Two Men I Trust In A Storm

Written in response to: "Set your story before, during, or right after a storm."

Coming of Age Happy Inspirational

The wind hit the cruise ship like a hammer.

Julius Turner braced himself against the railing of Deck 10 as the Pacific churned below, the once-calm turquoise now a furious slate gray. Lightning webbed across the sky in white jagged flashes. The air tasted like metal and rain. Even the deck beneath his sneakers thrummed with the deep, guttural vibrations of engines pushed to their limits.

His twin sister, Juliet, tightened her hoodie strings with trembling fingers.

“Dad said this weather was supposed to stay north,” she muttered, shifting her feet wider to counter the tilt of the floor as the ship rocked. “Why does our luck always choose chaos?”

Julius managed a laugh—tight, shallow.

“We flew six hours to visit him on his ‘relaxing’ job,” he said. “I’m starting to think the universe doesn’t want him to relax.”

Another crash of thunder made Juliet flinch.

This storm wasn’t supposed to happen. This cruise wasn’t supposed to be anything more than a casual three-day jaunt—Julius and Juliet visiting their adoptive father, Captain Nathaniel Turner, who had recently taken command of the S.S. Mariner Queen after deciding that retirement was “for men who didn’t like adventure.”

Captain Turner liked adventure.

Which is precisely why, after leaving the Navy, and then spending two decades piloting cargo vessels from Shanghai to Seattle, he shocked everyone by sliding effortlessly into cruise-ship captaincy.

His reasoning:

“Retirement is boring. Cruise ships have buffets and theaters. That’s adventure with air-conditioning.”

But he didn’t plan on hurricane-force winds.

Julius looked at Juliet’s pale face and nudged her shoulder. “C’mon. We should head inside. We’ll get in trouble if Dad finds us out here.”

They turned toward the door—only to nearly collide with a familiar lean, gray-haired figure in a windbreaker.

“Thought I’d find you two knuckleheads hiding up here,” Uncle Martin said, raising his voice to compete with the howling wind. “Captain’s children always think they’re invincible during storms.”

His blue eyes twinkled with an ease that only a lifetime at sea could produce.

Juliet practically collapsed into his arms.

“Uncle Martin,” she groaned, “tell me the ship isn’t going to sink.”

Martin chuckled, patting her shoulder. “Darlin’, I’ve been through storms that would make this look like a kiddie splash pool.”

Julius exhaled in relief. Martin always had a way of making danger feel like a mild inconvenience. And he had earned that confidence—he’d been Captain Turner’s first mate in the Navy, then on cargo ships, and now enjoyed retirement by sailing on the cruises Turner captained “just to keep him honest.”

“What’s the word?” Julius asked. “Dad said he was heading to the bridge.”

“Already there.” Martin jerked his head toward the interior corridor. “And he’s steady as a rock. Don’t worry: in a storm like this, there are two men I trust—one who walks on water and one who drives the ship.”

Juliet cracked a smile. “You’re talking about Jesus and Dad?”

“Exactly.”

Another vicious sway made them stumble. Martin grabbed the door handle.

“Now come on. I’m not dragging you into the dining room soaked like wet cats.”

They followed him in, letting the warm, dry corridor swallow them. The blast of cold air outside faded behind the heavy door, muffled once it thunked shut. The ship still shuddered with each wave, but at least inside, it didn’t feel like they were about to be flung into the sea.

I. THE BRIDGE

Captain Turner stood at the center of the bridge like an oak tree rooted in the storm.

His uniform coat hung on the back of the captain’s chair—Turner preferred mobility during emergencies. He wore a navy-blue sweater instead, sleeves pushed to his elbows, eyes sharp and alert despite the exhaustion beginning to line them.

He steadied himself as the ship lurched again, giving crisp, calm commands:

“Bring her four degrees starboard—slow adjustments. Do not fight the swells head-on.”

“Aye, Captain.”

“Check radar again. Any sign of a break in the storm?”

“Nothing yet, sir.”

He nodded once, lips pressed together.

