Flan Favourite

Fiction

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with someone making a meal, a recipe, or a cup of tea (for themself or someone else)." as part of Food for Thought.

The kitchen counter looked like a culinary crime scene. Sticky pools of condensed milk, an army of cracked eggshells, and four failed, weeping, stubbornly runny flans mocked Gloria from the shadows.

It was 2:00 AM. Her lower back throbbed, her knees ached, and she wanted nothing more than to crawl into bed. Instead, she plopped onto a kitchen chair, buried her flour-dusted face in her hands, and let out a quiet sob.

Flan was her arch-nemesis.

If she couldn't master it by morning, Margaret would coast to her fifth consecutive victory at the Horn Hill Retirement Home annual bake-off. Gloria was sick to death of it. Last year, their best mate Simon had knocked the judges' socks off with a gorgeous Lemon Blueberry Tiramisu, yet somehow, the judges handed the golden spatula to Margaret’s aggressively average "classic" version. The crushing disappointment on Simon’s face had broken Gloria’s heart.

This year, she wanted justice. She wanted to sashay up to the judges' table, claim that floral winners' apron, and look Margaret dead in the eye. In your face, Margaret. But looking at the sugary soup on her counter, Gloria realized she might have to resort to praying Margaret simply forgot to wake up in the morning.

Defeated, Gloria picked up the phone and dialed her youngest daughter. Emma answered on the second ring, undoubtedly awake doing God-knows-what.

"It's always Margaret's baked goods winning anyway, Mama," Emma sighed, her voice soft over the line. "Why are you putting so much strain on your body over a silly competition? It’s two in the morning."

"I won't give up, sweetheart," Gloria said. "I need to prove to myself I can do something difficult and see it through."

There was a pause on the line. "Are you rushing the caramel?" Emma asked gently. "Maybe try not over-stirring the sugar. Just let it melt and caramelize slowly."

Gloria blinked, looking at the stove. "That... might actually work. Thank you, love."

"If it fails, promise me you'll go to bed, Mom. You're almost eighty years old!"

After hanging up, Gloria took a deep, steadying breath. Attempt number five. She lined up her ingredients like soldiers: large eggs, evaporated milk, sweetened condensed milk, vanilla essence, and a fresh pot of water for the crucial water bath.

She didn't rush. She watched the sugar transform into a slow, amber amber liquid without touching the spoon.

At 4:00 AM, the kitchen smelled of rich, warm vanilla. Gloria placed a plate over the baking tin, held her breath, and flipped it. With a gentle, hollow tap, the tin lifted away to reveal a perfectly set, shimmering, gorgeous flan.

Margaret didn't stand a chance.

The morning came and Gloria stood by the folding tables, her arms aching slightly from holding the heavy ceramic platter. Beneath the tin foil, her flan was a masterpiece—perfectly set, swimming in a flawless, amber pool of caramelized sugar.

She had arrived early, wanting to ensure she secured a prime spot on the table before Margaret could claim the center. She wanted Margaret to see it the moment she walked in. She wanted to watch the precise second Margaret realized her four-year streak was in jeopardy.

But by 9:15 AM, Margaret’s designated spot remained empty.

"Unusual," Simon muttered, shuffling up beside Gloria. He adjusted his glasses, peering over the empty space next to Gloria’s entry. "Margaret’s usually here by eight, marking her territory like a terrier. You think she got cold feet after hearing whispers about your caramel?"

Gloria let out a small, satisfied huff. "Please. Margaret would drag herself here on a stretcher before she let anyone else take that golden spatula."

Yet, as the clock ticked toward 9:30, a strange, restless energy shifted through the room. The judges, who usually stood around clipboard-in-hand looking terribly important, were huddled in a corner with Evelyn, the home’s director. Evelyn’s face was pale, her usual brisk, professional posture completely gone.

When Evelyn finally stepped up to the microphone, the feedback screeched softly, cutting through the chatter of the residents.

"Everyone, if I could have your attention please," Evelyn began, her voice trembling in a way that instantly made the room go cold. Gloria’s grip tightened on the edge of her platter. "I’m so sorry to inform you all... but the baking competition will not be taking place today. It has been postponed indefinitely."

A collective murmur broke out, but Evelyn raised a hand, a tear spilling over her lashes. "Early this morning, our dear Margaret passed away peacefully in her sleep. It was... just her time. Her heart simply decided it was time to rest. We ask that you all return to your rooms or the lounge while we assist her family."

The room collapsed into a heavy, suffocating silence.

Gloria felt the blood drain from her face. Her knees grew weak, the weight of the ceramic platter suddenly feeling like a lead anvil. *Let her forget to wake up.* The words she had whispered into the dark at 2:00 AM echoed in her head, striking her with the force of a physical blow. She hadn't meant it. It was just the bitter, exhausted rambling of an old woman jealous of a floral apron.

"Oh, goodness," Simon whispered beside her, his hand reaching out to steady Gloria’s elbow. "Margaret. I can’t believe it. She was just arguing with the gardener yesterday."

Gloria couldn't speak. She looked down at the tin foil covering her perfect flan. The triumph she had anticipated for hours turned into a sick, hollow knot in her stomach. There would be no sashaying. There would be no looking Margaret dead in the eye.

Slowly, the other contestants began gathering their unjudged cakes and pies, their faces somber as they whispered condolences. Gloria walked back to her little cottage in a daze, Simon walking quietly beside her.

Back in her kitchen, she set the platter on the counter. The room smelled faintly of vanilla from the early hours of the morning, a stark reminder of how high the stakes had felt just a few hours ago. How silly it all was.

She peeled back the foil. The flan was beautiful. It was the best thing she had ever baked in her nearly eighty years of life.

Gloria sat down at her small table, staring at it. She didn't feel like a winner. She just felt the quiet, sudden weight of how fragile they all were at Horn Hill.

"It's a beautiful flan, Glo," Simon said softly, pulling up a chair opposite her. He didn't ask her to cut it, and she didn't offer. Instead, they just sat together in the quiet kitchen, honoring the fierce, stubborn spirit of a woman who wasn't there to beat them today.

Posted Jul 10, 2026
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