Edmund Pickett - Editor
I'm from the Rocky Mountain west. I've edited ten best selling thrillers, all for the same author. Now I'd like to help you.
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Overview
I'm a novelist who got into editing accidentally and discovered that I liked it. I enjoyed the first two Mark Dawson thrillers I read but the next one seemed to have editing problems so I wrote him a long email. Instead of ignoring me, he offered me a job. That was about ten books ago. Besides writing my own thrillers and editing Mark's, I read a ton of thrillers by other authors (thank you, BookBub!) so I know the market and I know all the errors that can rob your plot of suspense and your prose of polish. I love sentences that flow and characters who are unpredictable. I can offer developmental editing in the early drafts, and copy editing for the final manuscript. I have non-literary experience that comes in handy in the thriller world also. I was born and raised in Wyoming and worked outdoors in Alaska for many years, so I know horses, trucks, firearms and explosives. My own writing is available on Amazon. Currently I divide my time between the Andes mountains of Argentina and the highlands of Mexico.
Languages
English (US)
Fiction
Action & Adventure
Mystery & Crime
Thriller & Suspense
Work experience
Editor
Self-employed
December, 2013
–
Present
(over 6 years)
As an editor I have had only one client, Mark Dawson. I have found that I enjoy editing. It's a good change of pace from my own writing and I always learn something. Since Mark writes thrillers and so do I, that is my area of concentration. Since I began to work for Mark I've found that I now think like an editor when writing my own books and also when reading other writers. I also keep in touch with the market by reading any new thriller author I can find. Best sellers, indies, newbies and wannabes, I read them all, so I can help you avoid the usual errors.
My focus in developmental editing is plot, characters, setting, continuity and pacing. I won't let you pad a chapter to make your daily word count. In copy editing, I'm hell on confusing fight scenes, mixed metaphors, unclear pronoun antecedents, and revolvers with safeties. I can help to make your action scenes addictive and your characters memorable. Note: Time passes and I've now worked with several dozen authors through Reedsy. You can read their reviews of me by scrolling down. Note: the three genres I have listed above do not include fantasy, sci-fi, horror, supernatural, zombie or vampire. I don't read those genres for pleasure so I don't think I would be the best choice to edit them.
Portfolio (11 selected works)
Ghosts - John Milton #4 (John Milton Series)
Mark Dawson
John Milton is a ghost. He was Number One. The most dangerous assassin in Group Fifteen, the black-ops organisation that solves problems when diplomacy has failed. Now Milton is Her Majesty’s most wanted fugitive – an anonymous loner with a deadly set of skills. So when he is arrested following a brawl in a Texas bar, the last person he expected to bail him out was a glamorous operative from t... read more
A man called Milton walks into town… On the run from his own demons, John Milton treks through the Michigan wilderness into the town of Truth. He’s not looking for trouble, but trouble's looking for him. He finds himself up against a small-town cop who has no idea with whom he is dealing, and no idea how dangerous he is.But Milton is double crossed and badly injured. Unarmed and alone, he flee... read more
John Milton is trying to make amends for a career spent killing for the British Secret Service. He has a burning need to right wrongs - and rewrite his own bloody past.He finds himself in Louisiana - the Big Sleazy, the bayou, and the post-Katrina wreckage of the Gulf Coast - with a debt of honor to repay. Isadora Bartholomew, who saved his partner's life, needs his help. Joel Babineaux, a rut... read more
Bury your enemies, and bury them deep. John Milton thought he was done with Avi Bachman. The most dangerous man he's ever known has been incarcerated in Angola, the brutal Louisiana prison. Inmates rarely leave Angola. Once you go in, the only way out is in a box. But Bachman is no ordinary prisoner. He was an assassin for the Mossad, and he has favours to call in.Milton is in the Australian o... read more
The Agent (An Isabella Rose Thriller Book 3)
Mark Dawson
Isabella Rose is on the run, hunted by the very people she had been hired to work for. Trained killer Isabella and former handler Michael Pope are forced into hiding in India and, when a mysterious informer passes them clues on the whereabouts of Pope’s family, the prey see an opportunity to become the predators.Chased from the poverty of Mumbai’s slums into the sights of a sniper’s rifle amon... read more
Meet John Milton. He considers himself an artisan. A craftsman. His trade is murder. Milton is the man the government sends after you when everything else has failed. You wouldn't pick him out of a crowd but you wouldn't want to be on his list. In this second dip into his case files, Milton is sent to Italy to investigate the death of a colleague from Group 15, the secret assassination squad t... read more
1,000 Yards: A John Milton Short Story
Mark Dawson
From Amazon number-one best-selling author Mark Dawson, this novella is an introduction to John Milton, the most dangerous assassin in the pay of Her Majesty's government. Meet John Milton. He considers himself an artisan. A craftsman. His trade is murder. Milton is the man the government sends after you when everything else has failed. Ruthless. Brilliant. Anonymous. Lethal. You wouldn't pick... read more
An assassin haunted by his past. Two young refugees out of their depth and in need of his special talents.John Milton is no stranger to the world’s seedy underbelly. But when the former British Secret Service agent comes up against a ruthless human trafficking ring, he’ll have to fight harder than ever to conquer the evil in his path. After Milton meets a refugee who lost a sister to people sm... read more
An offer he couldn't refuse. A murder he can’t remember…John Milton’s life is about to change. The former government assassin follows a lead to Manila that he hopes will change his life. But he never expected to wake up in an unfamiliar hotel room beside a murder victim. And, unfortunately for him, Milton doesn’t remember a thing about the night before.Thrown into a gruesome Filipino prison, h... read more
New York isn’t ready for Britain’s most dangerous ex-assassin…John Milton has finally found a place to escape the bloodshed: off-season Coney Island. No tourists. No special ops. Just peace and quiet. But when a local boy witnesses a grisly murder, Milton can’t resist investigating.Milton uncovers a vicious drug kingpin and a group of crooked cops from a notorious precinct known as “The Alamo.... read more
John Milton is a former assassin for the British government. He is a ronin, trying to atone for his past sins by offering his services to those people who have no-one else to whom they can turn.Milton is keeping a low profile in London when he meets Eddie Fabian. Fabian confesses that he is considering suicide, and that the reason for his depression was the abuse that he suffered as a child. M... read more
Edmund has 55 reviews
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Edmund was a great partner on my book project.
Jack Dougherty, June 2020
Edmond gave strong notes and I appreciated and will implement most of his feedback. He is very direct, which he points out in his summary, and honest and direct feedback was what I wanted. As a first-time writer, I found a lot of his comments belittling in some instances. I'm sure some of it I take personally as the author, and don't want that to take away from a lot of valid, and well-deserve...
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Luke Spiking, June 2020
I requested a Developmental Edit of a new novel. Ed gave me the honest truth that it was a thesis on history and business in 1850 - NOT a novel. My novel wandered and lacked story elements. Ed correctly illustrated the weaknesses and what elements might be saved and what became extraneous. Ed did exactly what I wanted from a development editor -a constructive critique with guidance on what to d...
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Frank Kelso, June 2020
Edmund was very cooperative and easy to work with. He was straightforward and said what he thought. I was not very versed in the way editing is handled and he helped me get through it. It has been a pleasure to work with him.
Lanny Bledsoe, May 2020
I really appreciate the work Edmund did on my first novel in the Thriller genre. I am still getting a handle on the pace and tropes and his feedback was excellent! He gives a lot of guidance before you even submit your manuscript and the he not only gives go line by line and general feedback, he gives you some tools to help you do better the next time around.
I have one piece of advice though. ...
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Richard Fox, May 2020
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