Elyse Lyon

Elyse Lyon – Editor

Let's start a journey together! Editor for NYT+WSJ bestselling authors. Specializes in collaborative editing for character-driven fiction.

Overview

If you're seeking an editor who will walk beside you, helping shape your manuscript and refine your skills every step of the way, you're in the right place. I do everything from coaching to proofreading, but my most popular service is what I call a coached manuscript evaluation—a collaborative, bespoke approach that blends developmental work with coaching and can be shaped to fit most authors' needs and budgets.

My background and experience are split between literary fiction and genre fiction, and I particularly love it when the two intersect. I've edited manuscripts by numerous New York Times bestsellers, a few National Book Award winners, a Booker Prize winner, and some Hugo winners, among others.

I love character-driven novels and thoughtful writers driven by craft, ideas, or both. Particular interests include literary fiction and crime/mystery novels. I strive to meet the needs of each project individually, listening to the client and working together to find the approach best suited to the manuscript at hand. I'm also happy to work on most types of subject matter: I'm always interested in hearing what authors have to say, and I'm not easily offended.

I received my copyediting certificate from the University of Chicago Graham School and studied developmental editing with Club Ed. I'm an American living in Inverness, Scotland, so I have experience with both US and UK English. I've also lived extensively abroad, including in Germany, Vietnam, and eastern Europe, which can be useful when editing books set in far-flung locations.

I'm an Advanced Professional Member of the Chartered Institute of Editors and Proofreaders, and I'm also a member of the Editorial Freelancers Association. I'm a senior editor for a primary client, meaning that I work in a collaborative environment where editors learn from one another and constantly hone our skills. I also engage in regular professional development: currently, you'll find me devouring one craft book after the other.

Please reach out; I'd love to hear from you!

Services
Fiction
Contemporary Romance LGBTQ Fiction Literary Fiction Mystery & Crime Psychological Thriller Romantic Comedy Romantic Fantasy Women's Fiction
Languages
English (US)
Certifications
  • Editing certificate, University of Chicago Graham School
  • Advanced Professional Member, Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading

Work experience

Self-employed

May, 2010 — Present
I've worked with large and small traditional publishers, academic publishers, self-published authors, memoir writers, and many other types of clients in my capacity as a freelance editor.

Portfolio

Making Space (The Time Traveler's Passport)

Kuang, R. F.

Amazon Original Stories

Variation: A Novel

Yarros, Rebecca

Montlake

In the Likely Event

Yarros, Rebecca

Montlake

The Answer Is No: A Short Story

Backman, Fredrik

Amazon Original Stories

Made with Reedsy
Silence Broken

Foster, Jute

Two Dogs

Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
For a Limited Time Only (The Time Traveler's Passport)

Shepherd, Peng

Amazon Original Stories

No Lie Lasts Forever: A Thriller

Stevens, Mark

Thomas & Mercer

Scorched Skies (Way of Wings)

Mellow, E.J.

Montlake

Jackknife (The Shivers collection)

Hill, Joe

Amazon Original Stories

Letter Slot (The Shivers collection)

King, Owen

Amazon Original Stories

Night and Day in Misery (The Shivers collection)

Ward, Catriona

Amazon Original Stories

The Indigo Room (The Shivers collection)

Jones, Stephen Graham

Amazon Original Stories

Trap Line: A Short Story

Zahn, Timothy

Amazon Original Stories

The Knight and the Butcherbird: A Short Story

Harrow, Alix E.

Amazon Original Stories

There's Something About Mira: A Novel

Dev, Sonali

Lake Union Publishing

Unknown Caller (We Could Be Heroes)

Unger, Lisa

Amazon Original Stories

Cover Story

Lacey, Rachel

Montlake

Bad Reputation

Barry, Emma

Montlake

The Reunion Dinner (Busybodies collection)

Sutanto, Jesse Q.

Amazon Original Stories

Staged (Busybodies collection)

Cosimano, Elle

Amazon Original Stories

A Classic Case (Busybodies collection)

Thompson, Alicia

Amazon Original Stories

The Naturalist Society

Vaughn, Carrie

47North

Pike Island: A Thriller

Wirt, Tony

Thomas & Mercer

A Very Bad Thing

Ellison, J.T.

Thomas & Mercer

My Temptation: Kingston Lane, Book 1

T L Swan

Brilliance Audio

The Elias Network (Caspian Anderson)

Gervais, Simon

Thomas & Mercer

Friends with Secrets: A Novel

Gunderson, Christine

Lake Union Publishing

Where Butterflies Wander: A Novel

Redfearn, Suzanne

Lake Union Publishing

Lies and Other Love Languages: A Novel

Dev, Sonali

Lake Union Publishing

The Promise of Tomorrow

Taylor, Mary Ellen

Montlake

Blood Mountain (Jodi Luna Book 2)

Valdés, Alisa Lynn

Thomas & Mercer

Made with Reedsy
The Paper Boys (The Brent Boys)

Clarence, DP

This Impossible Brightness: A Novel

Klagmann, Jessica Bryant

Hurt for Me

Levy, Heather

Almost Surely Dead

Akhtar, Amina

Please Tell Me

Omer, Mike

Role Playing

Yardley, Cathy

Just Stay Away

Wirt, Tony

Shadow Sister: A Novel

Marcott, Lindsay

Runaway Groomsman

Quinn, Meghan

The Fires: A Novel

Björnsdóttir, Sigríður Hagalín

When the Rain Ends

Taylor, Mary Ellen

Elyse has 35 reviews

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mattthew N.

mattthew N.

Oct, 2025

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Elyse is an exceptional story editor. Writing is such a personal journey, and yet, in the end you need to share so much at each stage with someone you trust to get it right. Elyse guided me to find the emotional layer and voice to help the story find a life of its own. Her edits were always on po...
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Elyse L.
Thanks so much for the kind words, Matt! I absolutely loved working with you, and I'm so proud to have played a small part in bringing your story to life.
Jacob M.

Jacob M.

Feb, 2025

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I recently had the pleasure of working with Elyse as my book coach and I can't recommend her highly enough. In just one hour, she provided invaluable insights that transformed my entire approach to my novel-in-progress. Elyse helped me see my project from a fresh perspective, identifying elements...
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Elyse L.
I'm so thrilled to hear your enthusiasm is back, Jacob! It was a real privilege and pleasure to work with you, and I'm wishing you wonderful things with your book.
mattthew N.

mattthew N.

Dec, 2025

Elyse Lyon is amazing. She takes the story in and fully understands the intents and goals of the writer. She is gracious and generous in her knowledge of story plots and shares everything about the story draft with a light touch. She doesn't just deconstruct--she gives you a path forward. I can ...
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Elyse L.
It's always a privilege to work with you, Matt! Thank you!
Lloyd M.

Lloyd M.

Nov, 2025

Working with Elyse has been wonderful. She has a keen eye for what works and doesn't, and gives insightful, practical advice and feedback. She changed how I looked at my manuscript and helped me identify the key areas to improve. I was flailing around before working with her, and now I feel confi...
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Teresa W.

Teresa W.

Nov, 2025

This is my second time working with Elyse and I certainly hope it's not my last. She has the uncanny ability to pinpoint exactly what you need to do and frame it in a way that is supportive and motivating. That's a special talent. She creates the opportunity for me to become a much better auth...
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Elyse L.
You're such a joy to work with, Teresa! Thanks for making my day with this lovely review. Can't wait for your books to come out!

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