The Champions: part 5 (finally)

Adventure Contemporary Fantasy

Written in response to: "Start your story with the line, “That’s the thing about this city…”" as part of City Living.

That’s the thing about the city at night--you never know what monsters are lurking--and not humans ones.

Real monsters.

Isaac dashed to the door of the burning building. It was blocked, purposefully. Someone had left up a barrier--a magic barrier. Whatever demon spawn had started this fire wanted the victims trapped. 

Wanted them dead.

But a crowd of people had gathered, some three hundred feet away--or further, Isaac couldn’t judge distances well, so some safe distance away--and most looked like they’d dressed for a fancy night out at the restaurant that was burning in front of him.

“They didn’t want any mortals hurt,” he said to Sia and Amethyst, who had followed him. Sapphire, B, and Adoree were further back, planning what to do next. 

“Mortals? Dude, we can die too,” Sia said. 

“I mean, Talentless people.”

“Like, Talent with a capital T? Because they must be good at something,” Amethyst mused. 

“Look, we need a way through the barrier. Half a ton of rubble, conveniently on fire, in front of the door, enchanted to stay there. What could possibly go wrong?”

“How do we know they didn’t escape? That they’re fine and outside, in the crowd?” Sia asked. 

“We have, what, three mind-readers here? Someone has to be able to find them.”

“Okay,” Amethyst said, pressing her hands against the hot stone of the restaurant wall. She closed her eyes and frowned. 

A few long moments passed.

“There are two of them in there. Their names are Emerald and Luna. They need to escape, badly, but all their exits are blocked off. Luna is barely conscious--smoke inhalation, I think? And she’s saying something I can’t understand. She’s so afraid that she’s going to die. Se wants Emerald to know that she only pretended to be better than her and that her pyrokinesis makes her feel like the enemy. She’s worried that if she dies, there won’t be enough Champions and countless innocents will be killed by the Pyline. And--oh my gosh--she’s fireproof, like a Pyline minion, and thinks that Emerald might die and it will be her fault, since she didn’t protect her. She’s so upset that someone named Franklin controlled her,and that he tricked Emerald in so many ways. The burn scars he gave her have faded off her skin, since she's immune to fire. And this Emerald girl is so afraid that she won’t be able to help anyone, since the flowers she was using to try to escape have all died and they’re hopeless--”

“I don’t need that much information, but thank you. Where are they?” Isaac interrupted. 

“Didn’t I already say that? The back kitchen. The floor of it, to be precise.” Amethyst smiled. “Man, a real rescue mission!”

“Hey, why are we trying to get in through the door? We’re magical! Isaac, use your earth power to move a tunnel under here--or move the wall? We should do it from the alley so we aren’t seen.” Sia barked out directions as they dashed around, trying to get in. They had less than a minute, Amethyst informed them, before the girls inside were close to death.

“B! Come over here! I need you to create a distraction. I heard you were good at shapeshifting. Can you do inanimate objects?”

“Yeah, just not for long.” The girl fidgeted with her robotic fingers. And this is gonna be in or on it, until I turn human.”

“Do a fire truck.”

“Okay!” she ran down the street and ducked around a corner. The fire department still hadn't arrived yet. What was wrong?

A loud siren broke the darkness, flashing lights filling the streets. A man in the crowd cheered--the restaurant owner. The crowd was hundreds of feet from the burning building, but Isaac still saw the relieved looks on their faces. 

Until the fire truck barreled down the road and hit the fire hydrant, sending a spurt of water up in the air, none of it reaching the restaurant whatsoever.

The people all shook their heads. Help obviously wasn’t coming. Or, helpful help.

But Adoree and B had been planning this. 

The graceful girl leapt from the tree she was hiding in, slamming her hands down on the stream of water. It began to freeze below her, the ice stopping the spray.

People watched in wonder as a teenage girl froze water below her hands, the liquid turning solid as she concentrated on the flow. 

But soon the water had frozen into an elegant ice sculpture, and wasn’t nearly useful for anything except damaging the pipe below the hydrant. 

But Sapphire smashed her way through the ice, sending a million shards into the air. They hit the ground, doing nothing.

The crowd let out a gasp.

With a wave of her hand, Sapphire created a bubble of darkness around them, preventing them from seeing the magic at hand. “Sorry I didn’t do that already.” She nodded at the bubble, which they could see through, the people inside protected from the danger and the magic. They slowly fell asleep, slumping on the road like it was a soft bed. 

