — but her heart lurched. No Boris.

The rustling swelled, pushing through a wide patch of brush. Something big was moving. A deer? A moose? With her luck, probably a moose with a taste for retirees. At least the headline would be memorable.

“Boris?” she hissed. “Boris!”

A branch snapped. A musky, animal scent thickened the air. The rustling came closer, relentless. Her heart pounded, palms sweaty, breath tearing through her throat. She spun in circles, desperate for a glimpse of golden fur.

And then she saw it — a narrow path she’d never noticed before, cutting through the trees like an invitation. Torn between searching for Boris and saving herself, Joyce gave a strangled sob and hurled herself onto it, running as fast as her sixty-something body could carry her.

Behind her, heavy footfalls pounded steadily and intently. It’s chasing me... oh God, help! Her lungs burned, her vision blurred. Poor Boris — had he already met his end? Would the neighbours simply shake their heads and mutter, Well, what did they expect? Two old fools wandering into the forest on their own...

Then, slicing through her panic, came a bark — bright, jubilant, impossible. A golden blur shot past her, legs flying, ears streaming like banners. For one wild second, she thought it must be another dog, younger, untouched by time. But then she saw the flash of green around its neck.

Boris's collar.

Joyce staggered to a halt, chest heaving. The lumbering, grey-muzzled companion she had coaxed from the cabin was gone; in his place bounded a creature radiant as sunlight, coat shimmering, muscles taut with youth.

Her fear tangled with disbelief. Had she imagined the thunderous pursuit? Was this another trick of age and shadows? But no — the jubilant bark rang again, echoing down the hidden path, undeniable.

And then the sound returned — deeper this time, heavier.

Branches cracked, brush tore, and a vast shape heaved into view: a brown bear, shoulders rolling like boulders, eyes fixed on her.

Instinct shrieked, run! But her legs refused. She stood rooted, bracing for the charge.

Boris wheeled back, radiant and unstoppable. He didn’t bark, didn’t growl. With a bound far too sprightly for his years, he leapt — not in fury, but in delight. Joyce gasped, certain the moment would end in claws and blood.

Instead came the wet slap of a golden retriever’s tongue smothering the bear’s muzzle in kisses.

Joyce’s knees buckled. She could only stare as Boris wriggled with joy, pressing against the beast as if greeting an old friend. The bear rumbled — not the snarl she had feared, but a deep, resonant sound closer to a purr.

Her mind screamed bear! while her eyes told another story. The giant dipped its massive head, nudging Boris with the tenderness of kin. Joyce released the breath she’d been holding, chest aching. Awe shivered through her, displacing terror.

The hidden path widened, sunlight breaking through the canopy in golden shards. The air grew sweeter, lighter; the heavy musk of the bear gave way to pine and wildflowers.

Ahead lay a clearing. A lake spread out like glass, fed by a waterfall spilling silver ribbons down a sheer wall of rock. Mist hung in the air, scattering rainbows that arched above the water. Flowers crowded the shore in a riot of colour, their petals nodding in the spray.

Boris bounded to the edge, plunging his paws into the shallows and splashing like a pup. Joyce could hardly believe this was the same dog who, moments earlier, had limped along the trail. The bear lowered itself beside her with a sigh, vast and immovable, like a gatekeeper granting her passage.

A movement caught her eye — sleek, tawny, familiar. An adolescent bobcat padded from the trees, muscles rippling, eyes bright. “Ginger?” she whispered. The cat paused, as if in answer, brushed against her hand in greeting, then rubbed its head against the bear before curling at the water’s edge, perfectly at home in this enchanted place.

Joyce sank onto the grass, her breathing steadying. Though astonishment surged through her, the clearing hushed her, pressing calm into her bones. The air itself seemed to smooth away the years.

She leaned back against the bear’s warm flank, the rise and fall of its breath steady beneath her. A rainbow arched across the mist, trembling, then slowly dissolved into air.

For one dangerous moment, she thought, I could stay. The air was softer here, her knees no longer ached, and Boris shimmered with youth, darting after every splash of light as if he’d never known age at all.

But then he bounded to her side, sodden and jubilant, tail whipping, his bark ricocheting across the rocks. He was not hers to keep. Robert’s face flashed in her mind — Robert waiting, Robert trusting her with his old companion.

The thought tugged her upright. This was not her place, not really. The forest had lent it to her for an afternoon, long enough to remind her that magic still existed. That was enough.

At last, she knew it was time to leave. Joyce lingered, gazing fondly at the bear and resisting the absurd urge to kiss its massive forehead. At the lake’s edge, Ginger sprawled in the sun, half-asleep yet watchful, as though he too sensed the parting. Boris dashed between them, planting wet kisses on each muzzle as though reluctant to let go.

Reluctantly, Joyce called Boris away. As she braced to rise from the grass, the bear extended a massive forepaw. Trembling, she slipped her hand into the thick pad of fur, and to her astonishment, the creature bore her weight with ease, steadying her until she stood.

Together, Joyce and Boris followed the hidden path back, light-footed, almost skipping with joy. Boris trotted ahead, proudly carrying sticks, dangling them from his mouth to tempt her into a game. Laughing, she gave in at last, tugging the sodden branch from his jaws for a spirited tug-of-war before flinging it as far as she could. Watching him tear after it with the exuberance of a puppy, Joyce was startled to find they had already reached the forest’s edge, almost home.

“How did we end up here, Boris? I meant to watch that path carefully so we could find it again — but you and that wretched stick stole all my attention.”

As they neared the cabin, Boris could not contain his newfound vitality — darting from bush to tree, leaping to her side, showering her hands with licks, his face split in the jubilant grin of youth. A wave of joy washed over Joyce, and she realised she was smiling so hard her cheeks ached.

Back inside, she filled Boris’s bowl and set the kettle to boil, her thoughts still tangled with waterfalls and rainbows. Carrying her coffee to the bedroom, she went to change her walking clothes — and froze at the mirror.

The face staring back was not the tired senior woman she had expected but something astonishing: skin smooth and radiant, jawline firm, eyes wide and unshadowed. Her hands, once veined and thinning, were supple again. She touched her cheek, half-afraid the vision might vanish — or worse, that tomorrow the mirror would demand it all back with interest.

A laugh escaped her — breathless, incredulous. “Boris,” she whispered, as the dog bounded in, tail whipping with impossible energy. “It wasn’t just you.”

Moments later, Boris erupted into the hallway, barking with delight. Then came the crunch of tyres on gravel.

Robert.

She heard the knock, followed by his familiar voice calling cheerfully, “Ready to hand over the old man?”

But when Boris bounded to the door, it was no old man who greeted him. The retriever leapt, tail a golden blur, tongue lolling with puppyish joy. Robert staggered back, laughing in astonishment.

“Joyce! What on earth — he looks ten years younger!”

Joyce stepped forward, her face flushed with nerves and something close to glee. Robert stared at her too, eyes widening.

“New haircut?” he asked slowly, still blinking at the sight of her. “Whatever you’ve done, it suits you.”

If anyone had asked her later where the path began, Joyce could never have marked it on a map. But she remembered its “coordinates”: three paces beyond the leaning pine that creaked like a door in the wind; a sharp turn where the air suddenly grew cool, scented with wild mint; and then a single step sideways, as if into her own shadow. That was where the undergrowth had parted, and the forest revealed its secret trail.

Posted Sep 19, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
01:07 Sep 22, 2025

She lost the pathway to youth? Oh, no!

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