Jasmin Kirkbride

Jasmin Kirkbride – Editor

Agented Tor novelist, editor, and Creative Writing Lecturer (PhD) with 12+ years' publishing experience. Let's make your query letter shine!

Overview

WHAT I OFFER

As a kind, honest and encouraging editor, my goal is to help you create the strongest possible query letter for your project. I bring together publishing expertise with a deep understanding of fiction craft, helping you present both your novel and yourself to agents with confidence. My feedback is always clear, constructive and detailed, with one aim in mind: to make your query letter shine.

As an author, I have been through the querying process myself. I secured representation for my fiction with Alex Cochrane at Greyhound, and my debut novel, THE FOREST ON THE EDGE OF TIME, was published by Tor in 2026, with my second novel, PACIFIC BLUE, under contract for 2027. Alongside my own experience of approaching agents, I regularly advise Creative Writing students at all levels on query letters, submissions, and finding the right way to present their work to prospective agents and editors. I therefore understand both what a strong query letter needs to achieve and how personal and daunting it can feel to send your work out into the world.

WHAT YOU'LL RECEIVE

I'll look closely at your query letter’s hook, pitch, structure, clarity, stakes, comparison titles (comps), author bio, and market positioning, as well as whether the letter presents your project clearly and persuasively to an agent. You’ll receive tracked edits and in-text comments in MS Word, alongside a letter of overall feedback. One round of follow-up questions is included. My turnaround is usually within 1 week.

MY EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

I am an editor, author and Creative Writing lecturer with 12+ years’ experience working across fiction genres.

During my career in publishing, I was Publishing Director at Endeavour Media and have also worked as a freelance developmental editor, copy editor and proofreader for publishing houses from literary independent Boiler House Press to SFF publisher Rebellion. My editorial work has included a Pulitzer Prize winner, a Man Booker-longlisted author, a BBC Book of the Week, and Amazon top-ten bestsellers. I have also worked with authors who have won the Caine Prize for African Writing and been shortlisted for the Man Booker International Prize.

My advice is informed by my PhD in Creative and Critical Writing from the University of East Anglia (UEA), and my MA in Prose Fiction, also from UEA. It is likewise supported by my experience as a Lecturer in Publishing at City, University of London, where I specialised in teaching editing, and now as a Lecturer in Creative Writing and Digital Technologies at UEA.

I have worked with a wide range of genres, with particular expertise in SFF, romance, crime, and historical fiction.

READY TO QUERY?

Send me a request with your genre, word count and where you are in the querying process. I'd be delighted to hear about your project.

Services
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Historical Fiction Literary Fiction Romance Short Story
Languages
English (AUS) English (CAN) English (NZ) English (SA) English (UK) English (US)
Certifications
  • Introduction to Editorial Skills: Copyediting and Proofreading (PTC)
  • Rewriting and Substantive Editing (PTC)
  • Proofreading 1 (SfEP)

Work experience

University of East Anglia (UEA)

Sep, 2025 — Present
I teach across undergraduate and postgraduate Creative Writing courses at one of the oldest and most prestigious Creative Writing departments in the UK.

City, University of London

Oct, 2022 — Sep, 2025 (almost 3 years)
Taught postgraduate courses in international publishing, specialising in editorial and corporate social responsibility (CSR).

Endeavour Media

Jun, 2017 — Jul, 2018 (about 1 year)
Commissioning books and overseeing the editorial journey from start to finish, providing authors with kind, honest, and in-depth feedback.

Freelance

Jan, 2016 — Jun, 2017 (over 1 year)
Working on editorial and copywriting projects for clients including Time Out, Rebellion Publishing, Momentum Books and Periscope Books amongst many others.

Garnet Publishing (Ithaca Press and Periscope Books)

Jan, 2015 — Dec, 2015 (11 months)
Managed submissions and wrote reader reports, editing manuscripts and book in translation. Worked as secondary editor on 'Drinking and Driving in Chechnya' by Peter Gonda, and 'Kiraze' by Solmaz Kamuran, amongst others. Proofread Pulitzer Prize-winner and Man Booker-longlisted 'The Moor's Account' by Laila Lailami, and BBC Radio 4 Book of the Week 'Long Time No See' by Hannah Lowe amongst others.

