John Nelson

John Nelson – Editor

Developmental and copy editor who delves into the heart and soul of an author’s writing to help them reach their greatest potential.

Overview

I have provided book development, editorial, and consulting services for more than 100 works across a wide variety of genres, with an emphasis on speculative and visionary fiction, science fiction, memoir, spirituality, and prescriptive nonfiction. As an editor and writer, I know firsthand how to create a well-crafted and publishable book.

In publishing, I was part of the team at Hampton Roads Publishing who acquired and first published Neal Donald Walsh’s mega-bestseller Conversations with God. As editorial director of Bear & Company, I acquired titles such as the preeminent Maya Cosmogenesis 2012 and The Giza Power Plant.

While I am interested in many diverse genres, I love editing speculative fiction and nonfiction that stretch the boundaries of science and metaphysics. That includes memoirs of people with extraordinary experiences. My edit of the sci-fi novel The Venus Directive features an AI with a soul. In The Father Nobody Knows, an abused woman in search of her biological father discovers her real father is God the Father.

Working with an author is akin to going on a journey together. It’s often one where I help them delve deeper to bring excellence to their work so that our shared understanding of their book unfolds. The writing experience can be one of self-exploration, so then my role is to be a trusted guide and support in that process.

When I provide an assessment, I give the author detailed suggested changes in notes or memo form. With fiction, this will include an in-depth critique of plot and subplots, worldbuilding, character arcs, pacing, and narrative voice. For nonfiction, the focus is on topic structure.

I hope you’ll take this journey with me.

Past Comments:

“I was stuck in writer’s block for two years, overwhelmed by the complexity of my story. One conversation with John changed everything. In less than an hour, he identified the core issue and helped me see the path forward.”— Catherine Fendig, author of The Father Nobody Knows, Linkpoint Publishing.

“John’s uncanny ability to take an elusive, creative idea and create a solid direction of coherent storytelling is often incomprehensible to me in its clarity.” —Dee Wallace, author of Bright Light, O-Books.

“To my word guru and map maker, John: thank you for your brilliant editing, brainstorming, wise counsel, and for those inspirational kicks in the ass when I needed it.” —Dr. Connie Mariano, The White House Doctor, St. Martin’s Press.

“John breathes manuscripts and storylines like people breathe air. He was able to help us mine our diamond in the coal and polish its story and text until it glistened in the sunlight. For us, John was the kind of editor every author dreams about.” —Gail Harris and Brandi Rarus, Finding Zoe, BenBella Books.

“John is some kind of genius in how he clarifies scientific concepts. I wish I had been working with him on my early research papers.” —Richard Lippman, MD, PhD, nominated for the Nobel Prize in Medicine 1996, author of Stay 40 without a Diet, Outskirts Press.

Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Health & Wellbeing Inspirational New Age
Fiction
Espionage Historical Fiction Magical Realism Space Opera
Languages
English (US)
Awards
  • By Love Reclaimed: Jean Harlow Returns, The Pinnacle Book Achievement Award 2012

Work experience

Self-employed

Jun, 2003 — Present
I do developmental edits on novels and nonfiction manuscripts. I first reviewed and write detail editorial assessments of the author's manuscript. I then add chapter-by-chapter comments on how to improve the text. Then I do a developmental edit to improve the author's expression for their review. Once finished, I coach authors through the publishing process in self-publishing or traditional publishing. I write query letters to agents and full book proposals. One of the titles I edited, "Ordinary Angels," was made into a Lionsgate film in 2024.

Inner Ocean Publishing

Nov, 2000 — Jul, 2003 (over 2 years)
I acquired titles and either edited them myself or assigned freelance editors. This included "Mystical Dogs" by Jean Houston, Paul Pearsall's "Miracle in Maui," and Barbara Marciniak's "Path of Empowerment." I assigned copy editors and oversaw their work. I wrote all the catalogue and advertising copy. I worked with the art director to create cover illustrations. I represented the company at INATA and the BEA.

Blessingway Books

Jan, 2000 — Sep, 2000 (8 months)
This company had gathered together self-published authors under one banner. With new authors, I oversaw the final edit and production of their books, suggesting cover illustrations and writing back-cover copy. With existing authors, I helped them publicize their books. I pitched our lineup to bookstore chain reps at INATs and the BEA.

Bear & Company

Aug, 1997 — Aug, 1999 (about 2 years)
I acquired new titles for our biannual catalogues, including "Maya Cosmogenesis 2012, "The Giza Power Plant," and "The Goddess in the Gospels." I edited selected titles and assigned freelance editors and copy editors to other titles. I worked with freelance artists and suggested the cover illustrations for most of our books. I represented the company at INATS and the BEA. I left when the company was sold to Inner Traditions.

Hampton Roads Publishing

Aug, 1994 — Aug, 1997 (about 3 years)
Managed author-generated publicity such as a flurry of articles, interviews, and media appearances by author Joe McMonagle’s “Psychic Spy Story”: Articles in Time, Newsweek, and Washington Post; appearances on Nightline, ABC’s “Put to the Test,” UPN’s “Paranormal Borderline.” Publicized "Conversations with God" that led to Putnam picking it up. Edited Merilyn Tunneshende's "Medicine Dream" that led to my editorial director's job at Bear & Company.

Portfolio

Luminous Life: How the Science of Light Unlocks the Art of Living

Liberman OD PhD, Jacob Israel

New World Library

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Bright Light

Wallace, Dee

O-BOOKS

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Query Letter Review
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Travelers: A Novel

Altman, Donald

Roundfire Books

Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
Marilyn Monroe Returns: The Healing of a Soul

Finkelstein, Adrian

Hampton Roads Publishing

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AVATAR MAGIC (Avatar Magic Series Book 1)

FRANQUEMONT, GERALD

GERALD LOUIS FRANQUEMONT

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A World Torn Asunder: The Life and Triumph of Constantin C. Giurescu

Giurescu, Marina

Bettie Youngs Book Publishers

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Medicine Dream: A Nagual Woman's Energetic Healing

Tunneshende, Merilyn

Hampton Roads Publishing

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Mass Awakening

Herscu, Shoshi

BalboaPress

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Editorial Assessment
The 12-Step Buddhist 10th Anniversary Edition

Littlejohn, Darren

Atria Books/Beyond Words

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Eye of the Nomad: War of Fear, Book 1

Nardolicci, Umberto

Living Beach Publishing

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The Riddle of the Sphinx

Montagu, Alexandre

Persepolis Press

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Ordinary Angels

Evans, Sharon Stevens

Encourage Publishing

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The AOM System: Manifestation Mastery in 30 Days!

Mire, Sterling

Intuitive Life by Sterling

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Picture Bride

Malaghan, Mike

Independently published

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The Hybrid Prophecy: A Call to Awaken

Larkins, Lisette

Independently published

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