Overview
Hi, I’m Shelley, a full-time British developmental editor living in Normandy. I’ve been editing professionally for more than fifteen years, and I still feel privileged whenever a writer trusts me with a novel that has taken months, or often years, to create.
My role is to help you understand what is already working, what may be holding the story back and how you can approach the next draft without losing the voice and heart that made you write it in the first place.
I work with complete manuscripts, looking closely at the architecture of the whole novel as well as the experience of reading individual scenes. Structure, pacing, character development, relationships, point of view and emotional logic all matter, but so do the quieter questions. Where does the story come alive? Where might the reader lose confidence or curiosity? Is information arriving at the right moment? Do the characters’ choices genuinely shape what happens next?
You will receive a closely annotated Word manuscript and a substantial editorial overview. The manuscript comments sit beside the passages that prompted them, while the report steps back to show you the larger patterns connecting structure, character and reader experience. Together, they provide detailed guidance and a clear route through revision.
Where it would be helpful, I also create bespoke graphs, charts and tables. These might map chapter length, story phases, character presence, pacing or the placement of important revelations. The information comes from my own close reading and is used to make meaningful patterns easier to see, never to reduce a novel to a set of mechanical scores.
My feedback is honest, detailed and practical, but it is also encouraging. I explain why something may not be working and offer ways to think about it rather than simply pointing out a problem. Authors often tell me that they feel supported and understood, particularly when the material is personal or the revision ahead initially feels overwhelming.
I specialise in psychological suspense, thrillers, crime and mystery, horror, women’s psychological and commercial fiction, and selected young adult novels. I do not take on fantasy or science fiction.
I have worked with established authors including Sarah Naughton, June Taylor and Ruth Warburton, as well as debut writers preparing their first submission. I have received more than eighty excellent reviews on Reedsy. A recent highlight was working with Alison Watterson on Dating App Revenge, which was acquired by Sandycove in a five-way auction, as reported in The Bookseller in July 2025.
For authors whose revised manuscripts are ready to approach agents, I also offer a separate submission service covering query letters, synopses, pitches and submission strategy.
I hold a BA in Classics, an MA in Children’s Literature and a Diploma in Journalism.
If you’d like thoughtful, rigorous feedback from an editor who will take both you and your novel seriously, I’d love to hear about your project.
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Awards
- Shortlisted for the Branford Boase Award. The Leeds Book Award and the Anderson prize: The Dark Inside by Rupert Wallis.
- Shortlisted for the Waterstones Prize, and the Carnegie medal: Smart by Kim Slater
- Shortlisted for the Waterstones book prize and the Independent Bookseller's Week Award: A Boy Called Hope by Lara Williamson
- Shortlisted for the Costa Book Prize: The Hanged Man Rises by Sarah Naughton
- Longlisted for the UKLA book awards: A Witch In Winter by Ruth Warburton
- Winner of the Lancashire Fantastic Book Award: Boys in Tights, Spies in Disguise by Kate Scott
- Second place in the Chicken House Competition (2011), Lovely Me, Lovely You by June Taylor
Certifications
- English Literature MA (Roehampton)
- Digital Journalism PG (Birkbeck)
- Copyediting Fiction (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Advanced Developmental Editing of Fiction (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Editing Digital Content (Chartered Institute of Editors and Proofreaders)
- Intermediate Line Editing for Fiction (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Non-fiction Developmental Editing (CIEP)
- Editing for Conscious/Inclusive Language (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Proofreading Theses and Dissertations (Chartered Institute of Editors and Proofreaders)
- Proofreading PDFs (The Publishing Training Centre)
- Essential Copyright For Publishers (The Publishing Training Centre)
- The Craft of Memoir (Editorial Freelancers Association)
- Creative Copywriting For publishers (The Publishing Training Centre)
- BA Classics
Work experience
Self-employed
Self-employed
The Eve White Agency
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