Lottie Fyfe

Lottie Fyfe – Editor

• Structural editing, copyediting, proofreading • Fiction & nonfiction • HarperCollins, PRH, Hachette

Overview

I'm a confident, approachable editor with a decade’s experience, both freelance and in-house. I have formal editorial training from the Publishing Training Centre, and I've collaborated with authors at every level of experience, from Claire Keegan, David Mitchell and Melvyn Bragg to independent first-timers, so no matter how far along you are you'll be in safe hands. I take great pride and pleasure in working with authors to fine-tune their manuscript at any stage of the process, but rest assured: the idea is not to interfere with your style, but help you perfect and enhance it, so that your voice really shines.


So, how can I help you? Below are the services I offer on Reedsy:


Structural editing:

A broad-brush edit to iron out issues with timeline, plot, characterisation, flow, pace and style.


Copyediting:

A copyedit will usually focus on spelling, grammar, punctuation and stylistic inconsistencies, but also highlight any residual narrative or structural issues, repetition and awkward phrasing.


Proofreading:

A close read of your final-stage manuscript for spelling, grammar and typesetting errors, design issues and any other leftover imperfections.


Copywriting:

If it’s your pitch letter or marketing copy you need help with, look no further. I’m a dab hand at penning a snappy blurb, and I’d be delighted to help you distil the essence of your book into one or two gripping paragraphs that will have prospective readers eager for more.


But don't just take my word for it! Here are some testimonials from authors I've worked with recently:


‘Your line edits are so good. Thank you for the care and attention. It’s reassuring to know the book has gone through such a thorough and enthusiastic read.’ - Marianne Power, author of Love Me! (Picador)


‘I’m so grateful and admiring of all you’ve done. Thanks so much for a really excellent, thorough copyedit! You’ve read and thought about my book in a way that is so precise and interrogative, and found things that I have not only missed but hadn’t even thought of. I have no doubt it is now a better book. I can’t thank you enough.’ - Michael Amherst


‘I’m delighted with Lottie’s work on my manuscript. She has fantastic attention to detail and has really polished my novel, going far beyond what I expected. She’s warm, approachable and diplomatic and has a great way of making suggestions without imposing her ideas, and the story felt tighter and clearer after her edit. In my experience, she really helps the author’s style shine through and I highly recommend her.’ - Liz Treacher


‘You should get into writing movie trailers!’ - Ben Vizard


Interested in working together? Take a look at Reedsy's suggested rates (https://blog.reedsy.com/guide/editing/cost/), which I use as a baseline, and then drop me a line to see if we’d be a good fit. Looking forward to hearing from you!


Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs History
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Dystopian Historical Fiction Literary Fiction Mystery & Crime
Languages
English (AUS) English (CAN) English (UK) English (US)
Certifications
  • Introduction to Editorial Skills (Copy Editing and Proofreading) - Publishing Training Centre
  • Progress in Editorial Skills (Copy Editing and Proofreading) - Publishing Training Centre

Work experience

Self-employed

Oct, 2018 — Present

Copy-editing
Proofreading
Editorial project management
Writing and editing book cover copy and web description copy
Reader reports and sample translations

Profile Books

Nov, 2020 — Nov, 2022 (about 2 years)

Managing editorial progress for fiction, non-fiction and illustrated titles
Copy-editing, proofreading, collating proofs, liaising with authors
Writing cover and web copy, checking cover artwork
Signing off books for press

HarperCollins

Aug, 2015 — Sep, 2018 (about 3 years)

Managing editorial progress for fiction, non-fiction and illustrated titles
Copy-editing, proofreading, collating proofs, liaising with authors
Writing cover and web copy, checking cover artwork
Signing off books for press

Sceptre (Hodder & Stoughton)

Jan, 2015 — Aug, 2015 (7 months)

Reading and assessing manuscripts
Preparing manuscripts for production
Collating and checking proofs
Writing cover copy, proofreading cover artwork

Vintage (a division of Random House)

Aug, 2014 — Jan, 2015 (5 months)

Collating and checking proofs
Liaising with authors to resolve editorial queries
Signing off books for press
Commissioning freelance readers
Handling translation grant application process

Macmillan Bello (an imprint of Pan Macmillan)

Jan, 2011 — Sep, 2012 (over 1 year)

Proofreading typeset texts for errors and scanning issues

Portfolio

Love Me!

