Mary Novak

Mary Novak – Editor

Developmental editor in spaces where fantasy and romance overlap: paranormal romance, fairytale retellings, historical fantasy

Overview

I'm a passionate editor of genre fiction. You can count on me to take your light entertainment very seriously.

The developmental edits you'll receive from me come in three parts. First, I'll attach hundreds of comments to your story calling attention to each specific issue I find. I will also send you a detailed editorial letter that discusses your story's quality and flow on a more holistic level. My critique style is honest and kind. You'll get direct feedback and actionable suggestions that will leave you feeling energized and excited to dive into your revisions.

After you've had time to digest my written feedback I include some consultation time as the final part of my editing package. We'll set up a time to chat about your story in light of my feedback. This friendly, light discussion often proves invaluable in generating concrete solutions to the most challenging problems in the story. I find that when we bring together our two minds, both wanting the absolute best for your story, the results can be miraculous.

Services
Fiction
Dark Romance Epic Fantasy Historical Mysteries Humor & Comedy Romantic Comedy Romantic Fantasy Urban Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

May, 2015 — Present
I'm a freelance developmental editor. I have worked in many genres, but most of my work comes from YA fantasy romance and urban fantasy.

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Breaking Destiny

Walters, Mitty

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Unwanted (Emergence)

Walker, Catherine M.

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Mary has 24 reviews

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Thomas T.

Thomas T.

Feb, 2026

Mary is professional and gave great advice and ideas to make my story better.
VM W.

VM W.

Jan, 2026

I’m very grateful for Mary’s assistance. Her thoughtful review highlighted several potential issues, which I was able to address thanks to her insights. Mary was incredibly courteous, clear, and a pleasure to work with. Her feedback was professional, direct, and delivered with a gentle, supportiv...
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Jessica B.

Jessica B.

Dec, 2025

Mary’s developmental assessment of my manuscript delivered exactly what my story needed. She dove into my world with genuine care and gave thoughtful, thorough feedback that helped me tighten my plot, deepen my characters, and clarify my magic system. Every note felt purposeful. She highlighted w...
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David G.

David G.

Nov, 2025

Working with M. Novak was a dream come true! She completed the work quickly and provided invaluable feedback for my project. It would absolutely not be the same without her. She provided a lot of help, and having a video chat after I read through her review notes helped me to get all the answers ...
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Quinton S. M.

Quinton S. M.

Oct, 2025

Working with Mary was everything I had hoped for in my first experience writing a book and collaborating with a developmental editor. She was thorough in her process, respectful in her critiques, and always professional in her communication. Mary was upfront when my project took longer than expe...
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