Carly Hayward

Carly Hayward – Editor

Editor with 15+ years experience (specialties: romance, fantasy, & sci-fi). Contact me to build your team and bring your book to light!

Overview

I am a developmental editor specializing in genre-fiction, including but not limited to romance, paranormal, erotica, fantasy, and YA. I will be your book’s best friend.

I have worked in the publishing industry for over 15 years, including at a major publishing house, a literary agency, a small press, and an indie publishing house that helps indie-authors. I am also a co-host on a writing advice podcast.

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"I can’t rave about Carly enough! She performed a quick, yet thorough, read-through of my novel and created six pages of talking points. Then we skyped so I fully understood her points and recommendations. Together, we crafted a battle strategy for revisions—it was so efficient that the actual edits only took a week! And looking at the old draft versus the new one… wow. Her edits added a whole new dimension to my story, without sacrificing my original vision for the novel. If you’re hesitating on purchasing her work, don’t! After three years of querying, it took my newly revised manuscript just three months to find a home with a literary agent."

-Rebecca Thorne, author of This Gilded Abyss and Can't Spell Treason Without Tea

"I met Carly the same day I saw Mad Max Fury Road, so she'll forever be linked in my mind to Furiosa--someone you absolutely want on your side! With Carly's guidance, I turned my pretty okay novel into something so much more, something alive. I always felt she loved my characters as much as I did--she simply got what I was trying to do, and helped me do it. I have no doubt that my book (and hopefully many to come) are vastly improved by her involvement."

-Kim Alexander, International Bestselling Author of The Demon Door Series

"I had such a wonderful experience working with Carly—so fabulous that I worked with her twice—on two different manuscripts, both I adored and knew were close but not quite right. She was able to see my vision and pinpoint exactly what was falling flat, what needed more development, what needed more consistency, and what needed more balance.

Better yet, she explained each of the issues in a clear way that made sense and inspired me to make changes in a smart way, to expand some threads and cut others and dig deeper into certain characters. Her notes were so thorough and helpful and well organized and well thought-out, that I was super excited to edit—those are the best sort of notes.

Carly is super professional, prompt, organized, concise, and so smart! I learned so much working with her, all of which has carried me through to later projects. I would totally recommend her to anyone."

-Felicia Grossman, Author of Appetites & Vices

Services
Fiction
Fantasy LGBTQ Fiction Romance Science Fiction Young Adult
Languages
English (UK) English (US)
Certifications
  • EFA (2015-Present)
  • B.A. in English (Magna Cum Laude)
  • Member of CWIP (2017-Present)
  • Revise & Resub Co-founder and Editor (2017-Present)
  • ShoreIndie Editor (2017-2018)
  • Pitch to Publication Editor (2015 - 2016)
  • ACES (2023-Present)

Work experience

Self-employed

May, 2014 — Present
I offer editing services for those preparing to publish their book. If you have taken your book as far as you possibly can, I will be your "second pair of eyes." My services include coaching calls, manuscript evaluations/critiques, and developmental editing. I love diving into your story to help you find your voice and bring out the best version of your book. Every time we work together your writing will improve, some say it is like taking a personal writing course. Reading has always been my passion, and helping authors bring wonderful books to other readers is my contribution to the literary world. My preferred genres are Adult Romance (historical, suspense, contemporary, paranormal, erotica), Adult Sci-fi, Adult Fantasy, YA (Sci-fi, fantasy, contemporary), and MG (Sci-fi, fantasy). I do not currently accept Horror or Non-fiction.

Boroughs Publishing Group

May, 2017 — Jan, 2020 (over 2 years)
I edit various romance titles for Boroughs Publishing Group. Including erotica, contemporary, and historical titles.

HarperCollins Publishers

Oct, 2012 — Aug, 2014 (almost 2 years)
I supported the editors of the Avon/William Morrow Imprint

Sterling Lord Literistic

Nov, 2011 — May, 2012 (6 months)
Assisted Literary Agents where needed, including but not limited to: reviewing the slush pile, recommending manuscripts to the agents, crafting materials for publishers.

Portfolio

Damsels and Dinosaurs

Jones, Wren

Wren Jones

Editorial Assessment
The Tenfold Tenants

Belknap, E.V.

Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
This Gilded Abyss

Thorne, Rebecca

Rebecca Thorne

Editorial Assessment
He’s her ticket into high society…Banking heiress Ursula Nunes has lived her life on the fringes of Philadelphia’s upper class. Her Jewish heritage means she’s never quite been welcomed by soc... read more
Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
Beyond Those Gilded Walls

Taylor, Jessica S.

Jessica S. Taylor

Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
Editorial Assessment
Light Beyond the Glass (The Hidden Flames Artifact)

Harrowick, K. J.