Tenebris Books

Sep, 2014 — Jan, 2015 (4 months)
Managed short story submissions for a fantasy anthology, alongside copyediting and proofreading work for novellas.

Portfolio

Large Door

Jonathan Gibbs

Animalia Paradoxa: Stories

Henrietta Rose-Innes

Young Forktongue Davy has visions; epilepsy, his Ma calls it. He’s barely able to help around the family farm.But something about the lad is attracting attention: the menacing stranger who might be the angel of death himself; the women-only community at Wycomb... read more
The myths are about to come true…When, at the ripe age of forty-two, Major Hugh Delamare decides it’s time to settle down, he never could have dreamed that the young and pretty Millicent Dwyer would agree to take his hand, and together, they begin their marrie... read more
‘With history this colourful and a mystery this baffling, the result is delicious’ – Good Book GuideAlison Pope is the daughter of famous archaeologist Edgar Pope. After finishing her degree, she follows her adventurous spirit, and joins her father on all his ... read more
Helena had always been haunted by the dream of the staircase.It prevents her from forming any real relationship with a man, because who could live up to the haunting, handsome figure that awaits her at the top of the staircase?When her on-off boyfriend and chi... read more
War is coming to Ruthnia. As ancient, inhuman powers move against one another, Rel Kressind finds himself in the company of the fabled modalmen – giants who regard themselves as the true keepers of humanity’s legacy. Far out in the blasted, magical wastelands ... read more
“Trading Down is a brilliant, faced-paced read that cleverly intertwines the world of high finance and international terror - a realistic possibility in today’s world” - James Longman, Foreign Correspondent, ABC News Chris Peters loves his work in a multi-nati... read more
DEAR YASMEEN

Sophia Khan

Irenie, a young girl coming of age in upstate New York, has a secret at the core of her life. Her mother – the striking, charismatic Yasmeen – disappeared five years earlier. Her father, James, a distant, eccentric academic so bewitched by his late wife, has n... read more
Kiraze

Solmaz Kamuran

Princess Bari

Sok-yong Hwang

In a drab North Korean city, a seventh daughter is born to a couple longing for a son. Abandoned hours after her birth, she is eventually rescued by her grandmother. The old woman names the child Bari, after a legend telling of a forsaken princess who undertak... read more
In 1527 the Spanish conquistador Pánfilo de Narváez arrived on the coast of modern-day Florida with hundreds of settlers, and claimed the region for Spain. Almost immediately, the expedition was decimated by a combination of navigational errors, disease, starv... read more

Jasmin has 27 reviews

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BK R.

BK R.

Feb, 2021

When I set out looking for a new historical fiction editor, I knew I needed someone unique to give me an independent reading, someone with a traditional liberal arts education, well versed in classics and history, but also with a broader experience in creative writing technique. Working with Jas...
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Eric M.

Eric M.

Dec, 2020

Jasmin is a genius. Hire her.
Jasmin K.
Thank you, Eric - hope to work together again!
Brian Y.

Brian Y.

Dec, 2020

Jasmin was considerate and helped me improve my manuscript. I appreciate her help.
Jasmin K.
Thanks for your review Brian - it was lovely working with you!
Diego T.

Diego T.

Nov, 2020

Jasmin was such a joy to work with! She responds quickly, gives wonderful feedback, and values your time. Jasmin's suggestions helped so much in shaping my book into a better story. If you have the privilege to work with her, take it!
Jasmin K.
Thank you so much for your kind review, Diego - it's been such a pleasure to edit your book, and I'm excited to work together in the future as well! Many thanks, Jasmin
Franka M.

Franka M.

Nov, 2020

I got a manuscript assessment on a fantasy novel from Jasmin, and it has been extremely helpful. Her comments are thorough, insightful and well-structured, and always leave you with a sense that the manuscript's shortcomings are fixable. There was a bit of a delay in delivery due to Covid chaos,...
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Jasmin K.
Dear Franka, Thank you so much for your very kind review - it was a total joy working on your manuscript with you, and I hope we get to work together again in the future. Very best of luck with you...
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