Lucy Mackay-Sim

Lucy Mackay-Sim – Editor

Award-winning developmental editor specialising in middle grade, YA and fantasy. Experience with Bloomsbury, HarperCollins, Bonnier.

Overview

Hi there! I'm Lucy.

I'm a former in-house commissioning editor with Bloomsbury, where I worked on the Carnegie-Medal winning October, October by Katya Balen; was highly commended for the Branford Boase Award and worked with internationally bestselling authors such as Sarah J. Maas, Alexander McCall Smith and Kalynn Bayron. I now work in-house part-time in children's picture books and get my middle grade and fantasy editing kicks freelance for publishers including HarperCollins, Bloomsbury and Bonnier.


My two great loves as an editor and reader are middle grade fiction and fantasy for all ages. I'll never get over the power of writing to transport us outside ourselves - whether that is to another world, or just into someone else's shoes for an hour or two. These two genres do that most powerfully for me.


My aim as an editor is first to get to the heart of your vision for the book. Sometimes when we write, it's like trying to provide a map for territory we have lived in all our lives. We know it so well we can't see the pitfalls that would trip newcomers. I take the time to truly understand the territory you're mapping, and then I can help you identify ways to make the reader's journey through it as effortless and immersive as possible. Sometimes that is as simple as a tweak in a character's voice, or upping the stakes in a scene that needs more tension. Other times it might be moving a whole chapter later in the book. And that can feel scary! I have so much respect and compassion for authors who are open to being edited. It takes huge courage. But time and time again I've also seen the high authors feel when an editor's suggestion unlocks a new idea for them and suddenly that awkward ending finally feels RIGHT. And having someone on your team who really gets the breakthrough you just made? That's even better.


It's all worth it, I promise.







Services
Fiction
Fantasy Middle Grade Middle Grade Fantasy Paranormal Romance Picture Books Romantic Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (AUS) English (UK)
Awards
  • Branford Boase Award (Highly Commended) 2020
  • Editor of Carnegie Medal Winner 2022
  • Editor of Carnegie Medal Shortlisted 2023
Certifications
  • Postgraduate Diploma of Editing and Publishing RMIT (2012)
  • Bachelor of Arts (Hons) Literature, Melbourne University (2010)

Work experience

Wonderbly

Feb, 2023 — Present

Editing, writing and producing beautiful personalised picture books for market leading publisher

n/a

Oct, 2021 — Present

Freelance development and copy editor specialising in children's middle grade, picture books, YA and fantasy

Bloomsbury Publishing

Feb, 2015 — Oct, 2021 (over 6 years)

Commissioning editor for children's books and YA, spotting talent at manuscript stage and working with authors to develop their books to publication.

Portfolio

October, October

Katya Balen

Bloomsbury Publishing

_______________WINNER OF THE YOTO CARNEGIE MEDAL 2022 WINNER OF THE YOTO CARNEGIE SHADOWERS' CHOICE AWARD 2022_______________'A very special new addition to the shelf and deserves classic status' - The Times Children's Book of the Week'A modern classic ... rel... read more
Dragon Rider

Taran Matharu

HarperCollins Publishers

FROM THE ASHES OF AN EMPIRE, A HERO WILL RISE... ‘A dazzlingly epic and richly complex world of dragons, magic, and rebellion’ Amélie Wen Zhao, New York Times bestselling author of Song of Sil... read more
Developmental Editing
Noah Wild and the Floating Zoo

Alexander McCall Smith

Bloomsbury Publishing

It's full-time monkey business on the high seas in this new family adventure from Alexander McCall Smith, the bestselling author of The No. 1 Ladies' Detective Agency series.Noah can't believe... read more
Developmental Editing
Foxlight

Katya Balen

Bloomsbury Publishing

From the author of October, October, winner of the Yoto Carnegie Medal, comes a heartbreaking and heart-warming story about sisterhood, found family and accepting love in the most unusual and ... read more
Developmental Editing
Kingdom of Ash

Sarah J. Maas

Bloomsbury Publishing

'One of the best fantasy book series of the past decade' TIMETogether they will rise. Or together they will fall. The epic finale to the #1 bestselling Throne of Glass series by Sarah J. Maas.... read more
Proofreading
A Court of Silver Flames

Sarah J. Maas

Bloomsbury Publishing

The latest instalment of the GLOBAL PHENOMENON, romantic fantasy epic and TikTok sensation, ACOTAR. From multi-million and #1 Sunday Times bestselling author Sarah J. Maas. Maas has establishe... read more
Proofreading
The Space We're In

Katya Balen

Bloomsbury Publishing

_______________'A brave and beautiful book with a big heart. I loved it' - Jenny Downham'A tear-jerker about family that shows us things that are important and true, and promotes compassion' - Nicolette Jones, Sunday Times Children's Book of the Week__________... read more
The Smidgens

David O'Connell

Bloomsbury Publishing

Gafferty Sprout is a Smidgen. A Smidgen looks like a human, sounds like a human, and loves chips with curry sauce like a human – if humans were three inches tall. If you took a human and shrun... read more
Developmental Editing
'Zany ... Even reluctant readers will have a blast' IRISH TIMES In a small town on the banks of Lake Laloozee lives the world's greatest flamingo detective. His name is Fabio. He's not tall or... read more
Developmental Editing
Cinderella Is Dead

Kalynn Bayron

Bloomsbury Publishing

_______________'Kalynn Bayron does more than re-write a fairytale ... She breaks it apart and rebuilds it into a wholly original and captivating story where girls finally decide for themselves... read more
Proofreading
We Were Liars

E. Lockhart

Bonnier Books UK

The TikTok phenomenon and #1 New York Times bestseller.A beautiful and distinguished family.A private island.A brilliant, damaged girl; a passionate, political boy.A group of four friends-the ... read more
Proofreading
The Raven Heir

Stephanie Burgis

Bloomsbury Publishing

Cordelia and her triplets Rosalind and Giles have lived safely in the castle at the centre of the forest all their lives, protected by the spells their mother has woven. The only time Cordelia... read more
Developmental Editing
House of Earth and Blood

Sarah J. Maas

Bloomsbury Publishing

Maas has established herself as a fantasy fiction titan - TimeThink Game of Thrones meets Buffy the Vampire Slayer with a drizzle of E.L. James – TelegraphSpiced with slick plotting and atmosp... read more
Proofreading
The Wild Way Home

Sophie Kirtley

Bloomsbury Publishing

'So good I read it twice' - Hilary McKay, author of The Skylarks' War'This thrilling time-slip adventure oozes magic and heart' - Bookseller EDITOR'S CHOICEWhen Charlie's longed-for brother is... read more
Developmental Editing

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