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Melinda waited under the bus shelter, watching the rain fall in straight silver strings. It was the kind of rain that made everything look as if it were erased and rewritten at the same time. She didn’t really care about getting wet; she just needed a minute before walking into another day where she felt like the least important person in every room.

She wasn’t lonely, exactly. She’d just gotten good at making herself small. Invisible sometimes. Easier that way. Less risk of disappointment. Less chance of being the one people forgot to include, forgot to ask, forgot to see.

A sudden splash cut through the quiet rhythm of the rain.

A guy jogged under the shelter, shaking water out of his hair like a dog. His jacket dripped everywhere. He was tall, a little awkward, and completely out of breath. Then he caught her eye and gave her a crooked smile — the kind nobody gives to a stranger unless they’re either brave or unusually kind.

“Bad day for good hair,” he said, pushing wet strands off his forehead.

It took Melinda a beat to realize he was talking to her.

Her.

Not someone behind her.

Not someone more obvious.

A laugh escaped before she could catch it. “Honestly? My hair’s never had a good day.”

He grinned. “Same. It’s like having a pet that hates me.”

She snorted — actually snorted — and immediately covered her face. He laughed with her, not at her. The rain softened around them, as if giving them space.

“Del,” he said, holding out a hand, still catching his breath.

“Melinda.”

He said her name like he actually planned to remember it. Not the polite echo people give when they’re already looking past you. Something warm flickered in her chest — the shock of being noticed.

“You always wait here?” he asked, shifting his weight, still breathless.

“Most mornings,” she said. “It’s on my way to work.”

“Then I guess this shelter just got more interesting.”

Her cheeks warmed. She wasn’t used to being a person someone wanted to talk to. She wasn’t used to spark-like moments, or feeling like anything could happen on an ordinary rainy morning.

A bus pulled up, briefly spraying cold mist through the shelter’s opening, and he stepped back automatically, positioned like he’d done this a hundred times. “You ever get tired of it?” he asked suddenly.

“The rain?”

“No. Feeling like everything’s a repeat.”

She blinked. She wasn’t expecting a real question this early in the morning. “Every day,” she said quietly. She didn’t know why she was honest, but she was.

He nodded, like he understood more than she meant to say.

When the rain thinned to a drizzle, they stepped out together. Their footsteps matched, almost too easily. He asked where she worked; she pointed to the fourth floor of the building across the street.

“Then I’ll see you around,” he said, not as a possibility — but like a fact.

She hoped he was right.

She slipped into her meeting late. Usually, she’d aim for the back corner — her invisible girl seat. The safest place not to matter. But something about Del’s easy warmth still buzzed faintly under her ribs, like a small battery she didn’t know she had.

She didn’t hide this time.

She sat in the second row.

The meeting started to blur into its usual rhythm — people talking over each other, the loudest voices winning by default. A report she’d corrected last week was being presented with her fix quietly absorbed by someone else.

Normally, she would’ve let it slide.

She had a whole lifetime of letting things slide.

Of shrinking.

Of letting people talk over her until she felt erased.

But her hand went up before she could talk herself out of it.

“I think there’s an error,” she said. She heard her own heartbeat in her ears. “The updated numbers change the outcome.”

The room shifted. People actually turned and listened.

Her supervisor blinked, surprised, then nodded. “Walk us through it.”

She did — calmly, clearly, even though her palms were sweating. When she finished, someone murmured, “Good catch.” Someone else held the door open for her on the way out. Tiny things. But tiny things add up when you’re used to zero.

She almost texted someone to tell them she’d spoken up.

But who would she tell?

And why give the moment away?

It felt like something was beginning.

She wondered if Del would’ve smiled hearing about it.

Probably.

He seemed like the type who believed in small wins, even for strangers.

She caught herself thinking about the shelter — the way he’d made space next to her like she belonged there.

That wasn’t nothing.

She heard the news on her way out of the building.

A cyclist.

Hit by a delivery van.

Early morning.

Sudden.

A few people stood near the elevators whispering a name.

Del.

The world didn’t crash. It rearranged itself — like furniture being moved when you weren’t looking. Something inside her felt… different. Not broken, not even shattered. Just shifted. Quietly, heavily.

She had known him for minutes.

But maybe that was enough for a beginning.

And enough for an ending too.

She stepped outside. The rain had stopped, but the pavement still shone like it was holding onto the memory of it. She stood there until the air steadied around her.

She didn’t cry.

She didn’t crumble.

She just felt the truth of it — that someone she barely knew had nudged her life in a direction she hadn’t expected.

Maybe some people don’t stay long.

Maybe they don’t need to.

Maybe the point isn’t how long they were there, but how quickly they shifted the ground beneath you.

She walked to the crosswalk and pressed the button with more certainty than she’d had yesterday. The light changed, and she crossed without hesitating.