Turner had weathered storms in the Navy that made headlines. He had personally maneuvered cargo vessels through typhoons off Okinawa. But something about having his children on board—not as adults to whom he could explain procedures, but as his kids, the lives he raised and protected—made this storm feel heavier.

He glanced at the rain-blurred windows, then closed his eyes briefly.

“Hold steady,” he murmured to the ship more than to the crew. “We’ve got families onboard. I’ve got my family onboard.”

But the fear never reached his voice.

A crewman approached. “Captain, the stabilizers are operating at 70%. Engineering is increasing capacity.”

“Good. Tell them to monitor closely. I’d rather go slow than blow out a system.”

“Aye, sir.”

Turner inhaled slowly. The bridge lights flickered once as lightning lit up the world outside.

He didn’t flinch.

Years ago, in the Navy, Martin had once joked:

“You’d hold steady if the gates of hell opened under your ship, Nate.”

Turner had clapped him on the back and replied, “Maybe so—but only because I know you’re standing next to me.”

It wasn’t lost on Turner that Martin was onboard tonight.

That knowledge settled his soul.

He straightened as the intercom crackled.

II. BELOW DECK—THE STORM PARTY

Passengers huddled in the main lounge, some tense, some nervous, some whispering prayers under their breath. The staff moved with gentle efficiency, passing out ginger candies and blankets, trying to turn the atmosphere into something closer to a cozy, inconvenient adventure than a maritime disaster.

Julius and Juliet sat with Martin near a large window—though the outside was nothing but streaks of rain and the occasional, unsettling flash of lightning.

“This is… a little terrifying,” Julius admitted.

Juliet nodded. “I know Dad’s a great captain. And I know storms happen. But—yeah. I’d like my stomach to stop doing somersaults.”

“That’d be nice,” Julius said. “My organs feel like they’re auditioning for Cirque du Soleil.”

Martin laughed. Then his expression softened. “You’re not wrong to be scared. Storms demand respect.”

“But you’re not scared.”

“I didn’t say that,” Martin said gently. “Courage isn’t the absence of fear. It’s choosing to trust the man steering the ship—and the One who commands the sea itself.”

Julius sighed. “Is Dad really that good?”

Martin leaned back, the lounge lights reflecting in his glasses.

“I served beside Nathaniel Turner for thirty years,” he said. “I watched him navigate seas so rough they swallowed destroyers. I saw him pull a crew through storms where every piece of equipment failed except his voice.”

He paused.

“And I watched him choose kindness every time the sea tried to turn him hard.”

Juliet swallowed.

Martin looked between them.

“I know you two always thought you were lucky to get adopted by a man like him. But if you want the truth?” He tapped Julius’s chest. Then Juliet’s. “He was lucky to have you. You made him smile again after the Navy stole too many smiles from him.”

The twins stared at him.

Then the ship jolted sharply, sending several passengers stumbling. Drinks toppled. A lamp flickered.

A few people yelped.

The engines rumbled louder.

Juliet grabbed the table. “What was that?”

Martin stood smoothly—decades of instincts overriding age. “Bow must have hit a cross-swell. I’m going to check with the crew.”

“I’m coming,” Julius said before he thought about it.

“Me too,” Juliet said immediately.

Martin raised an eyebrow. “Your father will have my hide if he knows I dragged you into crew areas during a storm.”

“Dad brought us into the Navy world the second he adopted us,” Julius said. “We can handle a hallway.”

Juliet nodded. “We’re not kids anymore.”

Martin sighed. “…Fine. But you stay behind me, and you do exactly as I say.”

They followed him through the swaying corridors.

III. ENGINEERING DECK

Heat.

Noise.

The smell of oil and ozone.

The engineering deck roared like the belly of a monster. Crew members worked furiously, fixing stabilizer links, adjusting coolant flow, monitoring engine strain. Sweat rolled down their faces despite the fans blasting overhead.

One engineer noticed the trio.

“Mr. Martin? What are you doing down here?”

“Checking on things,” Martin said. “How’s she holding?”

