Mary Neretlis

Mary Neretlis - Editor

Markham, ON, Canada

30+ years of writing, copy editing, and proofreading, I especially enjoy working with children's stories, memoirs, and creative non-fiction.

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Overview

I'm an experienced Copy Editor and Proofreader and have worked with a variety of fiction and non-fiction writers from independent first-timers through to award-winning published authors. I have also assisted business writers with their internal and external newsletters and promotional pieces.

I can help make sure your work is ready to be shared with the world! I will look at the entirety of your writing, from a broad overview of how everything interweaves and flows, down to the duplicated sentence and the misplaced comma. I’ll suggest a more fitting phrase, or reorder a paragraph for more clarity. I’ll help unravel your message so your reader will be able to grasp it.

And through it all, I will respect that it’s your writing and it must be kept in your voice.

A bit about my past adventures...

While in a 10-year telecommunications management position, I was involved with the writing of communications briefs, developing easy-to-follow sales campaign guidelines, and providing clear and concise training instructions.

During my 12 years at a legal publishing company, I learned about the book publication process from initial author communications and deadline setting, to editing raw manuscript, through to proofreading and typesetting for final print production.

When I first founded my freelance company, In Writing, it was mainly a writing and editing service for small business clients with marketing and promotional needs. However, in the process of thinking of ways to promote local small business to local residents, I created a community newsletter, intermingling business stories with personal stories.

This opened up a new passion and direction for me that carries through to today... I love story-telling! I love listening to and reading people's stories, and I am adamant that their stories must be shared! They must be written and edited and proofread – corrected, fine-tuned, polished – so they can be easily understood and the true essence of the writer's meaning can be experienced and enjoyed by the reader!

As a result, presently...

In Writing has been re-established and has branched out to service writers of fiction and creative non-fiction. My ultimate goal is to raise your writing up to a higher level, while being faithful to your story. Let me help your words come to life and jump off the page, and land directly into your reader's heart. Tell me what you're working on and I'll tell you how I can assist.

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I take pride in the relationships I've developed with my clients. Here are a few comments I've recently received from some of them, and see more Reedsy reviews below:

"Thank you so very much for the edits and feedback. … It is interesting – the more I write and work with you, the more I come to understand … your suggestions really do make it read better. I remember how much I enjoyed working with you on the first book, and this experience mirrored that." — Jacqualine Haller, author of Love You to the Stars and Back, and Grandpa John and Uncle Peter

"I loved working with you on Unveiled … I believe the author-editor relationship should be open and friendly and not discouraging. … Offering feedback and critique in an encouraging way, as in your case... made me love working with you and will keep on doing it for my next stories onwards." — Samreen Ahsan, author of Once Upon a [Stolen] Time

"… it’s exactly what I was needing. Thank you so much for this, and for the quick turnaround. Greatly appreciated!!!" — Jenny Ayigah, author of Create a Heart of Faith in a World of Fear

"I have just completed accepting your edits and addressing your comments. Thank you for your insights and attention to details that were missed by me. It was very helpful. — Joseph Morin, author of Villains, Victims & The Vanquished: A Memoir

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I'm also a writer of creative non-fiction and fiction-based-on-true-story. My current project is titled Leaves from the Family Tree which includes creatively re-told short stories that have been passed down verbally for generations. Trying my hand at writing for children, I will also be working on stories that reflect the fun (and sometimes funny) lives and adventures (and sometimes misadventures) of family members (including pets, stuffed animals, and observant spruce trees). :)

Languages
English (CAN)
English (UK)
English (US)
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs
Health & Wellbeing
Inspirational
Parenting & Families
Self-Help & Self-Improvement
Fiction
Coming of Age
Historical Fiction
Picture Books

Work experience

Freelance Copy Editor and Proofreader

Self-employed
January, 2016 – Present (over 6 years)

Provide Copy Editing, Proofreading, and MS Word Typesetting services on a project-by-project basis to a variety of clients, from independent writers to corporations.

Production Editor, Looseleaf and Subscription Products

LexisNexis Canada Inc.
July, 2012 – December, 2015 (over 3 years)

Liaised with 30+ authors; established deadlines for book updates; edited and proofread new and adjusted text; ensured smooth transition from receipt of raw manuscript through to on-time publication.

Desktop Publisher and Proofreader

LexisNexis Canada Inc.
May, 2004 – July, 2012 (about 8 years)

Liaised with 15+ editors; proofread and applied editing corrections; formatted and typeset manuscript for print production within set timeframes.

