Lucy York

Lucy York – Editor

Fiction editor with 18 years’ experience. I’m passionate about crafting standout stories and I love working on YA, fantasy and romance.

Overview

Hello, I’m Lucy. I help authors to get their manuscripts into shape for self-publishing or to submit to agents and publishers. I specialise in adult romance, adult fantasy and young adult fiction.


I offer manuscript critiques, developmental edits and line-edits, and I work on UK and US English text. My goal is not just to help you better your manuscript, but also to equip you with knowledge and techniques to hone your writing craft. I build lasting working relationships with my author clients, many of whom I have collaborated with on multiple books.


I have been editing books for over 18 years. I started out as an editorial assistant and worked my way up to managing editor at Summersdale (Octopus). For three years I was a freelance editor, working on YA novels with self-published authors, romance novels for Harper Collins, the Warhammer fantasy series for Black Library, adult fiction for Simon & Schuster and over 100 titles for Titan Books across their list of urban fantasy, steampunk, horror and TV/film tie-in novelisations. I returned to an in-house role as a senior and commissioning editor with Quarto Publishing for five years. Having worked in these in-house roles, I understand the demands and standards of the publishing industry. As a freelance editor, I find it hugely rewarding to work with authors to ensure their stories stand out in a competitive marketplace. Since 2018, I have run my own editorial business, helping authors to get their manuscripts in shape for publication.


My number one principle when editing is: it’s your story, told in your voice. As your editor, I will give a frank assessment of aspects of your manuscript that would benefit from improvement, then support and guide you to make your work the best it can be. My particular strengths lie in developing believable characters whose motivations drive the action forwards, honing the details that make your creative world vividly real and providing practical solutions to plot problems. The editorial process will be a dialogue and we’ll hopefully have some fun along the way.

Services
Fiction
Fantasy Horror Romance Women's Fiction Young Adult
Languages
English (UK) English (US)
Certifications
  • The Publishing Training Centre Copy-editing Skills
  • University of Edinburgh MA Honours English Literature and French
  • Fiction Editing

Work experience

Self-employed

May, 2018 — Present

I help authors to get their manuscripts into shape for self-publishing or to submit to agents and publishers. I specialise in adult romance, adult fantasy and young adult fiction. I offer manuscript critiques, developmental edits and line-edits, and I work on UK and US English text.

Bright Press (Quarto Publishing Group)

Nov, 2014 — May, 2018 (over 3 years)

I developed new book concepts and commissioned content for a wide range of mainly non-fiction books, as well as some fiction graphic novels for the YA market. I worked closely with authors on developmental edits and briefed designers, illustrators and other creatives involved in the book production process. I managed relationships with coedition partner publishers in the UK and US such as Thames & Hudson, Octopus (Hachette), Abrams Books and Sterling Publishing.

Quid Publishing (Quarto Publishing Group)

Feb, 2013 — Nov, 2014 (over 1 year)

I project-managed a range of illustrated non-fiction titles from commissioning through to production, which included: guiding authors throughout manuscript development and the editorial process, copy-editing text and fact-checking, conducting picture research and clearing permissions, briefing and liaising with designers, freelance proofreaders and indexers.

Self-employed

Jul, 2010 — Feb, 2013 (over 2 years)

I undertook developmental edits, copy-edits and proofreads of fiction books for self-published authors and clients including Titan Books, Black Library and Simon & Schuster.

Summersdale (Octopus/Hachette)

Apr, 2007 — Jul, 2010 (about 3 years)

I managed an editorial team of five and a list of 90 non-fiction titles per year. I commissioned authors and worked closely with them to develop manuscripts, wrote cover briefs and liaised with designers on cover designs, wrote book jacket copy and sales materials, maintained the house style sheet and ensured high editorial standards across the list.

Summersdale (Octopus/Hachette)

Apr, 2006 — Apr, 2007 (about 1 year)

I worked on a range of non-fiction books with an emphasis on long-form narrative travel writing. My role involved developmental editing, copy-editing, proofreading and assessing author submissions.

