Caerwyn Hawksmoor

Caerwyn Hawksmoor – Editor

Award-nominated writer and developmental editor extraordinaire. I help fantasy, sci fi, and YA novels become their best possible selves.

Overview

As a specialist developmental editor, I live to help writers bring their stories out into the world.


I'm always on the lookout for books that "comfort the disturbed or disturb the comfortable." The stories that spirit us away to another world or tackle the deep questions of life. Does your novel have big ideas or emotions? Is it dark and dystopian, or perhaps set in the natural world? Does it draw on history or myth? And are your characters going to steal a piece of my heart? If so, then count me in!


I've spent decades studying stories and how to write them, and as an award-nominated speculative fiction author, I don't intend to stop now. I have a degree in English with Creative Writing and, in 2016, I was fortunate enough to attend the prestigious Clarion West writers workshop—where I learned from a wide range of publishers, editors, and agents, as well receiving one-on-one tuition from giants of the SFF community like N.K. Jemisin and Elizabeth Bear.


As an editor, I bring all that experience to the table and use it to help my writers really shine. It's less about judging whether a story is "good" or "bad", and more about finding the beating heart of your book—the reason it sets you on fire—and helping you to bring the best possible version of that into the world. I give your manuscript a deep read, making sure that it has what it takes to attract an audience, catch an agent's attention, or is just as close as possible to the shining vision you had when you first started writing. I advise on "big picture" elements like pacing, character arcs, worldbuilding, and conflict, and help you make them stronger, clearer, and more powerful. I can also answer any questions you have about the publishing industry, and make sure that by the time we're done, you know exactly where you're going next.


Stories, and the way they move our souls, have always fascinated me.


I would love to help you with yours.

Services
Fiction
Dystopian Epic Fantasy LGBTQ Fiction Paranormal Romance Post-Apocalyptic Space Opera Urban Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (AUS) English (UK) English (US)
Awards
  • Eugie Foster Memorial Award for Short Fiction, Nominee, 2019
Certifications
  • Clarion West Writers Workshop, 2016

Work experience

Choice of Games

Jan, 2023 — Present

I am currently working on a text-based high fantasy game, provisionally due for release in 2024.

Self-employed

Jan, 2020 — Present

Since starting as a developmental editor, I have worked with a wide range of clients—from established self-published authors with wildly successful crowdfunding campaigns, to first-time novelists whose creations are now out in the world.

Story Engine, Deck of Worlds

Mar, 2021 — May, 2021 (3 months)

I contributed a number of worldbuilding cards to the Story Engine add-on, Deck of Worlds.

Seven Seas Entertainment

Dec, 2017 — Present

I rewrite, edit, and proofread manga and light novels for Seven Seas, and have worked on dozens of popular titles, including Reincarnated as a Sword, and the High-Rise Invasion.

SteamPunk Magazine

Dec, 2008 — Jul, 2013 (over 4 years)

I spent five years as the lead editor at SteamPunk magazine, acquiring fiction and non-fiction pieces and arranging edits with the writers.

Caerwyn has 23 reviews

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Julia C.

Julia C.

Apr, 2024

I am completely satisfied with my partnership with editor Caerwyn Hawksmoor and would highly recommend them with no reservations whatsoever. Throughout this project, Hawksmoor was prompt, thorough, and professional. I initially requested a sample edit of my opening pages, and from what I received, I had no doubt I would grow as a writer from the feedback I would receive and I'm thrilled to say ...
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Caerwyn H.
I'm so pleased to hear the feedback was exactly what you needed! It's been an absolute delight working with you on this beautiful book, and I can't wait to speak to you during our follow-up discuss...
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Jessica L.

Jessica L.

Mar, 2024

I hired Cae for a developmental edit, and working with them went way beyond my expectations. They provided a lengthy Editorial Letter (20 pages) with details on my novel's strengths, weaknesses, suggested improvements, and references. They also provided hundreds(!) of comments on my manuscript, pointing out specific places for improvement and also, things that I was doing well (which, because o...
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Caerwyn H.
Thank you so much, Jessica! It really has been an absolute dream working with you and I can't wait to hear what the future has in store for you and your wonderful book. So grateful for this beauti...
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Smity S.

Smity S.

Oct, 2023

Caerwyn did an amazing job. They helped me not only to fix problems I didn't know how to solve, but opened my eyes to mistakes I didn't even know were there. They provided me sources and detailed explanations of how not just to fix problems, but spot them and ways not to make them. They told me the hard truths and not only told me of my strengths as a writer, but how to lean on them. I can't re...
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Caerwyn H.
Thanks so much! It's been wonderful working with you and I'm looking forward to our follow-up discussions.
Cameron D.

Cameron D.

Jul, 2023

Cae was absolutely wonderful to work with. They were helpful and responsive throughout the entire process, and the feedback I received was priceless. A good mentor/professional shows you where you can improve, but a great one builds you up as they do so. Cae is a great one because they not only gave me invaluable critique on my work but also made me feel more confident than ever in my writing b...
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Caerwyn H.
Thanks so much, Cameron. It's been a real delight, and I can't wait to chat about everything in our follow-up discussion!
Bree M.

Bree M.

Jun, 2023

Working with Cae has been a pivitol moment in my author career. They provided me with an extensive editorial letter that outlined my strengths and weaknesses and gave me invaluable insight into areas I could improve as a writer without being critical or demeaning. I will be referring back to this information for years to come, and it has absolutely changed me as a writer! Additionally, their d...
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Caerwyn H.
Ah, Bree, thanks so much for you're beautiful words. I will remember them for a long time. This is why I love my job! It was an absolute and genuine pleasure to work with you, and I cannot wait to...
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