Mary Novak

Mary Novak – Editor

Developmental editor in spaces where fantasy and romance overlap: romantasy, fairytale retellings, historical fantasy

Overview

I'm a passionate editor of genre fiction. You can count on me to take your light entertainment very seriously.

The developmental edits you'll receive from me come in three parts. First, I'll attach hundreds of comments to your story calling attention to each specific issue I find. I will also send you a detailed editorial letter that discusses your story's quality and flow on a more holistic level. My critique style is honest and kind. You'll get direct feedback and actionable suggestions that will leave you feeling energized and excited to dive into your revisions.

After you've had time to digest my written feedback I include some consultation time as the final part of my editing package. We'll set up a time to chat about your story in light of my feedback. This friendly, light discussion often proves invaluable in generating concrete solutions to the most challenging problems in the story. I find that when we bring together our two minds, both wanting the absolute best for your story, the results can be miraculous.

Services
Fiction
Dark Romance Epic Fantasy Historical Mysteries Humor & Comedy Romantic Comedy Romantic Fantasy Urban Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

May, 2015 — Present
I'm a freelance developmental editor. I have worked in many genres, but most of my work comes from YA fantasy romance and urban fantasy.

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Breaking Destiny

Walters, Mitty

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Unwanted (Emergence)

Walker, Catherine M.

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Mary has 29 reviews

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C. M. A.

C. M. A.

Jun, 2026

Mary is great at sussing out the weaknesses of the story and coming up with ways to fix them. Excellent communication skills, with as many check-ins as required. She did need a little flexibility in the timeline for our project, but it was absolutely worth it.
Adam G.

Adam G.

May, 2026

Mary provided excellent developmental editing for my manuscript. Her turnaround time was prompt, and her insights into character motivation and plot mechanics were invaluable. She is very kind, professional, and took the time to thoroughly discuss her notes with me. I highly recommend her service...
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Drew D.

Drew D.

May, 2026

Very much enjoyed working with Mary. She brought years of experience to my project that I was lacking. I feel assured that my finished product will be that much better when everything is done after speaking with her.
Sammy D.

Sammy D.

Apr, 2026

I had such a wonderful experience working with Mary on my first novel. From the very beginning, her feedback was thoughtful, insightful, and incredibly encouraging. What I appreciated most was her ability to provide clear, constructive guidance while still respecting my voice as a writer. Her no...
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Morgana W.

Morgana W.

Mar, 2026

Working with Mary was my first time hiring an editor, and the experience has been everything I hoped for. She has been attentive, responsive, and kind, while also offering honest, thoughtful suggestions that have genuinely improved my work. She seems truly invested in both my writing and my proc...
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