Serene Hakim

Serene Hakim – Editor

Literary agent w/ 10 yrs publishing experience with an editorial focus on YA and literary fiction. I can edit your book with an eye to sell.

Overview

Hello Reedsy!

I'm a literary agent with a decade of publishing experience. I got into this industry via a translation background and fell in love with the process of working with books from the inside out.

As an editor, I prioritize helping authors shape their manuscript to be the strongest version of itself it can be. My goal will always be to help you take your book to the next level, with a specific eye on preparing it for publication. I've worked with publishing houses across the Big 5, as well as the indies, and know what they're looking for. Beyond that, I bring a level of care and thoughtfulness to the editing process. I want to empower you as the writer in every way I can.

I'd be honored to work with you on a developmental edit of your manuscript, or to review your query letter and help you catch the eye of your dream agent. My specialties are young adult fiction and adult literary fiction, but I have also edited middle grade novels, short story collections and contemporary fiction.

Please note: if you're planning to query me in the future, it would be best not to hire me here, as that creates a complicated conflict of interest. Thank you for understanding.

Services
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Literary Fiction Middle Grade Young Adult
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Ayesha Pande Literary

Oct, 2015 — Present
Literary agent at Ayesha Pande Literary, a boutique agency representing a wide array of authors. My focus is authors writing in the YA and MG space, as well as adult literary fiction. Responsibilities include editing and polishing client manuscripts, pairing these authors/books with their perfect publishing home, and managing the life of these books, from start to finish and beyond. An advocate for my clients, I also help with career strategy and thinking creatively to maximize a projects' reach.

Laura Gross Literary Agency

Jul, 2014 — Aug, 2015 (about 1 year)
Assisted agent Laura Gross with client manuscripts and incoming queries, as well as administrative tasks at the agency.

David R. Godine

Jan, 2014 — May, 2014 (4 months)
Read incoming queries, assisted with rights and permissions, and proofread client manuscripts

Chase Literary Agency

Jan, 2013 — Aug, 2013 (7 months)
Read and evaluated incoming queries and proposals as well as client manuscripts.

Portfolio

Just Ask Elsie

Koontz, Ari

Feiwel & Friends

Developmental Editing
Bind Me Tighter Still: A Novel

Ehrlich, Lara

Red Hen Press

Developmental Editing
And the River Drags Her Down

Yun, Jihyun

Knopf Books for Young Readers

Developmental Editing
Be Gay, Do Crime

Nutting, Alissa

Dzanc Books

Editorial Assessment
Stop Me If You've Heard This One: A Novel

Arnett, Kristen

Riverhead Books

Developmental Editing
This Is the Year

Muñoz, Gloria

Holiday House

Developmental Editing
All They Ask Is Everything: A Novel

Leggett, Hadley

Lake Union Publishing

Developmental Editing
Peach Pit

Llewellyn, Molly

Dzanc Books

Developmental Editing
Eighteen Roses

Rogers, Shannon C. F.

Feiwel & Friends

Editorial Assessment
I'd Rather Burn Than Bloom

Rogers, Shannon C. F.

Feiwel & Friends

Developmental Editing
Six Truths and a Lie

Shukairy, Ream

Little, Brown Books for Young Readers

Developmental Editing
The Next New Syrian Girl

Shukairy, Ream

Little, Brown Books for Young Readers

Developmental Editing
Fiona and Jane

Ho, Jean Chen

Penguin Books

Developmental Editing
Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
With Teeth: A Novel

Arnett, Kristen

Riverhead Books

Editorial Assessment
Mostly Dead Things

Arnett, Kristen

Tin House Books

Developmental Editing

Serene has 9 reviews

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Steve H.

Steve H.

Nov, 2025

Serene Is a gifted writer and an excellent advisor on publishing and writing a successful Query. She is interested in helping you rather than just herself and is a thoughtful and responsive professional.
Brian F.

Brian F.

Nov, 2025

Serene was quick and thorough. Her notes were clear, and she welcomed and quickly answered all of my questions. I highly recommend her.
Benjamin T.

Benjamin T.

Nov, 2025

Serene's feedback was thoughtful, specific, and genuinely encouraging. She understood the tone and intent of my work, offered clear, constructive suggestions, and maintained a collaborative tone throughout. Highly recommended.
mark M.

mark M.

Sep, 2025

Exceeded expectations in this setting
David M.

David M.

Apr, 2025

It is not often in life that one receives more than what he or she paid for. Therefore, I was very pleasantly surprised with the thorough and insightful editorial assessment I received from Serene Hakim. The skill of meaningful criticism is an art in itself, and I found Serene's reading of my w...
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