Portal World Publishing

Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
Bloodflower (The Hidden Flames Artifact)

Harrowick, K J

Portal World Publishing

Editorial Assessment
The Beauty of Fragile Things

Hartley, Emma

Satin Romance

Developmental Editing
Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Fireline

DeCapite, Anthony

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
The Memory Visit

Jenny Lynn Lambert

~Editor's Pick~All a person needs to escape the bombed-out cities and tormenting thirst of NorCoast is a fifteen-minute Memory Visit. Seventeen-year-old Rain, however, is not looking for an es... read more
Developmental Editing
Speed bumps are there for a reason. Especially after barreling through the genesis of a relationship. But when rock drummer, Jake, and his career-driven girlfriend, Louana, blow through stop s... read more
Developmental Editing
FROM NOW ON...Piper Goldhirsch has returned home for the holidays after being on assignment for two months in war-torn Syria. Still heartbroken over the way things ended with ship captain, Jac... read more
Developmental Editing
NOTHING COULD BE MORE PERFECT...UNTIL IT ISN'TPiper is one loved-up woman after her romantic getaway with Jack on Catalina Island. Given all they've been through, she's amazed their love has t... read more
Developmental Editing
HAPPINESS HAS A PRICECaptain Jack Spencer owns and runs a whale watching company, Ahoy, Matey. When his business takes off, a jealous rival wants him and his company gone. Jack has no idea the... read more
Developmental Editing
After a quick but memorable fling, Louana Higgins leaves the drummer for The Spades exactly where he belongs: a tour bus. The junior producer knows she's dodged a bullet. Because, despite his ... read more
Developmental Editing
Flip the Beat

Roxanne D. Howard

WHEN YOU WISH UPON A STARMolly Ivers thought she found Prince Charming, but without a devilishly sexy accent, and six months ago she gave into their undeniable attraction. But the swarm of eve... read more
Developmental Editing
ANYTHING YOUR HEART DESIRESCameron MacKay dedicated his life to atoning for an unforgivable mistake by becoming a surgeon beyond compare. During the Crimean War, he meets Nightingale nurse Eli... read more
Developmental Editing
"Kim Alexander's The Sand Prince is a thrill ride of fantastical proportion. Can hardly wait for the next wild installment." David Baldacci, New York Times and International Best Selling Autho... read more
Developmental Editing
Alannah’s world is torn apart after her mother dies in a tragic car accident. Since then, she has struggled to fit in with her classmates at school. Just days before her twelfth birthday, Alan... read more
Developmental Editing
A brand new standalone with an HEA from Amazon Bestselling Romance Author Mickey MillerEvaI've always been the good girl.Until one night in Tijuana.When the most gorgeous man in the bar struck... read more
Developmental Editing
WOMEN SHOULD BE...The end of the Crimean War brings Victoria Thorne home to face a society that frowns on women with brains, education and experience, especially one who could be a physician. ... read more
Developmental Editing
Beyond Today

L. Simpson

THE PRICE OF FORGIVENESSWhen Hannah meets Howard, the elusive best man in her friend's wedding, Hannah is instantly drawn to the damaged alpha because they share a connection that makes her he... read more
Developmental Editing
Pure

kim alexander

‘A unicorn walks into a bar….’ That is not a joke. Look, I’m a bartender, I have nothing to do with the xenos. I don’t care if it’s an elf or a vampire--as long as they don’t bother me, I stee... read more
Developmental Editing
Dark Rooms

Sionna Fox

NO SAFE WORDSWomen beg Wes Oliver to dominate them in darkness. In the light, he’s finally getting his life back on track. College is priority number one—until he finds his new professor is th... read more
Developmental Editing
...the huge dark bulk of Gardenhour rose at his back…at once a blessing of family and security, and a curse of loneliness and lies… A dangerous man with a dark and tragic past An innocent girl... read more
Developmental Editing
International bestselling author, Kim Alexander presents book one of the epic fantasy saga that brings action and adventure to a new level.Two worlds, bound by magic, divided by a door.On the ... read more
Developmental Editing
The Demon Door can be opened...but the price is deadly. Rhuun, the half-human heir to the demon throne of Eriis, has found acceptance among the humans on Mistra. He even found love with the te... read more
Developmental Editing
Who will win his hand in marriage...and his love?Lady Eleanor de la Tour’s life turns upside down on her wedding day. She's ordered to wed the new earl, to whom the king has given her betrothe... read more
Editorial Assessment
Whether it's the equipment contract for the biggest college football program in the state of Texas or the championship coach who got away, Nina Montrose refuses to be defeated. Being a winner ... read more
Developmental Editing
Running the place. Like a boss.Lindy Mason is happy to be back at Lincoln High School. As principal, she’s faced with the tough decision on how to handle a bullying case involving Maddie Myers... read more
Developmental Editing

Carly has 3 reviews

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Ryan G.

Ryan G.

Dec, 2025

I truly appreciated my time working with Carly. Upon my initial reach out to her, I had given her the details on what type of editing it was I was searching for. And not only did she point me in the right direction with specifics on what it was that would help the most, but she also provided me w...
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Bryce H.

Bryce H.

Jun, 2022

Had responsive with thought-out suggestions and answers whenever I had questions. Her assessment of my work had a number of suggestions that aided me and helped to give me a new perspective on my work that I'm very thankful for and am using to fix my writing even now. However, occasionally when r...
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llljj H.

llljj H.

May, 2022

Carly's editorial assessment was thorough, and she went above and beyond to not only help improve my story, but to help me become a better rider. Her responsiveness, including providing amazing advice after the project had been completed when I presented a new proposed story outline, was invaluab...
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