Elyse Lyon

Elyse Lyon – Editor

Put your book in expert hands! Editor for NYT+WSJ bestselling authors. Specializes in character-driven fiction. Kind, empathetic, precise.

Overview

My background is in literary fiction, though as an editor, I've primarily worked on genre fiction. I've edited manuscripts by numerous New York Times bestsellers, a few National Book Award winners, and a Booker Prize winner, among many others. I've worked on various other types of memoir and trade nonfiction, particularly business and self-help, and I have experience guiding authors through the self-publishing process.


I love character-driven novels and thoughtful writers driven by craft, ideas, or both. Particular interests include literary fiction, crime/mystery novels, historical fiction, and anything involving classical music. I strive to meet the needs of each project individually, listening to the client and working together to find the approach best suited to the manuscript at hand. I'm also happy to work on most types of subject matter: I'm always interested in hearing what authors have to say, and I'm not easily offended.


My superpower is The Chicago Manual of Style (I received my copyediting certificate from the University of Chicago Graham School). I'm an American living in Edinburgh, Scotland, so I have experience with both US and UK English. I've also lived extensively abroad, including in Germany, Vietnam, and eastern Europe, which can be useful when editing books set in far-flung locations.


I'm a Professional Member of the Chartered Institute of Editors and Proofreaders, and I'm also a member of the Editorial Freelancers Association. I'm a senior editor for my primary client, meaning that I work in a collaborative environment where editors learn from one another and constantly hone our skills. I also engage in regular professional development: currently, I'm pursuing a certificate in developmental editing for fiction, and I'm a judge in this year's IPNE Book Awards.


Please reach out; I'd love to hear from you!

Services
Fiction
Contemporary Romance LGBTQ Fiction Literary Fiction Mystery & Crime Psychological Thriller Romantic Comedy Romantic Fantasy Women's Fiction
Languages
English (US)
Certifications
  • Editing certificate, University of Chicago Graham School
  • Advanced Professional Member, Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading

Work experience

Self-employed

May, 2010 — Present
I've worked with large and small traditional publishers, academic publishers, self-published authors, memoir writers, and many other types of clients in my capacity as a freelance editor.

Portfolio

Variation: A Novel

Yarros, Rebecca

Montlake

In the Likely Event

Yarros, Rebecca

Montlake

The Answer Is No: A Short Story

Backman, Fredrik

Amazon Original Stories

No Lie Lasts Forever: A Thriller

Stevens, Mark

Thomas & Mercer

Scorched Skies (Way of Wings)

Mellow, E.J.

Montlake

Jackknife (The Shivers collection)

Hill, Joe

Amazon Original Stories

Letter Slot (The Shivers collection)

King, Owen

Amazon Original Stories

Night and Day in Misery (The Shivers collection)

Ward, Catriona

Amazon Original Stories

The Indigo Room (The Shivers collection)

Jones, Stephen Graham

Amazon Original Stories

Trap Line: A Short Story

Zahn, Timothy

Amazon Original Stories

The Knight and the Butcherbird: A Short Story

Harrow, Alix E.

Amazon Original Stories

There's Something About Mira: A Novel

Dev, Sonali

Lake Union Publishing

Unknown Caller (We Could Be Heroes)

Unger, Lisa

Amazon Original Stories

Cover Story

Lacey, Rachel

Montlake

Bad Reputation

Barry, Emma

Montlake

The Reunion Dinner (Busybodies collection)

Sutanto, Jesse Q.

Amazon Original Stories

Staged (Busybodies collection)

Cosimano, Elle

Amazon Original Stories

A Classic Case (Busybodies collection)

Thompson, Alicia

Amazon Original Stories

The Naturalist Society

Vaughn, Carrie

47North

Pike Island: A Thriller

Wirt, Tony

Thomas & Mercer

A Very Bad Thing

Ellison, J.T.

Thomas & Mercer

My Temptation: Kingston Lane, Book 1

T L Swan

Brilliance Audio

The Elias Network (Caspian Anderson)

Gervais, Simon

Thomas & Mercer

Friends with Secrets: A Novel

Gunderson, Christine

Lake Union Publishing

Where Butterflies Wander: A Novel

Redfearn, Suzanne

Lake Union Publishing

Lies and Other Love Languages: A Novel

Dev, Sonali

Lake Union Publishing

The Promise of Tomorrow

Taylor, Mary Ellen

Montlake

Blood Mountain (Jodi Luna Book 2)

Valdés, Alisa Lynn

Thomas & Mercer

Made with Reedsy
The Paper Boys (The Brent Boys)

Clarence, DP

This Impossible Brightness: A Novel

Klagmann, Jessica Bryant

Hurt for Me

Levy, Heather

Almost Surely Dead

Akhtar, Amina

Please Tell Me

Omer, Mike

Role Playing

Yardley, Cathy

Just Stay Away

Wirt, Tony

Shadow Sister: A Novel

Marcott, Lindsay

Runaway Groomsman

Quinn, Meghan

The Fires: A Novel

Björnsdóttir, Sigríður Hagalín

When the Rain Ends

Taylor, Mary Ellen

Elyse has 23 reviews

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Jacob M.

Jacob M.

Feb, 2025

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I recently had the pleasure of working with Elyse as my book coach and I can't recommend her highly enough. In just one hour, she provided invaluable insights that transformed my entire approach to my novel-in-progress. Elyse helped me see my project from a fresh perspective, identifying elements...
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Elyse L.
I'm so thrilled to hear your enthusiasm is back, Jacob! It was a real privilege and pleasure to work with you, and I'm wishing you wonderful things with your book.
Dan H.

Dan H.

Nov, 2023

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You can stop looking now. Your search for a copy editor ends right here. As a debut author, it was really important to me that I worked with someone who was not just an extremely experienced copy editor, but someone who got me, got my story, and believed in my project. In Elyse, I got that in ...
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Elyse L.
I absolutely can't wait to work with you again, Dan! So thrilled to have had the chance to contribute to your debut, if only in my small copyeditorial way :-)
Harris K.

Harris K.

May, 2025

She is good to work with. She likes to finish the tasks on time.
Mark J.

Mark J.

Apr, 2025

It was my first time working with a professional editor and I was skeptical about shelling out my own money to have someone read my manuscript. I've had friends who are both writers and professionals in the industry read my work, but no one has been as helpful or as inspiring as Elyse. She is an ...
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Elyse L.
It was an absolute joy to work with you, Mark, and I'm dying to see the next draft! Tremendously glad that you found my help valuable.
Miles B.

Miles B.

Apr, 2025

Elyse is able to see mistakes and correct them in a deep and lasting way. The suggestions she made about my manuscript have improved the work immensely. I recommend her fully and enthusiastically. Elyse is an editor who is sensitive to your language and its rhythms and in concert with this has he...
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Elyse L.
It was a pleasure to work with you, Miles! I’m so grateful to hear that you felt I was able to make suggestions that were sensitive to your use of language—something that was particularly important...
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