They Call Them Ghost Lights

Fiction Mystery Suspense

Written in response to: "Write a story from the perspective/POV of a non-human or fairy tale character sharing their side of the story." as part of Once Upon a Time....

We learned long ago how to carry light without being seen.

Before lanterns, before glass and wick, we learned it in our hands. We learned how to cup a flame, so it did not startle, how to walk uneven ground without drawing attention, how to move through the dark without being mistaken for danger. Even in life, we were careful. Careful women do not survive long here unless they learn when to be quiet.

They called us many things. depending on the year and the need. Healers when children were sick. Witches when the sickness took them anyway. Liars when the men came home wounded and would not heal. We did not argue. We learned early that truth spoken aloud does not always protect you.

When we were murdered or died, they thought the work would stop. It in fact grew stronger.

The mountains remember who tended them. The ridges remember who bled on their stones. We walk where the ground still knows our names, carrying what little light we are allowed, watching for the ones who wander too far or fall where no one will hear them call out.

We do not leave the high places. We do not cross into towns. We follow rules older than blame.

Sometimes they see us.

They give us other names now: lights, orbs, foolishness, tricks of the dark. They argue about distance and reflection and gas that rises from the ground. It does not matter. A thing does not have to be understood to be useful.

We move the way breath moves through the tress. Slow. Uncertain. Never in straight lines.

On the night she returned, we noticed her immediately.

She did not arrive like the others do-loud with questions, cameras already raised, hearts pounding with hunger to witness something strange. She came back quietly, the way women do when something has been taken from them, and they are not ready to speak of it yet.

The house she bought sat just close enough to the ridge to hear the wind change. The land belonged to her ancestors long ago. This land was familiar to us. We felt her step onto it and pause, as if something in her body recognized the ground before her mind could catch up.

She stood on the porch longer than necessary that first night, arms folded against the cool night air, watching the dark without expectation. She did not ask for anything. That alone set her apart.

We circled wide that evening, keeping our distance. We always do at first.

She slept poorly. We could feel it in the way the house breathed- shallow, restless, like someone who had spent too long listening for footsteps that no longer came. Grief has a sound. So does relief. Often, they arrive tangled together.

In the days that followed, she learned the paths again. The shortcut through the trees. The bend in the road where the mountain drops away without warning. She did not walk like a visitor. She walked like someone trying to remember what her body once knew.

When she saw us for the first time, she did not run.

She was standing at the edge of her yard that overlooked the ridge, a cup cooling in her hands, when our light slipped over the trees. Just one of us moving low and slow, careful not to startle. Her breath caught-not in fear, but in something familiar. Recognition, perhaps. Or grief finding a place to land.

She did not lift her phone. She did not speak.

She watched as we danced around the tree line on the ridge, like we were playing a silent song for her that only she could feel. She quietly turned and went back to the house, as if afraid that looking too long might be inviting us in.

We have learned to respect that instinct.

She grew up here and knew the stories of the Brown Mountain Lights. The stories had been part of her long before she knew how to separate truth from warning. She had heard then folded into conversations, lowered voices, laughter that stopped too quickly. She had never seen the lights herself, only the way people looked when they spoke of them.

That night while lying awake in bed, the stories came back to her uninvited. She did not speak of them out loud. She didn't need to.

She seen them often and would simply stand a little longer, her shoulders loosening, her fear easing into something like gratitude. She would leave her porch light on, not for us, but for the ones who still might need it.

Some women are born carrying the work forward, whether they are told its name or not. The mountain knows them. The dark makes room.

We recognized her before she recognized herself.

There was a familiar way she held still, the same patience in her watching. The same care in what she chose not to touch. We have learned to know our own by these small things. Blood remembers what words are not allowed to keep.

Some nights, we pass her house without slowing, our ghostly lanterns low, our attention turned toward the deeper places where the ground gives way and voices carry poorly. Other nights, we linger just long enough for her to feel it- the soft shift in the dark, the sense that something familiar has moved past without touching.

She never follows.

Instead, she learns the small, necessary acts. She learns which neighbors turn their lights off too early. Which bends in the road collect silence. Which stories are meant to be listened to, not repeated.

She finds an old box tucked away in the closet she had almost painted over. Inside it are things that would mean nothing to most- dried leaves pressed flat with care, a scrap of cloth darkened by smoke, a wick saved long after the lantern it belonged to was gone. She does not ask why she keeps them. She simply places them where they will be found again.

When the lights appear now, she stands without fear. She nods once, the way women do when acknowledging work already understood.

We pass over her home, our lanterns steady. We do not invite her to walk with us.

Not yet.

Some women tend the living. Some tend the lost.

They mistook our quiet for weakness. They always do.

They called us witches, healers and liars when we lived, lights when we die-anything but what we were. Women who stayed. Women who walked the long way. Women who learned early that survival often meant being overlooked, working in the spaces no one thought to watch closely.

That's why we are still here.

We were never meant to be seen. We were meant to last.

Long after our names were softened into stories, long after our hands were mistaken for light, we remain-tending what is broken, guiding what is lost, carrying forward the work that does not end simply because its unnamed.

And we continue- along the ridges of the mountains, through the quiet places, carrying the light where it is still needed.

Posted Dec 21, 2025
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David Sweet
15:33 Dec 27, 2025

Melanie, this is beautiful. It feels like an opening chapter to a much larger story. Who is SHE? I want to know more. I can feel the anticipation build. I want to know more about the items in the box. I hope you are writing more, and I want to read it.

Being a fellow Appalachian, I can feel the rhythm of your words ans know exactly what you're talking about. I love the weaving of the folklore into your work.

I live just on the other side of the mountains in the TN foothills. I can't wait to read some of your other stories. Please let me know if you are making this a longer narrative. I'd be glad to be a beta reader for you. My email is davidmsweet.author@gmail.com.

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Melanie Lee
00:32 Dec 28, 2025

Thank you so much! This truly means a great deal to me. I'm glad the sense of anticipation and place came through, especially to a fellow Appalachian. This piece is a part of a larger thread I've been slowly exploring, and I'm grateful to hear it resonates. I appreciate your kind offer and encouragement.

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