The next morning, she arrived at work early. She didn’t think about the corner seat anymore. She sat at the table. She opened her notebook. She answered questions without apologizing first.

People noticed.

Not dramatically—

but enough.

Later, during lunch, she sat by the window looking out over the street where the rain had fallen the day before. She wondered if anyone else had known Del the way she had — which was to say, barely at all, and yet still enough to feel changed.

Maybe her life didn’t need a grand beginning.

Maybe a spark was enough.

Maybe a moment was enough.

She didn’t know why his smile had felt like the start of something she didn’t get to keep.

But she did know something had shifted inside her — something that wasn’t going back.

Her relationship with Del had lasted minutes.

Her relationship with herself — the version of herself she was becoming — might last much longer.

And that was enough.

More than enough, actually.

Posted Nov 24, 2025
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Tricia Shulist
15:59 Nov 29, 2025

What an interesting story. It incorporated both the hope and happiness, and the sadness of something lost—the beginning and end of a new relationship, and the beginning of a new relationship with Melinda, herself. Thanks for sharing.

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Elizabeth Hoban
18:27 Nov 29, 2025

How a simple random encounter can change everything? Very well-written and I assumed that of course this would be a romantic story tied up neatly with a bow. I was so wrong. It's the story of someone finding their own voice that was always there from the start - so inspiring. (My only question is the reference to the "stool" in the title- I can be daft - did I miss something?) Still doesn't deter from the wonderful story!

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Lily Finch
02:40 Dec 03, 2025

Thank you, Elizabeth—I really appreciate your thoughtful read. I like shaking the expectation that every encounter has to resolve into romance; sometimes the real turn is inward. As for the stool, it’s a small visual anchor in the original draft—the moment she sits still long enough to actually confront herself. I may clarify that in a future version, but I’m glad the heart of the piece came through for you.

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Mary Bendickson
20:16 Nov 24, 2025

Angels among us.

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Saffron Roxanne
20:24 Nov 29, 2025

That's how I took it. Like that was his purpose.

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Lily Finch
02:42 Dec 03, 2025

Thank you, Saffron. Yes—that’s very much the undercurrent I hoped people might feel. Not an angel in the literal sense, but someone whose presence nudges a life in the right direction, then steps back. I’m glad that came through for you.

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Lily Finch
02:43 Dec 03, 2025

Thanks, Mary. Thank you—that’s exactly the space I was writing into. Not halos or wings, just those brief intersections where someone shows up at the right moment and leaves you changed. Sometimes that’s all an "angel" needs to be.

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Lily Finch
02:43 Dec 03, 2025

Thank you, Mary—that’s exactly the space I was writing into. Not halos or wings, just those brief intersections where someone shows up at the right moment and leaves you changed. Sometimes that’s all an “angel” needs to be.

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Miri Liadon
16:30 Dec 16, 2025

Nice story. I like how it shows small victories, and how much those matter. It's interesting how you followed the prompt three times over, with the start and end of a relationship between Del and Melinda, and the start of Melinda's new relationship with herself, as someone more than just invisible.

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Lily Finch
18:00 Dec 16, 2025

Hi Miri, Thank you for your kind words and for noticing that I demonstrated the prompt three times over, always involving Melinda. Invisibility is a cruel punishment.
Thanks for reading.
Lily

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Frank Brasington
14:02 Nov 30, 2025

Sorry if this sounds ignorant but why would a guy talking to her make her speak up in a meeting? I'm just trying to understand why. I'm fairly socially inadept.

I like the story. I hope you have a lovely day

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Lily Finch
19:32 Nov 30, 2025

Hi Frank,
Thanks so much for reading and for asking the question. In the story, it isn’t that the man “makes” her speak up—it’s more that his brief attention breaks the pattern she’s stuck in. That tiny shift gives her just enough space to choose her voice in the meeting. The change comes from her, not from him.

I appreciate you taking the time to comment, and I hope your day’s treating you kindly too.

Lily

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Frank Brasington
19:47 Nov 30, 2025

Thank you for getting back to me. I get it now with a rereading. The man at the bus was just the butterfly that caused the typhoon.

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Sorrel E.K.
17:56 Nov 29, 2025

this is INSANELY good. melissa is so relatable, and even though her change in behavior could have been a bit more gradual, this entry will stick with me for a while. that quote, "but tiny things add up when you’re used to zero," actually made me pause and go "WHOA" out loud. i'm not even joking when i say i emailed that part to myself so i can remember it. this is amazing work; thank you for sharing your admirable craftsmanship with us!

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Lily Finch
02:44 Dec 03, 2025

Thank you so much — this means a lot. Melissa isn’t an easy character to steer, and you’re right: her shift could stretch out more in a longer draft. I’m glad the line about “tiny things” landed with you; sometimes those small truths carry the most weight. I’m genuinely honoured you kept a piece of it for yourself. Thanks for the thoughtful read and the kindness.

Lily

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