Mina Monroe moved to Los Feliz, California with a dream, a cracked iPhone, and a certainty that she would be seen. She always believed in a glow, not the hazy Los Feliz sunrise filtering through her dusty balcony doors, but the sharper, brighter one she chased like so many young girls online. At twenty-six, she was still “aspiring,” to be a Hollywood actress, which in Los Feliz meant waiting tables at Mess Hall and posting daily TikToks from her tiny one-bedroom apartment on Sunset Blvd. Her apartment sat above Café Europa, a coffee shop on that sun-bleached street lined with her favorite, periwinkle blue jacaranda trees. Filming herself walking with purple petals stuck to her sandals and the caption “fresh and candid” - while her Calico cat, Scribbles, watched from the windowsill like a quiet, unimpressed audience. Mina always spoke to her followers online. She spoke to them while making coffee or drinking a Macchiato, while applying make-up or while jogging near Griffith Observatory and rehearsing lines she rarely got to perform for anyone in person.
Endlessly scrolling through Instagram and Facebook where other younger girls bragged about “skincare routines” She lived for the comments, the emoji hearts, the validation that she was still young enough, pretty enough, close enough for the big break that would make all her struggles worth it.
She was obsessed with the process; she never wanted the scrolling to stop. She tracked her worth in views and saves, in comments that flickered between praise and indifference. Casting calls came and went. They wanted a “Fresh face” a “Timeless look” or a “Classic Beauty” She started hearing the word “Aging” in everything, casting notes, lighting and make-up critiques, even in the way the sun hit her skin at noon.
Acting was a career choice born from her days on the high school stage as Mina was a closeted introvert who tried to overcome her fear of any type of exhibitionism.
“Visibility is opportunity,” she said trying to convince herself, tapping her phone screen with a glossy nail. “If they stop scrolling, you’ve already lost.”
Then the ad found her at 12:08 a.m.
It was direct. It didn’t pretend to be anything other than a solution. It bled into her internet feed like a slice from the future:
EFF Mask (Eternal Face Forward) 22 hours a day. Maximum results.
“Rewrite your biology, wear it 22 hours daily for maximum cellular reset,” the video promised.
A medieval-looking contraption of matte-silver alloy and smoked glass, ornate scrollwork around the Cheekplates, like something a knight might have worn if knights had been obsessed with collagen with only their eyes exposed through narrow slits.
Eternal Face Forward, patent-pending spectrum therapy; Yellow for face and skin repair. Ultraviolet Red for memory retention. Green for youthful body regeneration. Blue for calm spiritual awakening. The woman in the video removed the mask after a time-lapse and revealed a face so flawless it didn’t look entirely real. Mina refused to believe it was Ai.
The price was four months of tips and a credit card she swore she’d pay off “next month.” Mina watched it ten more times. It cost more than her rent.
She bought it anyway.
48 hours later, the box arrived in heavy brown cardboard with spongy black foam and packaging that smelled like ozone and wet stale bread. Mina unboxed it on her kitchen counter, as her cat Scribbles rubbed her forehead and tail on her ankles. She held the mask up to the window. It was heavier than it looked, cold, foreign and alien but somehow alive. When she lifted it, it seemed to recognize her, warming slightly in her hands.
She slipped it on.
The first day felt like theater. She posed in the mirror, eyes wide and luminous through the narrow slits, lips hidden behind the rigid lower plate. She set the dial to yellow. A warm, almost holy light flooded the inside, bathing her face in gold. Her skin tingled. She posted a cryptic reel: “Leading Lady, 22 hours to forever.” The likes poured in.
The instructions were simple, almost ritualistic:
Wear for 22 hours daily.
Remove only for charging.
Consistency ensures transformation.
The first time she put it on, she laughed.
“This is insane,” she said, filming herself, her voice echoing oddly inside the mask. “Like - this is literally insane.”
Her followers loved it.
“Obsessed”
“Is this real???”
“Drop the link omg”
At first, it felt like a game.
Yellow light in the mornings – face and skin repair. It bathed her face in warmth, a gentle, artificial sunrise.
Red light in the afternoons - memory retention. She told herself it made her sharper, quicker, more present to never forget a single follower.
Green at night - body regeneration and strength.
Blue - when she felt anxious and needed to Zen out, which was often.
The mask sealed around her face with a soft click. It smelled faintly metallic, like rain on concrete. Breathing was odd and different - She had to learn how to breathe again, difficult but not impossible.
She adjusted.
She filmed.
She posted.
Her followers spiked.
Hygiene became secondary if not negotiable.
Showering meant removing the mask longer than recommended, so she shortened it, then skipped it. Dry shampoo. Baby wipes. Perfume layered over skin and clothes. She stopped going to work.