Portfolio

When her life hits rock bottom, the only way is up... A sizzling novel of rags to riches from Tara Bond.
The perfect festive stocking-filler: a heartwarming and funny novella by bestselling author Chrissie Manby. With just two weeks to go until Christmas, the menfolk of the Benson-Edwards household - stars of The Proper Family series - are both on Santa's legenda... read more
In 1920s Switzerland, vampire lovers Charlotte and Karl are drawn into turmoil as Godric Reiniger, a local filmmaker and activist with sinister ambitions, begins his rise to power.Meanwhile, fiery dancer Emil achieves his dream to partner the legendary balleri... read more
Deep in the shadows under the Paris Opera House resides Erik the Phantom, mysteriously enduring through the decades as the mastermind behind a strange and secret agency. A revolving door of female agents are charged by wealthy Parisians and the French Governme... read more
The collapse of the Victoria Embankment uncovers a passage to an unknown realm beneath the city. Langdon St. Ives sets out to explore it, not knowing that a brilliant and wealthy psychopathic murderer is working to keep the underworld’s secrets hidden for reas... read more
"Fans of Sex in the City, the Shopaholic series, and Lindsay Kelk's I Heart Series will love this easy to root for heroine and the hilarious situations she tends to find herself in." Novel EscapesWould you move 6,000 miles to be with the love of your life? Pla... read more
All the Birds in the Sky

Charlie Jane Anders

Entertainment Weekly's 27 Female Authors Who Rule Sci-Fi and Fantasy Right Now Winner of the 2017 Nebula Award for Best NovelFinalist for the 2017 Hugo Award for Best NovelPaste's 50 Best Books of the 21st Century (So Far) List“The book is full of quirkiness a... read more
Hill of the Angels is set during the English Civil War. Twelve-year-old Abigail Booth is the daughter of sheep farmers and textile workers; Grace Fowler is the daughter of the parish priest. They become friends and climb together to the Hill of the Angels, a r... read more
Levison Wood was only 22 when he decided to hitch-hike from England to India through Russia, Iran, Afghanistan and Pakistan, but he wasn't the conventional follower of the hippy trail. A fascination with the deeds of the early explorers, a history degree in th... read more
An entertaining graphic adaptation of the oldest military treatise in the world.Hailed as the oldest philosophical discussion on military strategy, Sun Tzu’s The Art of War has been adapted as a graphic novel by award-winning illustrator Pete Katz. In this col... read more
An inspirational account of eight women on one very unique expedition Felicity Aston challenged women in many countries, asking if they could ski to the South Pole, as she set out to create the most international all-female expedition ever to the Pole. The tea... read more
Just when life seemed its darkest, Samantha found happiness—Pascal, and his 10-year-old son, and the rigors of country life—in an unexpected trip to FranceWhen Samantha Brick’s life started to unravel—her company in liquidation, homeless, penniless, and friend... read more
Relics

