Carolyn stopped working due to a physical disability and started writing short thrillers, speculative fiction, and horror stories. At the age of 50, she heard her first accepted story narrated on a podcast. She lives in Harrisburg, Pennsylvania in the USA.
I encourage and welcome any suggestions that will make my stories better. Do I need more metaphors, less adverbs? If you would like any helpful critique on your story, please let me know. Thank you