Pamela Sourelis

Pamela Sourelis – Editor

Developmental editor, writing coach; 25+ years helping fiction and memoir writers deepen and shape their work, and strengthen their voices.

Overview

I’ve helped hundreds of writers find and strengthen their voices; get comfortable with the writing process; dig more deeply into their craft; and explore, structure, and refine their work.


I began my editing career as an independent contractor working with business and education publishers, such as Scott, Foresman; McGraw-Hill; and Houghton/Mifflin.


Soon after earning an MFA in writing from Vermont College of Fine Arts, I started my own company and began working directly with authors—primarily writers of fiction (historical, sci-fi, fantasy, young adult, literary) and memoir—as an editor, workshop facilitator, and coach.



HOW I CAN HELP


Here at Reedsy I offer two services: Developmental Editing and Coaching


DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING is "big-picture" editing done on a completed (or nearly completed) manuscript.


I look at the shape and pacing of the work, your use of setting, the complexity of your characters, your use of language (your voice and tone, the consistency of your style), and at the strength of the connection you’ve created with your audience.


I think of a manuscript as a living being with a personality and a sense of purpose and direction.


A skilled reader and listener (yes, I listen to the story), I can identify the places a writer can better serve their story by following its lead rather than trying to haul it into a preconceived shape.


There are no hard-and-fast rules, of course, only choices. It’s my job to point them out to you in a clear, respectful way and help you work through them, which sometimes involves inviting you to move out of your comfort zone.



If you need help beginning a manuscript or getting unstuck or getting more comfortable with your writing process or brushing up on any of the elements of fiction or memoir (characterization, setting, point of view, scene, dialog . . .), I can help you in my role as WRITING COACH.



I think the best way forward is for us to schedule a short (20-30 minute) Zoom chat so we can meet each other, discuss your project, and see if we’re a good fit. If you send me a request, we can set something up.



P.S. Reedsy suggests we add something about ourselves that might surprise you. So here goes: I’m also a professional animal communicator. The animals, my own (including the two in my photo) and the many I have worked with, have taught me a great deal about listening.



TESTIMONIALS


I didn’t always agree with the master at first, but in the end I found out she was always spot on.

- James Conroyd Martin,

Award-winning historical fiction writer



[Pam’s] guidance helped me venture into the deeper layers of my story I didn’t know existed.

- Bingz Huang



. . . Pam brought balance to both strong and weak aspects of my work, pushing me where I needed to be pushed.

- Stephanie Dos Santos



Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Health & Wellbeing
Fiction
Fantasy Historical Fiction Literary Fiction Science Fiction Short Story Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (US)
Certifications
  • MFA Writing, Vermont College of fine Arts
  • MA English, DePaul University
  • BA Journalism, Temple University

Work experience

Self-employed

Jan, 1996 — Present
As a developmental editor, I help creative writers deepen and shape their drafts, and strengthen their writing voices. * As a writing coach, I help writers who don't know how to begin, begin; find ways of getting unstuck; get more comfortable with their writing process; brush up on any of the elements of fiction or memoir (characterization, setting, point of view, scene, dialog . . .); and ultimately create a workable first draft. * I also facilitate writing workshops: journaling, fiction, memoir

Multiple Chicago-Area Publishers

Jan, 1990 — Jan, 1996 (about 6 years)
For a number of years before starting my own company, I was a freelance developmental editor and copyeditor for a number of Chicago-area education and business publishers, including Heinemann, McGraw-Hill, Prentice-Hall, Scott-Foresman, Richard D. Irwin , and IDG books, now Wiley (publisher of the Dummies books) One of my favorite projects was working with Patrick Pfeiffer, a new writer at the time, on his book Bass Guitar for Dummies, which has been translated into five languages. I also began working with James Conroyd Martin, also a new writer at the, time, and continue working with him today. Most of his books (historical fiction) have been translated into Polish, and several of them have won prestigious awards.

DePaul University, Loyola University

Jan, 1983 — Jun, 1993 (over 10 years)
I'm including this experience, in a very general way, to illustrate that I've been working with writers for a long time. I was a rebel of sorts at both universities, allowing students to choose their own topics, structuring the classroom to be student centered, teaching student writers about the process of writing and the need for multiple drafts to allow their thoughts to take shape, teaching student writers how to respond to each other's drafts. The classroom was a collaborative environment. I learned so much from these people and have taken much of that knowledge and experience into my work as a developmental editor and writing coach.

Portfolio

Made with Reedsy
One Time a Stranger

Tower, Michael

Michael Thomas Tower

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One Star Away

Salva, Imogene

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Janet D.

Janet D.

May, 2024

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Pam is a great coach. If you're looking to rise to the next level in your writing journey, she'll get you there. She will work as hard for you as you do for yourself. She knows the ropes and is happy to pass along her knowledge so you can succeed. She's very honest, so be prepared to hear the tr...
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Jessica B.

Jessica B.

Apr, 2024

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I had no doubts about working with Pamela from the very beginning. She has an enthusiasm for words that melds with an astute anticipation of what an author may be feeling and that induced a feeling of comfort in me from the onset of our relationship. I’ll be working with her again, and would reco...
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Ken H.

Ken H.

Mar, 2024

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As a first-time novelist, you just don't know what you don't know. Pam's suggestion to consider a developmental editor rather than a copy editor, at the very beginning, was invaluable. The strength of my main character grew with every suggestion she made. I hesitate to share this positive revie...
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Dorothy M.

Dorothy M.

Mar, 2025

Pam is professional and thorough. At our initial interview I was impressed with her direct manner as well as her varied and numerous credentials. Her review and feedback were spot on and very helpful.
Ruth S.

Ruth S.

Mar, 2025

Pamela is a smart, incisive, experienced collaborator. She helped me get started with the first draft of my historical novel, keeping me on a fairly strict structure and schedule. Because I have only written non-fiction until now, her most valuable input was teaching me keys for writing scenes, c...
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