“Now what?” Sia asked. 

“Now you come over here! I’ve moved a bit of wall!” Isaac shouted to them. “We should be able to fit! But there is some fire on the way.” 

The shards of ice, left on the ground after Adoree’s magic, began to float into the air, breaking through the warped window and melting into water, putting out some of the fire. There was now a path through the restaurant. 

The group stood outside the crack, looking at each other.

They nodded.

And they entered.

“Luna...what is it?” I begged her. The heat from the chains was stinging my skin, and I knew that it wouldn’t be long before it burned me. 

“I...I’m…”

“You’re what?”

“I’m...fireproof.”

“What?”

“Emerald, I’m fireproof, smokeproof, lavaproof--anything related to fire, it can’t hurt me. But...if one Champion dies--that’s you in this case--then the rest will start to lose their powers and fade away.”

“But...Celeste and Maya were Champions!”

“It takes a while. Have you noticed that Maya doesn’t use her magic anymore?”

“Huh, I’m about to die, I don’t think it’s on my mind.”

“It weakens. They weaken. You know why they’re on the Homeworld? Because magic is easier to use there.”

“I don’t find it harder on Earth!”

“Well, I’m sorry you haven’t been spying attention. But...The Pyline has killed off half the Talented people--there were whole cities and villages--all gone now. Then they thought Maya and Celeste and their friends were the Champions...and now us. It takes years for Champions to be born--well, not years, but almost everyone with Talents has manifested them already. You become a Champion when they manifest, you know. If you die... or if we somehow survive this but someone else dies...Well, it’ll be a while before there can be anyone to take our places. And… I don’t think we have much longer to wait. Wait any longer and...How long will it be before we’re all dead?”

“I don’t know,” I said. “Let’s hope we can get out, then. Or that someone wills save us.”

“Are you kidding me? No one's saving me.” 

I would have said something witty if the world hadn't started to spin and blur....

Isaac went in first, looking at the inferno around him. Only the water from the melted ice protected the path he walked along. All around him were flaming tables, chairs, and menus, but thankfully, no people. 

He looked at the wall of pure fire in front of him.

That was the entrance to the kitchen.

Isaac swallowed, looking at it.

“They’re alive,” Amethyst confirmed. “Just... not doing so well. Oh no...I don’t think that’s gonna heal well.”

“Great,” Isaac said. “I’m going in.” 

He reached for the wall of fire. 

“Isaac, don’t!” B shouted. “You are not making the same mistake I made!”

He pressed his hands against the burning rubble, pushing it out of the way with all his strength. 

He turned to them and smirked.

“Glad I packed fireproof gloves.”

He stepped into the kitchen drawing his stone blades. He turned around, the glare of the fire reflecting in his eyes. 

There! Two people--girls a little younger than him--lay on the floor, unconscious and held with glowing chains. They weren’t made out of molten metal, but a strange material that was hot but not on fire. Either way, they’d be dead soon.

Isaac swung his stone sword, slashing through the chains. The redhead one in the torn, stylish blue dress didn’t make a sound, but the blond one in the ragged clothing gasped as she fell to the floor. 

Isaac wasn’t sure what to do, but Amethyst and B raced into the burning room, Amethyst holding a long pole as a weapon and B screaming about the fire department finally arriving. 

Isaac picked up the blond girl carefully, dashing out as Amethyst picked up the redhead and B screamed something about the ceiling caving in. 

“Run!” Sia and Adoree shouted, Sia peeling her shadow off the ground and using it to hold up the crumbling, flaming rubble that would crash down and block the only exit any second. Adoree grabbed her ice shards and threw them at the fire, trying to extinguish it so the rubble wouldn’t fall, burning, to the floor. 

Isaac and Amethyst ducked around Sia’s shadow, B running after them, shouting something about the other Champions.

They dodged the flaming tables, falling ceiling bits, and general danger, leaving the minefield of the restaurant--

“MINEFIEEEEEEELD! ISAAC, THERE’S A MINEFIELD!”

“WELL, WE AREN’T CROSSING!”

Memories of a game he used to play with his sister and her friends field his head. More and more came as they snuck away under the cover of Sapphire’s shadow-dome. 

“I’m a Champion. You’re what, the brother of one?”

“I’m Maya's brother. And Maya’s gonna change the world.” 