By week four, she only removed the mask for the mandatory two-hour charging cycle. The mask’s manual was clear: Remove for exactly one hundred and twenty minutes so the internal battery could replenish from the wall outlet. Those 120 minutes became sacred. She would peel it away, set it on its charging cradle like a sleeping lover, and stand in front of the bathroom mirror touching her own bare face with trembling fingers. She could breathe freely. She could smile without resistance. She still felt human. She treasured those hours more than anything. Her only tether to a world she was beginning to forget. She would stand in the shower with the tepid water cascading over her long hair and body, then into a puddle of hope down the drain. She could feel the air on her cheeks again. Wearing the EFF Mask, she couldn’t smile without the metal pressing back. She couldn’t cry. She treasured those minutes the mask was removed, the way other people treasured holidays or birthdays.
At week 12, Cooking felt unnecessary. She ordered delivery, then forgot to eat. The mask dulled her appetite or maybe she simply stopped listening to her body. Takeout containers grew mold. The apartment decaying all around her.
Scribbles began meowing more.
“Not now Scribbles!” Mina said one afternoon, adjusting the mask’s settings. Yellow flickered to green, then to blue. The blue light pulsed softly, supposed to induce a calm spiritual awakening. Instead, it made her feel like she was someone else, someone false, floating just outside herself. It filled her head with high metallic echoes that made her teeth ache and her thoughts scatter like startled birds. She kept it on anyway. It was the first time she began to question her identity.
At night she lay on the unmade bed and stared at the ceiling she could no longer see clearly. The mask had begun to feel like her real face. Her real skin was the one underneath - soft, weakening, treacherous. She whispered to the darkness, “I am still human, right?”
At twenty-four weeks, days began to blur. Scribbles stopped eating. Mina stopped changing the litterbox long ago. Scribbles pawed at her leg.
“Later,” she said, nudging him away without looking down.
Her friends texted less and less. At first, they were curious.
“Can I see the EFF the Eternal Face Forward Mask in person?”
“Are you okay wearing that thing all day?”
She sent videos instead, with the dictate, “It’s an investment, you don’t understand - the industry is changing. I’m staying ahead of the curve.”
“Staying ahead of what curve?” one follower asked.
Mina didn’t reply.
Scribbles stopped meowing and Mina noticed the quietness before she noticed him. Her followers dropped off one by one. Then the group chat went silent, next, the individual texts stopped.
“Mina, you good?” became “Mina?” then became nothing. She didn’t notice. She was too busy chasing the perfect red setting for memory retention. She wanted to remember every second of this transformation so she could post the before-and-after someday and go viral. The blue light clicked on automatically at 2 a.m., the supposed spiritual setting. Instead of peace it brought a looping internal monologue: You are becoming the future. You are becoming eternal. She believed it until the words started to sound like a threat.
Youth required sacrifice. “Twenty-Six Forever” became her mantra.
One morning she found Scribbles curled behind the couch, cold and stiff. She told herself she’d bury him later, after the next green-light cycle. She never did. The body stayed there, a small furry accusation.
Week 36. The summer heat arrived brutally and early. Los Feliz baked. Inside the mask the air grew thick, suffocating, recycled and vacuous. Sweat collected at the seal around her jaw and dripped down her neck in salty rivulets. She refused to remove it for even one extra minute. The green light hummed against her throat, promising regeneration. She adjusted the ventilation settings, but relief was always temporary and never satisfying. She told herself the tightness in her chest was just the price of staying young.
The apartment began to shift around her. Dishes stacked in the sink, then hardened into something permanent looking like Gaudi's de la Sagrada Familia Cathedral. Clothes gathered in corners like unfinished sentences. Dust settled on everything, a restlessness that marked weeks, months and time itself. The sunlight that once felt cinematic now felt hostile.
“Beauty is discomfort,” she posted, “form over function” recording herself as condensation fogged the inside edges.
The heart emojis all but disappeared and comments slowed.
“Are you okay?”
“This is getting weird…”
“Unfollowing, sorry.”
She stopped reading them.
Mina’s, self-imposed prison of isolation had become as ineluctable as sun and rain. The two hours without the mask became sacred and fragile. She used them to sit on the floor, breathing deeply, touching her face as if confirming it still existed. She avoided mirrors. She avoided everything that might demand action. “I’ll deal with it during charge time,” she said to no one, switching the mask to green. Regeneration. She told herself she would take care of things tomorrow.
What arrived the next day was an eviction notice that was slid under her door.
She stepped on it, the paper crinkling beneath her heel. She picked it up slowly, the mask humming softly as if in response.
“30-day Eviction Notice,” it read.
Her rent was months overdue. She tried to remember the last time she had paid it. The red light flickered on automatically, sensing her attempt to recall, but the memory came fragmented, incomplete. She recalled having a job once as a waitress.
“It’s fine,” she said, “I’ll fix it.”
She never did.
Her video posts changed. Less talking. More staring.
The mask reflected light strangely now, its once-smooth surface now etched with faint distortions, something growing beneath it. The glow from within was harsher, the Yellow burned brighter. The Red pulsed erratically. The Green a wet acid. Blue, when used, felt like she was weighed down in self-flagellation.