Freelance Writer, Copy Editor, Proofreader

Self-employed
September, 2002 – May, 2004 (over 1 year)

Provided writing, copy editing, and proofreading services related to promotional material for small to mid-size companies; developed and published quarterly newsletters incorporating local business and personal stories.

Manager Communication Positions

Bell Canada
August, 1983 – December, 1993 (over 10 years)

Corporate Communications
Prepared communications briefs for ad and promo campaigns; worked together with Ad agencies, proofreading and editing Ad copy for print media
Sales Planning Promotion/Customer Service
Prepared introductions, guidelines, and training instruction regarding new products and services for customer contact staff

Portfolio (12 selected works)

Tired Mommy

Dudish, Nicole, Neretlis, Mary, Saunders, Zoe

Grandpa John and Uncle Peter

Haller, Jacqualine, Neretlis, Mary

Pilgrimage for an OM: An Adventure in Trusting your Gut

Haller, Jacqualine, Neretlis, Mary, Neretlis, Deandra, Kordic, Ana, Vishvketu, Yogrishi

Villains, Victims & the Vanquished: A Memoir

Joseph Morin

Captured in these pages are Morin's journey as a Teacher and Special Educator. He began his career in 1970, finally drawing it to a close in 2014, a span of almost four and half decades! During that time he experienced many remarkable situations that caused him to reflect on the practice of educating individuals with unique needs. The book is NOT a how-to book but rather an immersion into the ... read more

Captured in these pages are Morin's journey as a Teacher and Special Educator. He began his career in 1970, finally drawing it to a close in 2014, a span of almost four and half decades! During that time he experienced many remarkable situations that caused him to reflect on the practice of educating individuals with unique needs. The book is NOT a how-to book but rather an immersion into the ... read more

I Have, Not I Am

Saumell, Ms. Samantha Marie, Neretlis, Ms. Mary

Searching for Grace

Jordan, Jackie

Magnetic Entrepreneur: A Personality That Attracts

Robert J Moore, Tony Selimi - foreword, Bob Johnson, Tiffany Baker, RJM Publishing

Mary has 5 reviews

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James McCarroll
Though a little more pricey than some other editors, SHE IS WORTH EVERY DIME SPENT! You will not only be impressed by her work and style of engagement. She will immediately be on your short list of editors and proofreaders for your next book.

James McCarroll, March 2022

Mary Neretlis
Thank you for your kind words, Pastor McCarroll. I truly enjoyed working with your well-written manuscript, and I know your readers will be inspired by your words and direction.

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Nicole Dudish
Mary is a wonderful editor! I specifically chose her because she picked up on something that no other editor picked up on when I sent out my sample piece. I just had this feeling she would be the one that would take my children's book, Tired Mommy, to the next level. After working with her, I can confidently say that she did that and more. Her edits were great and she even offered up a bunch of...
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Nicole Dudish, February 2022

Mary Neretlis
Thank you, Nicole, for your kind words. I really appreciated working on this project. Not only is it a fun and funny children's story where parents can relate, but I would also call it a memoir, as...
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Ian Forth
Really appreciated Mary’s eagle eye on my writing. She picked up loads of orthographical and referencing errors. She even checked the accuracy of sources. Mary provided hugely helpful marginal suggestions from a reader’s perspective and provided a clear rationale for her suggestions. Mary responded promptly to all my queries.

Ian Forth, October 2021

Mary Neretlis
Thank you, Ian, for entrusting me with reviewing and editing your memoir. It was a great read, and I'm glad I could help polish it up. Good luck with next steps!

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samantha saumell
Working with Mary was an absolute pleasure! Her dedication to the writers that she works with is really appreciated. She was flexible and willing to help make my dreams of becoming an author come to life. Her response time is very quick and she is willing to help in anyway that she can. I highly recommend Mary as an editor for anyone who is looking!

samantha saumell, August 2021

Mary Neretlis
Thank you, Samantha! I very much enjoyed working with you as well. Your story is very important and I feel honoured that I could contribute to your book by refining what was already a clear and con...
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Desiree Blanchard
I was looking for a proofreader for my manuscript, and Mary was the perfect fit. She was able to identify minor grammatical errors and provided feedback around the organization to ensure a better flow of text. I am happy with her suggestions, and it was exactly the help was I was looking for. I would love to work with her again!

Desiree Blanchard, August 2021

Mary Neretlis
Thanks Desiree, It was a joy working on your book, and I would love to work with you again too! Looking forward to seeing your book illustrated and published! Best of luck with all!

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