Terri Bischoff

Terri Bischoff – Editor

I am a developmental editor with over 10 years experience specializing in crime fiction. I also have interest/experience in LGBTQIA+ and YA.

Overview

I’m a developmental editor with over ten years of experience specializing in crime fiction, LGBTQIA+, and women’s lit. Occasionally I do YA and query letters. I have been an acquiring editor for over ten years. At my previous position, I acquired and developmentally edited between 36 and 40 book per year. Before I entered publishing, I owned a mystery bookstore for five years and had over ten years working in bookstores.

In a developmental edit, I will point out problems with the plot, pace, character motivation and give you guidance how to beef up or cut the fat. I look for word choice, repeated phrases, and sentence structure. I work electronically, and will make track changes and comments in the document as well as an overview letter explaining what you need to work on and what is working well. While I don’t do a line edit, I will point out grammatical issues along the way.

In a manuscript evaluation, I look for major structural and content issues. This is not as intensive as a developmental edit. Consider it as a last look before submitting to agents and editors.

I can usually turn projects around in 1-2 weeks.
Services
Fiction
LGBTQ Fiction Mystery & Crime Thriller & Suspense
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Midnight Ink

Sep, 2009 — Jan, 2019 (over 9 years)

As an acquiring editor, I read and selected submissions for publication. After acquiring a title, I did developmental edits with the author to make their work stronger and in line with the market. I was responsible for acquiring 36-40 books per year.

Portfolio

Winner of the 2018 Anthony Award for Best First Novel Winner of the 2017 Agatha Award for Best First Novel Also a Lefty Award Winner and a Barry Award-Nominated Title The Surprise Hit of the Season! Actress Dayna Anderson's Deadly New Role: Homicide Detective ... read more
"An unnerving and suspenseful novel, House. Tree. Person. is McPherson's best yet."—Karin Slaughter, New York Times and international bestselling author The body found in a muddy grave across the street is just the latest horror threatening to tear Ali McGover... read more
Some people just need killing. Marlena Altizer Durst lives in her husband's shadow. He controls her every move—what she wears, the food she eats, and the friends she's allowed to make. If she disobeys, there are...consequences. And he has all the power. To out... read more
Lauren's job as a cold case homicide detective is her life. And life just got complicated. Lauren Riley is an accomplished detective who has always been on the opposite side of the courtroom from slick defense attorney Frank Violanti. But now he's begging to h... read more
Murderabilia

Carl Vonderau

When you're the son of a serial killer, you can never escape your past. William MacNary was eight years old when his father went to prison. Since then, he's carefully built a life as a family man and a private banker for the wealthy. He tries to forget that hi... read more
"Readers will delight in watching Copperman's literal-minded hero grapple not only with unpredictable and nuanced human thinking, but with logic from beyond the grave."—Kirkus Reviews "Is my husband having an affair with a dead woman?" For Samuel Hoenig, the p... read more
A troubled codebreaker faces an epic plot reaching back through centuries of America's secret historySalem Wiley is a genius cryptanalyst, courted by the world's top security agencies ever since her quantum computing breakthrough. She's also an agoraphobe shac... read more
Perfect for fans of Laura Levine and Stephanie Barron, Elizabeth Blake’s Jane Austen Society mystery debut is a mirthfully morbid merger of manners and murder.In this Austen-tatious debut, antiquarian bookstore proprietor Erin Coleridge uses her sense and sens... read more
The Consultant

Tj O'Connor

Terrorism hits Main Street AmericaWhen a rogue CIA consultant goes AWOL from his Middle Eastern post in response to his brother’s plea for help, he arrives just in time to witness his brother’s murder. For years, Jonathan Hunter and his brother Kevin Mallory h... read more

Terri has 10 reviews

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Patrick R.

Patrick R.

Apr, 2024

Terri gave an excellent review and provided outstanding suggestions that were very valuable. My low grade on responsiveness is that he didn't respond to say he had received the initial payment and was working on my project, or respond to my messages that I had submitted a revised letter to review and that he had received it, or respond to my message inquiring how the project was going. With n...
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Jim J.

Jim J.

Oct, 2023

Terri provided a high-level story critique that shone a spotlight on areas of the manuscript that confused her (past relationships in the series not clear to a new reader in the current story), left her questioning a character's motivation, or additions/subractions that she thought could increase tension and focus the story. Her suggestion were spot on, and after incorporating them, I am sure ...
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Kevin L.

Kevin L.

Oct, 2021

Quite frankly, I was expecting more. I received about a page and half of comments about my book. Certainly my expectations may not have been completely expressed but for one of the higher priced developmental editors on this site, I expected more. Terri is very pleasant and I have no doubt that she is very good at what she does and suspect that my book might just not have interested her enough.
Marshall S.

Marshall S.

Sep, 2021

Terri was detailed and comprehensive. She provided much for me to think about. We disagree about some of the book, which is helpful. She thought "there were too many storylines and too many characters for the reader to follow." She praised what she liked. Early on an image won "Gorgeous sentence! This is the kind of description we need rather than short bursts of info." We'll see where my rew...
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Grace H.

Grace H.

Jul, 2021

Terri gave wonderful feedback for my young adult murder mystery. She broke it down chapter by chapter, pointing out inconsistencies and issues. Her following advice and suggestions were very helpful.

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