Marianne Power

Pan Macmillan

Can you be happy without a partnership at the centre of your life?Society still sets the gold standard for successful living as a marriage and kids. As Marianne Power turns forty, she wonders why this is still so elusive for her and whether, in fact, this is w... read more
Scaffolding

Lauren Elkin

Vintage Publishing

'The Susan Sontag of her generation' Deborah LevyThe story of two couples who live in the same apartment in north-east Paris almost fifty years apart.In 2019, Anna, a psychoanalyst, is processing a recent miscarriage. Her husband, David, takes a job in London ... read more
Code Dependent

Madhumita Murgia

Pan Macmillan

SHORTLISTED FOR THE WOMEN'S PRIZE FOR NON-FICTION 2024What does it mean to be human in a world that is rapidly changing with the development of artificial intelligence?'Highly readable and deeply important' – The Guardian'Code Dependent is the No Logo of the 2... read more
The Mantis

Kotaro Isaka

Abrams

From the award-winning, internationally bestselling author of Bullet Train and Three Assassins, The Mantis is a propulsive thriller set in Tokyo’s criminal underworld about the intrigue and tensions a family man faces as he tries to hide his secret life as a h... read more
Moderate to Poor, Occasionally Good

Eley Williams

HarperCollins Publishers

A Granta Best Young British Novelist The stunning new collection of stories from the award-winning author of The Liar’s Dictionary and Attrib. and Other Stories. Granta Best Young British novelist and author of Attrib. and other stories, Eley Williams returns ... read more
No Small Thing

Orlaine McDonald

Profile

'A gem of a book about mothers and daughters, about being Black and working class in today's London. Beautiful writing, taut with emotion, poetry and insight' Priscilla Morris, Women's Prize shortlisted author of Black ButterfliesFor a year, the three of them ... read more
** A Book of the Year in The Times - The New Statesman - Observer - Financial Times - Irish Times - Irish Independent - Times Literary Supplement ** WINNER OF THE ORWELL PRIZE AND THE KERRY GROUP IRISH NOVEL OF THE YEAR AWARD SHORTLISTED FOR THE RATHBONES FOLI... read more
THE SUNDAY TIMES’ BESTSELLER AND SCIENCE AND ENVIRONMENT BOOK OF THE YEAR WINNER OF THE SUNDAY TIMES YOUNG WRITER OF THE YEAR AWARD SHORTLISTED FOR THE BAILLIE GIFFORD PRIZE SHORTLISTED FOR THE WAINWRIGHT CONSERVATION AWARD SHORTLISTED FOR THE BRITISH ACADEMY ... read more
Sea State

Tabitha Lasley

A candid examination of the life of North Sea oil riggers, and an explosive portrayal of masculinity, loneliness and female desire. In her mid-30s and sprung out of a terrible relationship, Tabitha quit her job at a women’s magazine, left London and put her sa... read more
So Late in the Day

Claire Keegan

Grove Press

From Booker Prize Finalist and bestselling author of “pitch perfect” (Boston Globe) Small Things Like These, comes a triptych of stories about love, lust, betrayal, and the ever-intriguing interchanges between women and men. Celebrated for her powerful short f... read more
The Imposter

Anna Wharton

They say you can't choose your family . . . But what if they're wrong?Chloe lives a quiet life. Working as a newspaper archivist in the day and taking care of her nan in the evening, she's happy simply to read about the lives of others as she files the news cl... read more
Slade House

David Mitchell

Turn down Slade Alley - narrow, dank and easy to miss, even when you're looking for it. Find the small black iron door set into the right-hand wall. No handle, no keyhole, but at your touch it swings open. Enter the sunlit garden of an old house that doesn't q... read more
‘A litany of fresh heroes to make the embattled heart sing’ Caitlin Moran ‘Newman is a brilliant writer’ Observer A fresh, opinionated history of all the brilliant women you should have learned about in school but didn’t. For hundreds of years we have heard ab... read more
A Spell in the Wild

Alice Tarbuck

'These enchanting words make the world feel less broken' - Emma Mitchell, author of The Wild Remedy'Part-primer, part-chronicle; a fresh and personal account of a contemporary witch's year told with lucidity and verve' - Eley Williams, author of The Liar's Dic... read more

Lottie has 2 reviews

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Liz T.

Liz T.

Sep, 2023

I always use Lottie to edit my novels, but this is the first time I have asked her to be involved earlier in the process as a developmental/structural editor. I am absolutely delighted with the detailed and comprehensive report that Lottie gave me on the first draft of my latest novel. Her editorial feedback is incredibly helpful. My manuscript has been languishing in a drawer for a year and Lo...
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Isabelle B.

Isabelle B.

Aug, 2020

I had a really nice experience working with Lottie. My book was a translation from a French book and had lots of errors which Lottie was able to correct. She made suggestions which helped make the story and phrasing stronger. Turn around was faster than expected and I have been able to publish my book before I expected. It will be a pleasure to work with her again.

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