Memories exploded outwards as they dashed into the trees, through the park, and out of the woods, carrying their unconscious burdens as they ran back to the sea. They’d awaken them on the shore. 

“Isaac, I’m so proud of you!”

“Well, I am, too. You’re a Champion!”

“But you’re my brother. And you just got an important position! We’ll save the world together!”

Isaac numbly laid the blond girl on the sand, his mind spinning as a familiar face danced in front of his eyes. 

“Isaac, why are you going?”

“To tell Mom and Dad about my promotion.”

“They know!”

“Personally, I mean.”

“Isaaaac…”

“It’s alright, Maya. I’ll be back in two days. Two days? That good? You’re thirteen now, you can be without your brother for two days.”

“Okay, but... I want you here.” 

“I’ll be back soon, I promise.”

“...Stay safe.”

In the end...it was his fault Maya was dead. 

He’d abandoned her.

And he knew there was nothing he could do, but…

Maya…

I woke up lying on the sand. The sky was dark black, and my eyes stung with smoke. My arms and legs were covered in burns, and I felt groggy and weird. 

Also, a boy was staring at my face, his brown eyes and brown hair looking almost black as the moonlight shone around his head like a halo. His face was familiar, though…

“Maya?” I asked.

The boy looked shocked.

“How do you know her name?”

“She saved me about a month ago. The fire-cat was gonna kill me.”

“Maya…”the boy shook his head. “It must have been someone else.”

What he said next made my blood run cold. 

“Maya died two years ago.”

Posted Mar 17, 2021
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March 23, 2021 15:45

I'm so confused about the new formsss pleasee helppppppppppp.

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March 23, 2021 19:54

Ok! You haven't came up yet, so you'll need the second one?

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March 23, 2021 22:26

omigod thanks

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March 19, 2021 14:21

SO good :)) I also summitted the form ;) heh heh...

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March 19, 2021 16:11

You're the last person to get in! That is, until I kill someone.

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March 19, 2021 16:49

yay! and lol

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March 19, 2021 18:41

Oh and also I made a form kinda like yours for a story(I hope you don't mind) Could you fill it out if not its totally fine. :)) https://forms.gle/JySK8iu9htvmYWif9

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March 19, 2021 19:20

Oh! Ok! I bet it's great

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March 19, 2021 19:26

aww thanks

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Upvotey Girl ✨
March 26, 2021 18:28

Dear hooman,

Heylooooo! As the Downvoting Police, I’ve gotta ask: Have you been downvoting recently/would you like me to upvote you a lil? (There’s way too many kind people who refuse to be upvoting, but frrr, if you’ve been stripped of your well-earned points, YOU’D BETTER TELL ME MISSY)

Love,
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March 26, 2021 18:41

I don't usually worry about my points. I don't have a lot anyway. But, here's some people you should help out:
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Several other people following me
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(I gave up spelling her name, here's her link, you figure it out)
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These are just people who have been seeming down lately, and Lone Wolf doesn't really care about her points, but if you can cheer them up in other ways, (like Lone enjoys friendly critiques instead of random upvoting and Isaac does as well) that will do even better!
May I ask why you didn't use your normal account and upvote there? That's what I do.

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Upvotey Girl ✨
March 26, 2021 18:43

Thank you!

Oh, haha, it’s just because I’ve already upvoted many people on my normal account, so it’s easy and fun to make a fresh account purely for upvoting. That way I have new stories to like, new people to follow, etc. :D

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March 26, 2021 18:44

Oh. Okay!

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March 17, 2021 23:12

I love the banter between everyone so much, lol

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March 18, 2021 00:38

Thank you!!

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Hey Em! Happy late birthday!!!! Sorrry, I didn't check reedsy yesturday.

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April 11, 2021 20:23

That's ok! Thank you!!!!!

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April 12, 2021 16:37

:)

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April 02, 2021 17:46

oml
CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
:'(
the action in this series is so good, GRATE JOB 🧀🧀🧀
oNtO pArT 6 ;)
I loved thisssssss <33

~ Amethyst

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April 02, 2021 21:19

Thanks!

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April 02, 2021 23:06

np! :]

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new storyyyynew storyyyynew storyyyynew storyyyynew storyyyy

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March 31, 2021 13:52

Nice!

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Meera Lakshmi
March 30, 2021 19:37

I posted a new story can you take a look? Thanks!