“Port stabilizer’s acting temperamental. Nothing critical yet. We’re compensating manually.”

Julius exchanged a nervous glance with Juliet.

“What happens if it fails?” Julius asked.

The engineer hesitated—until Martin lifted a hand.

“They can handle the truth.”

The engineer exhaled.

“If it fails, the ship becomes harder to control. More sway. More tilt. But we’re not anywhere near danger. Captain’s orders are to take it slow, keep systems responsive, and ride the swell patterns.”

Juliet chewed her lip. “Does… does Dad really know how to handle this kind of storm?”

The engineer blinked.

Then laughed.

“I’d trust Captain Turner with my life twice over.”

Martin elbowed him. “See? I’m not the only one.”

A loud crackle rang through the engineering deck—feedback from the intercom. A crewman at the console winced, adjusting the frequency.

Then Captain Turner’s voice echoed through the metal:

“Attention crew. We are approaching the worst of the storm. Prepare for a significant swell in approximately thirty seconds. This will be rough. Hold your stations. We will ride it safely. Bridge out.”

Martin’s jaw tightened.

Julius felt his heart pound.

Juliet’s voice shook. “Can… can we go back up?”

“Yes,” Martin said. “Time to be somewhere stable.”

But before they could head up, the ship tilted—hard.

The floor shot sideways.

Juliet screamed.

Julius grabbed a railing just in time.

Martin steadied both of them with surprising strength.

“Hold on!” he barked.

The ship groaned like a living beast, metal straining as the swell lifted the bow.

Then—

A sudden slam.

Lights flickered.

Some went out.

The engines growled deeper, straining.

Juliet clung to Martin. “Is the ship going to capsize?!”

“No,” Martin said firmly. “Turner knows exactly what angle to take swells like that. If he wanted to capsize, then I’d worry.”

Julius swallowed hard. “We need to get back to the lounge.”

“You’re right,” Martin said. “Let’s go.”

IV. THE STORM BREAKS OPEN

By the time they made it back to the lounge, everyone looked even more rattled. Crew members guided passengers to sit low and avoid windows, and parents hugged their kids tightly.

Lightning flashed again—bright enough to momentarily silhouette the entire room.

Juliet sank onto the couch.

“I hate storms,” she whispered.

“You’re allowed to,” Martin said warmly.

Julius rubbed her knee gently. “Hey. We’re okay.”

Juliet sniffed. “I know. But I always think about Mom.”

Martin looked down.

Their adoptive mother, Captain Turner’s wife, had passed away years ago. Storms reminded Juliet of the night she and Julius were taken from their birth home during heavy rain—before they ever met Captain Turner.

“I feel like storms steal people,” she said quietly.

Martin placed a hand over hers.

“Storms don’t steal,” he said softly. “They test us. And then we prove we can walk out the other side.”

He squeezed her hand.

“And your father will always steer you through.”

Juliet wiped her eyes.

Then something shifted in the room.

A buzz of whispers.

Heads turned toward the lounge’s massive central staircase.

Captain Turner descended, rain-slicked and resolute, but calm.

The lounge erupted with tension and relief.

Juliet shot to her feet.

“Dad!”

He caught her in a tight hug. Julius joined a second later. Turner closed his eyes, arms wrapped around the two people he cherished most in the world.

“You okay?” he asked.

“We are now,” Julius breathed.

Juliet could hear his heartbeat—strong, steady.

He pulled back, cupping their faces briefly before addressing the room.

“Ladies and gentlemen,” he said, voice projecting without strain, “we’ve reached the crest of the storm. The worst is behind us. From here on, expect continued rough waters, but nothing the Mariner Queen cannot handle. Thank you for staying calm. You have been exceptional.”

A wave of exhalations and relieved murmurs rippled across the room.

Turner looked to Martin—his oldest friend. “You keeping my kids out of trouble?”

“Trying,” Martin said, straight-faced. “But they insisted on exploring engineering during the worst swell.”

Turner didn’t even look surprised. He simply sighed. “Of course they did.”