The next afternoon, during her two hours of freedom, she forced herself to stand in front of the mirror. Her face looked…wrong. Not exactly aged but distorted. The skin along her cheeks had taken on an unnatural smoothness, stretched too tight in some places, uneven in others. Her eyes seemed larger, as if everything around them had receded. She touched her face, and the sensation lagged behind the movement.
“No,” she whispered.
The mask, charging on the counter, emitted a soft chime. Time was almost up. She looked at it. Then at herself. Then back at “IT”. Slowly, she hesitated but finally reached out.
“You have to commit,” she told her reflection as she attempted to seal it back on. “Transformation takes sacrifice. Twenty-Six Forever”
The words sounded rehearsed, like lines from a script she no longer believed in, a life she no longer recognized.
The apartment smelled of neglect, unrecognizable like a foreign smell of an intruder. The notices on the door multiplied, warnings of FINAL EVICTION NOTICE, legal language she didn’t fully process.
The jacaranda trees shed their blossoms again. “Didn’t that already just happen” she asked herself?
On week, sixty-four of continuous wear - she caught her reflection in the cracked bathroom mirror. What she saw made her knees buckle.
The mask had begun to feel like her real face. Her real skin was the traitor underneath - soft, weakening, temporary. She whispered again into the darkness, “I Am Human”
Her face had sunk where the mask pressed hardest. What she saw made her stomach drop. Cheekbones sharp as knives. Deep red grooves circled her eyes permanently scarred from the ultraviolet bleed. Lips cracked thin, pulled back in a permanent grotesque half-smile. She told herself the tightness in her chest was the price of staying twenty-six forever.
Inside, Mina sat in the dim glow of her mask, the colors cycling like a windmill loop.
Yellow. Red. Green. Blue. Optimize. Enhance. Maintain. Preserve.
She tried to remember what it felt like to simply exist without improvement. The memory refused to come as hard as she tried, she couldn’t remember. On the last day, she removed the mask. The battery warning flashed, Charge. Charge. Charge.
She ignored it.
“I need the break,” she muttered. “I’m well beyond that now.”
The mask flickered. For a moment, all the colors merged into a blinding, white-hot glare.
For the first time since unboxing the mask, Mina sat on the floor in the two-hour silence and cried without filters, without the lights, without an audience. The tears burned the raw seams where metal had fused to skin.
She understood at last.
Technology had sold her a perfect, luminous lie: that youth could be purchased, preserved, optimized, worn like armor. It had turned her into a battery-powered relic, eyes wide and empty, scrolling through a life that was no longer hers. The dependance that she believed would provide youth and beauty, provided only loneliness and ugliness. Calls and posts were turning into silence. Silence turned into absence. Absence turned into unknowable.
The absence of being. Of being human.
Mina stared for one long, trembling moment.
She touched her cheek. The flesh felt alien. The eviction notice sat under dust on the kitchen table. Her phone buzzed with a rare new follower request. She didn’t reach for it. Her phone continued to buzz with notifications from a life she no longer wanted.
But for the first time in months, Mina Monroe was no longer performing.
She was simply there.
She straightened herself and stood up, walked to the balcony door, opened it and as the hot Los Feliz morning light poured in, holding the mask she walked outside. Below, the street started to awaken with normal life, talking, laughing, cars passing, dogs barking. Real faces. Real skin. Real time. Neighbors gossiping. Someone pointed. A woman gasped at the sight of her face.
Mina didn’t hide. She didn’t run back inside. She simply stood on the balcony, eyes closed, letting the real world see her, broken, aged, imperfect in her pained human face.
In the quiet of the morning, Mina stood there, bare faced, breathing in the hot dry air, feeling the sun on her ruined skin for the first time in months. The grooves around her eyes stung as she looked down at the mask one last time. The ornate silver shell had promised eternity and delivered only pain and isolation. The lie brought all the resentment and anger that had built up and she said, “I’m sorry” and hurled the EFF Mask over the railing.
It tumbled through the air, catching the sunlight for a brief, almost serene moment, before smashing onto the concrete below with a sharp final metallic crack. The internal lights flickered one last time, yellow, red, green, blue, then died of its own mortality. She tried to remember her own face in her imperfect presence, made more real, more human than any mask’s promise.
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This is a compelling and unsettling concept, and it holds attention all the way through. Mina’s descent is clear and believable, and the EFF mask works well as both a literal device and a strong metaphor for performance culture and self-erasure.
I especially liked the sensory detail—the apartment, the decay, the heat, the mask itself. Those elements really ground the story and make the transformation feel physical, not just psychological.
At times the piece could benefit from tightening—there’s some repetition in the middle sections that slightly softens the impact. Sharpening those passages would make the progression even more powerful.
The ending lands well. It feels earned, and the image of her stepping into the real world—imperfect but present—is strong.
Overall, a vivid and disturbing story with a clear message that comes through effectively.
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Marjolein,
You are spot on as usual. I agree with your tightening the middle section. I struggled a bit to include details in the story and at the same time edit them so as not to be repetitive. But the story went longer than I intended as i kept going down the rabbit hole of description. I went back in and did some tightening! Thanks again.
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