Tim Lebbon

There’s an underground black market for arcane things. Akin to the trade in rhino horns or tigers’ bones, this network traffics in remains of gryphons, faeries, goblins, and other fantastic creatures.When her fiancé Vince goes missing Angela Gough, an American... read more
In Victorian London, India Black has all the attributes a high-class madam needs to run a successful brothel--wit, beauty, and an ability to lie with a smile. Luckily for Her Majesty's Government, all these talents also make her a first-rate spy...India Black,... read more
These three classic SF stories follow the adventures of Ragnar the Space Wolf, from his recruitment by the Space Marines on the savage world of Fenris to his aventures amongst the stars. Whether Ragnar and his friends are fighting orks, mutants, or the foul fo... read more
At the farthest reaches of the solar system Ellen Ripley awakens on board the space station Auriga Her last memory is of her own fiery death And yet she is somehow alive Ripley discovers that her resurrection is a result of an incredible experiment which has a... read more
Reported sightings of a hellish hound and the discovery of newly dead desiccated corpses bring Sam and Dean Winchester to Brennan, Ohio. But when they catch the monster canine it turns out to be "Frankenmutt"; a reanimated patchwork of pieces from separate dog... read more
Book one in the acclaimed YA fantasy series, The Ambeth Chronicles 'The end of everything? Great, no pressure then.' Take a journey to Ambeth, where time twists and a palace gleams in green gardens. Where Light and Dark hold the Balance of the worlds, and beau... read more
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.This modern retelling of the classic fairy tale of Beauty and the Beast is told here in a graphic novel format. More than 100 pages of illustrated action, adventure, and love teach a lesson to look beyond the surface and le... read more
When Damnos is hit by cataclysmic earthquakes, an ancient force is awakened. Deep beneath the earth, the necrons rise from their slumber to decimate the human populace. All appears lost until salvation comes from the heavens - the Ultramarines brave an orbital... read more
The official link between Gotham seasons two and three, revealing Jim Gordon's return to Gotham City to set himself up as a freelance bounty hunter.SET IN THE DRAMATIC AFTERMATH OF GOTHAM SEASON TWO AND LEADING INTO THE THRILLING EVENTS OF SEASON THREE, THE NE... read more
Out of the spotlight, in the darker corners of the studio backlots, Hollywood hides a remarkable secret. Actor or actress, set designer, electrician, best boy, or grip—in la-la land, it pays not to be human. Vampires, succubae, trolls, elementals, goblins—stud... read more
Former London journalist Elspeth Reeves is trying to carve a new life for herself in the sleepy Oxfordshire countryside, until she's sent to cover the excavation of a notorious local witch's grave. Three hundred years ago, her name mixed up with murder and bla... read more
The new novel from the author of the Sunday Timesbestseller, The Silversmith's Wife. Stunning historical fiction, perfect for fans of Tracy Chevalier. Broadstairs, Kent, 1851. Once a sleepy fishing village, now a select sea-bathing resort, this is a place wher... read more

Lucy has 26 reviews

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Lynn C.

Lynn C.

Apr, 2024

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Lucy is amazing to work with! Clear, detailed, insightful and kind, her comments are spot-on, direct and helpful. Reactive and available, Lucy offered me precious advice and professional feedback on my work while communicating with me through the entire process. I would love to work with her again as I am actually sad this project with her is over and will definitely entrust her with my next book!
Marina N.

Marina N.

Aug, 2023

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Lucy has been incredibly helpful as the editor for my debut manuscript. Lucy provided a thorough manuscript assessment and a line-by-line edit. I learned so much through the process that has helped me improve my skill as a writer. She was very responsive to my questions and returned my work before the agreed deadline. Most importantly, she built up my confidence as a writer which has given me c...
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Lisa-Marie M.

Lisa-Marie M.

Aug, 2020

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What can I say about Lucy other than WOW!! A professionalism that is second to none. The first three books in my series now standout from the book world crowd and it's all thanks to this wonderful, talented and hardworking woman. Not only did Lucy ensure my books were at their utmost best, she also created the back cover blurbs for me - which were spot on each time. Lucy, thank you so much...
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Lucy Y.
Thank you for your kind words, Lisa-Marie. It has been an absolute pleasure collaborating with you on this trilogy and seeing how your ideas and characters have developed. I love your commitment an...
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claire D.

claire D.

Jun, 2024

Lucy was so great to work with. She really knew the genres I wanted to discuss, was so easy to work with, answered all the questions I had, and helped me have a few epiphanies--not only about the content of my work, but also how to proceed with it--for which I am deeply grateful. I'd love to work with her again.
Cheryl E.

Cheryl E.

May, 2024

Lucy provided a wonderful and detailed constructive critique of even an amateur manuscript. Her insight is thoughtful and invaluable, presented in a generous and gracious manner.

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