Julius shrugged. “We inherited the adventure gene.”

Turner ruffled his hair. “Lucky me.”

Juliet leaned into her father’s side. “Are you okay, Dad? You sounded calm on the intercom, but…”

“But you know me too well,” Turner said softly. “Yes. I’m okay. A bit winded. But not worried.”

He glanced at Martin. “We’ve gotten through worse.”

“Many times,” Martin said. “Though usually without a hundred screaming passengers.”

Turner huffed. “Fair.”

V. DINNER DURING CHAOS

A few hours later, after the storm eased into steady rain, Captain Turner joined Julius, Juliet, and Martin in the dining hall—mostly empty except for scattered families sipping soup under dim lighting.

The floor still swayed gently, but after the earlier turmoil, it felt almost soothing.

Julius stabbed a piece of chicken. “Never thought I’d be eating dinner during a tropical storm.”

Juliet took a long sip of hot chocolate. “Or that I’d feel calm after nearly tipping over.”

Turner raised an eyebrow. “We didn’t nearly tip over.”

Julius snorted. “Tell the passengers that.”

“They don’t know the technical definition of tilt,” Turner replied, smirking.

Juliet leaned forward. “When the swell hit earlier… were we in danger?”

Turner set down his fork.

And for the first time that night, he let himself look vulnerable.

“We were close to a point where one wrong maneuver could’ve caused a problem,” he admitted. “But I’ve ridden that type of swell before. I knew the angle we needed.”

Juliet exhaled shakily. “You make it sound simple.”

“It wasn’t,” Turner said. “But I had two reasons to get it right.”

He reached across the table and took their hands.

“You two.”

Julius’s throat tightened.

Juliet blinked back tears.

Martin folded his arms. “I told them earlier—there are two men I trust in storms. One who walks on water…”

“…and one who drives the ship,” Juliet finished softly.

Turner stared at Martin.

“You still say that?”

Martin shrugged. “If it ain’t broke.”

Turner shook his head, chuckling. “You’re incorrigible.”

Then he looked at his children—his entire world.

“You don’t ever have to worry when you’re on my ship,” he said. “Not because storms can’t hurt us. But because I will give everything I have to bring you through.”

Julius swallowed the lump in his throat. “We know.”

Juliet nodded. “And we trust you.”

VI. MORNING AFTER

Sunlight poured across the ocean like golden paint.

By morning, the Pacific had forgotten its fury. Waves shimmered, gulls wheeled overhead, and the sky was clear and impossibly blue.

Passengers emerged onto deck slowly, blinking at the peaceful world as if unsure the storm had actually happened. Crew members smiled and reassured them, offering coffee and pastries.

Julius, Juliet, Captain Turner, and Martin stood together near the bow rail.

The sea breeze was gentle now.

“It’s so different,” Juliet whispered. “Like last night never happened.”

“Storms end,” Martin said. “That’s their job.”

Turner placed an arm around each twin.

“You did well yesterday,” he said. “Both of you. I know it was frightening.”

Julius smiled. “You did better.”

Turner chuckled. “I’ve had more practice.”

They watched sunlight scatter across the ocean. A whale breached in the distance—brief, breathtaking.

Juliet’s face lit up.

“Dad! Look!”

“I see it,” Turner said, smiling.

Martin nudged Turner’s elbow. “You ever think this is where you’d end up? Navy captain → cargo freighter → cruise ship legend?”

Turner exhaled thoughtfully.

“I never thought I’d have a family to stand with me on deck after a storm,” he said quietly.

Juliet hugged him tightly.

Julius placed a hand on his shoulder.

Martin grinned. “Well. You’ve got one. And if we’re being honest, they’re the best thing you’ve ever captained.”

Turner’s eyes softened.

“I suppose they are.”

The ship cut smoothly through sapphire water, the sun warming their faces.

The storm was behind them.

But the bonds forged inside it would remain—unshakable, steadfast, ocean-strong.

Just like the man who had steered them through.

Posted Dec 07, 2025
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