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March 30, 2021 22:10

Yes:)))

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Maddie's Closet
March 30, 2021 00:39

WILL THERE BE A PART 6??????? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET THERE BE A PART 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG Sorry I got a little excited and worked up there :>
Also, HOW exactly do we get Beethoven's left ear? He doesn't have any stories or points...

- Moon & Stars (Trying out a new nickname)

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March 30, 2021 15:07

There will be! If you want to be in it fill out form 2.

Comment on their comments.

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Maddie's Closet
March 30, 2021 18:03

Submitted!

I also want to die at some point, or turn evil...you choose!

Ok!
- Starlight

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March 30, 2021 22:10

Yay!

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Sunny 🌼
March 27, 2021 19:33

That ENDING omg.

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March 27, 2021 19:46

Really, it's like that??

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Sunny 🌼
March 27, 2021 20:26

It's great!

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March 26, 2021 08:48

Wait...., Maya 'died' or did she really die, and it that an imposter acting like her? like..... arh, I am over imagining XD

The! Story! Was! Terrific!

And, so like, do I have to fill the forms again? (eH, i FORGOT EVERYTHING AND LOST THE SCREENSHOTS, i AM DOOMED)

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March 26, 2021 11:11

Don't worry! I'll go looking for your stuff, it's in the old form! Yeah, you'd be... form 2!
Yes, the Maya thing is a confusing one.

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<inactive> .
March 26, 2021 05:53

If there’s a form for villains, can I be one?

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March 26, 2021 11:10

Well, I'm all out of room for heroes, but there's only one other villain, so I'lll find it!

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<inactive> .
March 26, 2021 12:49

Ooh, ok! Thank you!

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March 26, 2021 18:30

Here it is!

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<inactive> .
March 26, 2021 19:02

?

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March 27, 2021 12:56

Oops!

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Hey Em!!! Wow! Keep this series going<33
I just read all part 2-5 just today because I couldn't stop reading<333333
I adore this series! And I can't wait to know what happens next!

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March 26, 2021 11:09

Okay! Yeah, I need people to fill out the forms, and this next one needs a content warning for this scene I'm thinking about... NEW PROMPTS! Hard to write creepy fantasy drama stories for flower prompts.

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True, true, luckily the next prompts are up!
Hopefully one of them fit your next story!

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March 26, 2021 18:32

YES YES YES

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Meera Lakshmi
March 25, 2021 23:09

#StopDownvotingNow

Share this with 10 friends!

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March 25, 2021 23:10

Ok! Already did, but I'll find ten more!

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Meera Lakshmi
March 25, 2021 23:10

Haha ok!

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March 26, 2021 11:07

:D

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March 24, 2021 21:15

OML I AM SO SORRY I HAVENT READ THIS :[ I'LL DO IT ASAP

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March 24, 2021 21:18

This?

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March 24, 2021 21:22

the series :< im reading part 2 rn im so sorry

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March 24, 2021 21:24

Oh. It's ok!!!

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March 24, 2021 21:25

:[
which form is which? Idk which one I have to fill out XD

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March 24, 2021 21:36

The second one

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Sia S
March 23, 2021 06:36

NEWNEEDED NEWNEEDED NEWNEEDED NEWNEEDED

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March 23, 2021 19:54

?

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Sia S
March 24, 2021 03:47

NEW PART NEEDEDDDDD

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March 24, 2021 16:29

Oh. Fill out form 2!

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Sia S
March 25, 2021 01:05

Okay!

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Michael Hayes
March 22, 2021 19:41

Fabulous story, with great descriptions. Will there be a part 6?

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March 22, 2021 20:36

Yes.

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March 22, 2021 17:04

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRRRRRRR XD DX

But, WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW

THIS IS AWESOME!!!

Still, THE CLIFFHANGER IS KILLING MEEEEEEEEEEE

XD

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March 22, 2021 20:35

Here, fill this out!
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdEOSdw0KQnf9ia2vgHQ9MK9ZQuKEsSqM_PPizpqjmxK-4PbA/viewform
I need to fix the forms and while I was at it I added new stuff

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March 22, 2021 20:36

P.S:
If a person who isn't fearless is reading this, please don't use the link, it is solely for her role in the story and, like, three others. EXISTING CHARACTERS, PEOPLE! Thanks :)

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March 22, 2021 20:45

Okey dokey! :D

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March 22, 2021 20:51

Done!

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March 22, 2021 21:09

Yay!

