Overview
I am a British developmental editor specialising in crime, thrillers, psychological suspense and commercial fiction. With more than sixteen years of professional experience, a literary agency background and ninety excellent Reedsy reviews, I help authors turn promising manuscripts into compelling, submission-ready novels.
A recent highlight was my work with Alison Watterson on Dating App Revenge, which was acquired by Sandycove in a five-way auction, as reported in The Bookseller. I have also worked with established authors including Sarah Naughton, June Taylor and Ruth Warburton, alongside debut writers developing their first novels and preparing to approach agents.
My particular strength is story architecture. I look closely at how structure, pacing, character development, point of view, suspense and emotional logic work together across the whole manuscript. I identify where the story comes alive, where momentum weakens, where information arrives too early or too late, and where a character’s choices could shape the plot more decisively.
You will receive a closely annotated Word manuscript and a substantial editorial report. My comments sit beside the scenes and passages that prompted them, while the report reveals the larger patterns affecting structure, character and reader experience. I explain why something may not be working, what effect it has on the reader and how you might approach it differently. The result is not simply a list of problems, but a clear and practical route through revision.
Where it would genuinely help, I also create bespoke graphs, charts and tables mapping elements such as chapter length, story phases, character presence, pacing and the placement of important revelations. These are based on my own close reading and are designed to make meaningful patterns visible.
My feedback is honest, rigorous and detailed, but also constructive. Authors often tell me that they feel understood and supported, particularly when their material is personal or the scale of revision initially feels overwhelming. A developmental edit should leave you with greater clarity and confidence, not simply a heavily commented manuscript.
I work primarily with psychological suspense, thrillers, crime and mystery, horror, women’s fiction, commercial fiction and selected young adult novels. I do not take on fantasy or science fiction.
For authors whose revised manuscripts are ready to approach agents, I offer a separate submission service covering query letters, synopses, pitches, market positioning and submission strategy.
I hold a BA in Classics, an MA in Children’s Literature and a Diploma in Journalism. I am a full-time editor based in Normandy and work with authors internationally.
If you are looking for an experienced, commercially aware editor who will take your novel seriously, identify what is holding it back and give you a clear route towards a stronger draft, I would love to hear about your project.
Services
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Languages
Awards
- Shortlisted for the Branford Boase Award. The Leeds Book Award and the Anderson prize: The Dark Inside by Rupert Wallis.
- Shortlisted for the Waterstones Prize, and the Carnegie medal: Smart by Kim Slater
- Shortlisted for the Waterstones book prize and the Independent Bookseller's Week Award: A Boy Called Hope by Lara Williamson
- Shortlisted for the Costa Book Prize: The Hanged Man Rises by Sarah Naughton
- Longlisted for the UKLA book awards: A Witch In Winter by Ruth Warburton
- Winner of the Lancashire Fantastic Book Award: Boys in Tights, Spies in Disguise by Kate Scott
- Second place in the Chicken House Competition (2011), Lovely Me, Lovely You by June Taylor
Certifications
- English Literature MA (Roehampton)
- Digital Journalism PG (Birkbeck)
- Copyediting Fiction (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Advanced Developmental Editing of Fiction (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Editing Digital Content (Chartered Institute of Editors and Proofreaders)
- Intermediate Line Editing for Fiction (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Non-fiction Developmental Editing (CIEP)
- Editing for Conscious/Inclusive Language (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Proofreading Theses and Dissertations (Chartered Institute of Editors and Proofreaders)
- Proofreading PDFs (The Publishing Training Centre)
- Essential Copyright For Publishers (The Publishing Training Centre)
- The Craft of Memoir (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Creative Copywriting For publishers (The Publishing Training Centre)
- BA Classics
Work experience
Self-employed
Self-employed
The Eve White Agency
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