Caerwyn Hawksmoor

Caerwyn Hawksmoor – Editor

Sci-fi & fantasy specialist. Trained under N.K. Jemisin & Elizabeth Bear. Helping your story shine with deep-dive developmental edits.

Overview

I love all things speculative fiction—from fantasy to science fiction, romantasy, paranormal romance, and everything in between. I work with authors at every stage of their writing journey, but I'm especially passionate about helping first-time novelists.

Whether you're planning to self-publish, seeking an agent, or just striving to make your story as strong as it can be, writing a book is an enormous journey, and I'm here to help you on the path.

My developmental edits dive deep into the foundations of storytelling, such as plot, pacing, point of view, dialogue, and character development. My feedback is often wide-ranging, constructive, and focused on solutions that fit your unique vision. Together, we'll brainstorm options, explore ways through tricky sections, and ensure your voice shines through.

With decades of experience in the writing and publishing world, I bring both craft insight and empathy to my edits. I'm an award-nominated author, hold a degree in English with Creative Writing, and have studied under writers like N.K. Jemisin and Elizabeth Bear. I draw on all of that to help your manuscript reach the next level—exploring new worlds, asking deep questions, and evoking powerful emotion.

Think of me as your story guide and creative partner: someone who will walk beside you as you bring your dream novel to life.

Together, we’ll nurture the heart of your book, sharpen its edges, and uncover the wonder that first made you want to write it in the first place.

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PRAISE FOR MY EDITING WORK

"Working with Cae has been a pivotal moment in my author career. I will be referring back to this information for years to come, and it has absolutely changed me as a writer!"

- Bree M

"I can’t recommend Cae highly enough. While I will come out of this collaboration with a far stronger story than I would have, the most lasting thing I will take away is the educational value, which I can carry with me into my next project. I will definitely be requesting more developmental edits from Cae in the future."

- Charlotte W

"Are you looking for an editor that will go above and beyond to guide you on your journey to making your story the best it can be, with a great sense of humour, exceptional skill, and outstanding commitment? You've found them."

- Josh E

Services
Fiction
Dystopian Epic Fantasy Paranormal Romance Post-Apocalyptic Romantic Fantasy Space Opera Urban Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (AUS) English (UK) English (US)
Awards
  • Eugie Foster Memorial Award for Short Fiction, Nominee, 2019
Certifications
  • Clarion West Writers Workshop, 2016

Work experience

Choice of Games

Jan, 2023 — Present
I am currently working on a text-based high fantasy game, provisionally due for release in 2025.

Self-employed

Jan, 2020 — Present
Since starting as a developmental editor, I have worked with a wide range of clients—from established self-published authors with wildly successful crowdfunding campaigns, to first-time novelists whose creations are now out in the world.

Story Engine, Deck of Worlds

Mar, 2021 — May, 2021 (3 months)
I contributed a number of worldbuilding cards to the Story Engine add-on, Deck of Worlds.

Seven Seas Entertainment

Dec, 2017 — Present
I rewrite, edit, and proofread manga and light novels for Seven Seas, and have worked on dozens of popular titles, including Reincarnated as a Sword, and the High-Rise Invasion.

SteamPunk Magazine

Dec, 2008 — Jul, 2013 (over 4 years)
I spent five years as the lead editor at SteamPunk magazine, acquiring fiction and non-fiction pieces and arranging edits with the writers.

Portfolio

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Hybrid Global Publishing

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Vaughan, Ash

Dark Horse Printing

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Caerwyn has 35 reviews

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Bree M.

Bree M.

Jun, 2023

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Working with Cae has been a pivitol moment in my author career. They provided me with an extensive editorial letter that outlined my strengths and weaknesses and gave me invaluable insight into areas I could improve as a writer without being critical or demeaning. I will be referring back to this...
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Caerwyn H.
Ah, Bree, thanks so much for you're beautiful words. I will remember them for a long time. This is why I love my job! It was an absolute and genuine pleasure to work with you, and I cannot wait to...
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Charlotte W.

Charlotte W.

Jan, 2023

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I can’t recommend Cae highly enough. I personally came to Cae after being stuck in a rut for many years. I had been writing in fits and starts and working with critique groups while reading books on self-editing and craft. Working with Cae is a whole different kind of experience. Reading Cae’s fe...
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Caerwyn H.
Thanks so much, Charlotte. It was an utter delight to work on your story. I can't wait to see it published!
Josh E.

Josh E.

Apr, 2022

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Are you looking for an editor that will go above and beyond to guide you on your journey to making your story the best it can be, with a great sense of humour, exceptional skill, and outstanding commitment? You've found them. Cae showed a consistent, very high degree of professionalism througho...
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Caerwyn H.
Ah, Josh, thanks so much for your kind words. Working with you has been an absolute delight from the very start. I can't wait to see your book flourish out in the wild!
Ben M.

Ben M.

Nov, 2025

As a first-time writer, handing my work to an industry professional felt more than daunting—it was exposing in a way few experiences are, yet the vulnerability was entirely worth it. Cae’s feedback was not only precise and actionable, but transformative. Every piece carried a blend of insight, cl...
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Caerwyn H.
Thank you so much, Ben. It's honestly been a privilege and an honour working with you. I can't wait to hear what the future has in store for you and your novel. You truly have a rare talent!
Jeff T.

Jeff T.

Oct, 2025

Excellent experience with Caerwyn, the amount of work they put in was phenomenal. The Zoom video helped a lot as well. Never having done anything like this before, they put me at ease. Now I have to try and put all their ideas to good use. Thanks again Caerwyn
Caerwyn H.
Thanks so much, Jeff. It's been a pleasure!

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