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Sapphire 🌼
March 18, 2021 16:08

WHAT?

WHATWHATWHATWHTWHATWHATWHATWHATWHAT

OH MY LANTA OH MY LANTA OH MY LANTA OH MY LANTA

THE CLIFFHANGER

HOWWWWWW?

OMGOMGOGMOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

EMERALD YOU ABSOLUTLEY KILLED IT! One thing I loved the most was your descriptions of smoke and the shadow domes! but HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THE CLIFFHANGER

GIUSKRHGIUWKJGRIGJROG;WRIJGWRLKGJWRLKG.WJRGLWKRJGWRLKGLWRJLKGRJGWLRKJGLWLRKGJWRLKWRUIGLHWGIWRKGJWRGKWRJGWRKJLGWRHGLKJRWGRKJLRNWGKJRWNGLKWRJGNRWLK

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March 18, 2021 20:30

Oof...

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Sapphire 🌼
March 18, 2021 21:33

XD I like how short your response is

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March 19, 2021 00:07

I live on those.

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Sapphire 🌼
March 20, 2021 21:42

ah.

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March 22, 2021 11:29

Aha

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BacKstORy?
Butttttt omg that cliffhanger....
hHhhHHhHhHHhHhHh
Greatest job!

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March 18, 2021 20:30

This isn't a backstory-- and people are screaming over the cliffhanger so I'm afraid you'll have to wait a bit longer-- but don't worry It'll be done soon!

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XDDD YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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Sia S
March 18, 2021 03:13

omg.
Omg.
OMGGG.

no.no.no.no.no.no.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.no no.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.no no.no.no.no.no no.no.no.no.nono.no.no.no.no

UGHHHHH NOOOOOOOOMPLEASEEEEE

NOTACLIFFHANGERF

,NWB,NN SMN ,N ,MN,NMNBJGXWV VXWHG VYUSVXUYSWBXIUE2HDUIEIUGDGUYED2VUYCDDUGFCWDCWGIHCSUHJWSJHBCW

WAAAAAAAAAAH
WAAAAAAH

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH

OMG EVERYOTHING WAS BEYOND PERFECTOOOOOOO 😍 THE DESCRIPTIONS, FIGHT, ETC LOCED ITTTTFTT

PART. 6. NEEDED.

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March 18, 2021 20:29

You're the second person to say that!
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA

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Sia S
March 19, 2021 01:41

HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH

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March 19, 2021 11:00

Ok, the next aprt can't come out!
You know why?
Because I need to make three new forms, one for champions, one for good guys, one for bad guys, then sort you by weapon, relationship, hair color, etc. Just a warning. WARN EVERYONE ELSE TOO

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Sia S
March 19, 2021 12:24

DDDDDDDDDD:
...

*dies*

okay....

:((

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March 19, 2021 16:11

Hold on. Making form

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TJ Squared
March 18, 2021 00:13

oof, another great part like always!!!! How you doing?

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March 18, 2021 00:39

Good. Better than the story-me

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TJ Squared
March 18, 2021 03:08

that's good :)
do anything interesting?

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March 18, 2021 20:28

Found a cat

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TJ Squared
March 18, 2021 20:31

like on the streets?
Jade was missing a cat...i wonder if they match up...

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March 18, 2021 20:31

OH MY GOSH
Is it black with a white tail?

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Nainika Gupta
March 17, 2021 22:25

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg

AHHHH
this was amazing
character development? Gold star worthy
plot? AHHHHHH
every dang thing?AMAZING

can't wait for part 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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March 18, 2021 00:37

Thank you! Sorry you weren't in it, but I think you're screaming at your date? Totally oblivious about the rescue. Also, thank you for reading it!

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Nainika Gupta
March 18, 2021 00:44

of course! and ahah no problem
AND OML SERIOUSLY?!!
perfection XD

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March 18, 2021 00:45

THANKS!

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March 24, 2021 21:21

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March 24, 2021 21:24

Ok!
I'm worried

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Liling Wei
March 20, 2021 18:28

EMERALD A CLIFFHANGER ARE YOU KIDDING MEEEEEEEEEEEE????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I NEED THE NEXT PART PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

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March 20, 2021 20:59

Here! Fill this out!
(This is only for Lillian, random comment readers)
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Liling Wei
March 20, 2021 21:30

Answereddddddd tysmmmmmmmmm!!!!!

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March 22, 2021 11:29

:D

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