Elayne Becker

Elayne Becker – Editor

Fantasy author, former Tor Books editor, and speculative fiction specialist with 10+ years' experience editing SFF across age categories.

Overview

As a former “Big Five” editor and a published author represented by CAA, I have always been passionate about the written word. Few things feed my soul as much as diving into a manuscript and working with writers to hone and strengthen their craft, so that the final product on the page reflects the vision in their heads. After working for several years as an editor at Tor Books and a publishing manager at an indie press, I now partner with new authors outside Reedsy every month as a freelance editor. Through my 10+ years in publishing, I've garnered extensive industry knowledge and editorial expertise that enables me to offer a variety of services for the manuscript revision and submission preparation stages.

With a passion for speculative fiction, I specialize in fantasy (including romantasy, historical fantasy, and epic fantasy), science fiction*, magical realism, and climate fiction across age categories.

SERVICES OFFERED:

- DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT: I provide an editorial letter, on average 6-10 pages in length, with feedback to help strengthen your manuscript as a whole. Categories I examine commonly include plot, pacing, characterization, worldbuilding, romance, and magic systems.

- QUERY REVIEW: I provide feedback on the conceptual and in-line levels to help you perfect your query letter. (Includes two rounds of edits.)

- SYNOPSIS REVIEW: I provide feedback on the conceptual and in-line levels to help you hone your synopsis. (Includes two rounds of edits.)

- COMPLETE SUBMISSION PACKAGE REVIEW: In addition to editing your query letter and synopsis, I provide feedback on the first three chapters of your manuscript. Note that this service includes two rounds of feedback on the query and synopsis and one round of feedback on the chapters.

*Note that the science fiction manuscripts I've edited have not yet been published, so you won't see this genre reflected in my portfolio. That said, rest assured my tenure at a premier SFF publisher and my ongoing editorial work have given me a thorough understanding of how to edit SF.

TESTIMONIALS:

“Elayne is an editing whiz at every level and super knowledgeable about the publishing industry. Her guidance not only set me on a path to write a much stronger manuscript, but also helped me grow as a writer."

—Carli J. Corson, author of It’s a Love/Skate Relationship

“Elayne’s ability to crawl inside a story and pull all the threads together is astounding. Her skill, her instinct, and her innate talent are obvious.”

—Jillian Boehme, author of Stormrise

“I am extraordinarily grateful for Elayne’s guidance on my manuscripts. She caught sight of my vision, the heart behind the words, and worked with me to refine, sharpen, and distill each element so that I might best tell the story I longed to tell.”

—Joanna Hathaway, author of Dark of the West

“I can’t recommend Elayne enough! Her creative eye is unmatched, her notes always thought-provoking and transformative. She’s one of the best I’ve ever worked with!"

—Erika Lewis, author of the Kelcie Murphy series

Services
Fiction
Epic Fantasy Magical Realism Middle Grade Fantasy Romantic Fantasy Urban Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Certifications
  • BA Classics
  • MSc Professional Communication

Work experience

Alyssa Matesic Editing

Sep, 2023 — Present
I generate comprehensive editorial analyses that provide detailed critical feedback and concrete action items to help fantasy and science fiction writers hone their storytelling craft and effectively reach target readerships. I value positive working relationships founded on trust and respect for individuals’ unique narrative voices.

Tor Teen, Macmillan Publishers

Aug, 2021 — Present
I am the author of Forestborn (Aug. 2021) and Wildbound (Aug. 2022), both young adult crossover fantasy novels published by Tor Teen.

Tor Books, Macmillan Publishers

Jul, 2014 — Aug, 2019 (about 5 years)
I joined Tor Books as an editorial assistant in July 2014 and left as an associate editor in August 2019. During my time there, my role included the following: -Oversee the publication process for 30-40 books per year, from acquisition to publication, collaborating with Production, Marketing, Publicity, Art, Contracts, and Sales departments and serving as the primary point of contact between authors/agents and the publishing house; simultaneously juggle to-do’s for books whose publication dates range from two weeks from present to two years from present, both for my own list and that of an executive editor - Craft editorial letters and provide editorial feedback on both the conceptual and in-line level for middle grade, young adult, and adult fiction; evaluate submissions and negotiate novel acquisitions - Create preliminary marketing strategies for all titles on my list; spearhead marketing group dedicated to positioning and promoting a celebrity-written novel; actively participate in a cross-functional marketing team dedicated to identifying micro-markets for our thrillers and developing strategies to increase an author's visibility, readership, and sales - Generate positioning materials, including but not limited to: writing pitch points for more than one hundred titles across genres and delivering oral presentations to the sales team; crafting story copy for books across genres and tailoring each version to specific platforms/audiences such as company catalogs, metadata, and book jackets; creating profitability and loss statements for potential acquisitions; generating cover concepts

Elayne has 17 reviews

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Robin W.

Robin W.

Sep, 2025

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Mine was a difficult project - review the sequel of an unpublished first novel. One other person described the project as 'the literary equivalent of surgical separation of Siamese twins'. That said, I was blown away by the quality of the output I got from Elayne. Her comments were accurate, in...
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Hannes R.

Hannes R.

Jun, 2025

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Fastest dev edit I have ever received and of incredible quality. Elayne put a finger on the big latent issues lurking in my manuscript. She also documented and explained all her notes very thoroughly and convincingly. Suggested solutions were manifold and took into account my specific goals for c...
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Jana M.

Jana M.

May, 2025

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Elayne was excellent to work with. She helped me immensely with my query package and provided thoughtful and constructive edits. She brings a lot of experience, professionalism, and genuine love for the craft. I'm even more confident in my work now that Elayne helped me polish it, and I would hap...
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AJ P.

AJ P.

Dec, 2025

Thorough, well-considered editorial feedback delivered on time. Communication felt collaborative throughout, and the suggestions were concrete and useful. A very positive experience overall.
Nicole L.

Nicole L.

Nov, 2025

Elayne's feedback was very helpful and insightful. Her edits strengthened and streamlined my query letter and synopsis, giving me much more confidence in what I'll be presenting to agents. It was a pleasure working with her!

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