Jacquelin Cangro

Jacquelin Cangro – Editor

I'm a seasoned developmental book editor with 20 years of experience at Penguin Random House committed to helping you make your story sing!

Overview

Hi! I'm a seasoned, award-winning developmental editor of fiction and nonfiction with 20 years of experience at Penguin Random House and Simon & Schuster. I've worked with New York Times bestselling authors such as John Green, Ruta Sepetys, and Jacqueline Woodson. My favorite genres are YA, romance (all sub-genres), and historical fiction. I have also been a book coach and writing instructor for more than two decades.


My goal is to help you strengthen your work while remaining true to your vision. I do this by providing clear suggestions with actionable feedback so you know the next steps to make your story the best it can be. After all this time working with authors (and being one myself), I know one thing for sure: you have a unique story to tell. I can help you share that story with the world.


Some kind words from recent clients:


--Jackie is more than just an editor; she is an inspiration and a push to see a story through to the end. Her comments on the draft of my first novel were detailed and informative, and I now have a clear map of how to forge ahead. I would recommend her to a writer at any stage in the process. ~Adrienne Oliver, author of Lorraine (historical fiction)


-- I got lucky when Jackie agreed to be my editor. She was extremely positive with her suggestions and always available for my questions. I would highly recommend her to any writer who wants their work to be the best possible. ~Carol Fricke, author of Hope Transported (women's fiction)


-- Jackie’s not just a writer or editor. She’s a reader. And the sort of reader who reminds a writer that his duty is to the reader first and to his own hangups and sacred moo-cows second. She knows that stories have starts and ends and the good ones have peaks and valleys and buckets of conflict. She also gives it to you straight–without making you feel like a complete idiot…Every writer should be lucky enough to have someone like her around. ~Ken Wheaton, author of The First Annual Grand Prairie Rabbit Festival (upmarket fiction)

Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Contemporary Romance Historical Fiction Historical Romance Romantic Comedy Women's Fiction Young Adult
Languages
English (UK) English (US)
Awards
  • Saturday Evening Post's Great American Stories, Finalist
Certifications
  • MFA in Creative Writing, Georgia State University
  • Certificate in Developmental Editing, Editorial Freelancers Association
  • Certificate in Copy Editing, Editorial Freelancers Association

Work experience

Self-employed

Jan, 2008 — Present

*Provide comprehensive content review of manuscripts, specializing in historical fiction, romance, women's fiction, and YA.
*Offer insight into the story elements that are working and what areas of the story need attention.
*Suggest options for revision with a strategy for tackling the most pressing story issues.

GrubStreet

Sep, 2012 — Present

Develop course concepts and syllabi for multi-weeks courses, seminars, and workshops, such as:

*Intro to Fiction

*Unlocking Your Story's Inciting Incident

*Writing About Place: Creating an Immersive Setting

*Be Your Own Editor: Getting Your Novel Ready for Publication

Penguin Random House

Feb, 2000 — Dec, 2019 (almost 20 years)

*Worked with New York Times bestselling authors such as John Green, Ruta Sepetys, and Jacqueline Woodson.
*Read and evaluated query letters and manuscripts.

Portfolio

Developmental Editing
Crash Into Me

St. John, Darci

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Welcome to Grand Prairie, Louisiana—land of confounding accents, hard-drinking senior citizens, and charming sinners—brought to hilarious life in a bracing, heartfelt debut novel simmering wit... read more
Developmental Editing
The Mosquito Hours

Melissa DeLorenzo

“In prose as undulating as the ocean by which the story is set, THE MOSQUITO HOURS chronicles the Crawford family, a multi-generational family of widowed and unwed women, momentarily at the ebb tide of their lives. Melissa Corliss DeLorenzo takes us into the w... read more
Addressed to Greta

Sussman, Fiona

Developmental Editing
Some seven million people board the New York City subway every day, each one with a story to tell. The Subway Chronicles collects twenty-seven of the tales, dramas and comedies that unfold during the daily commute. From the “mole people” living in the subway t... read more
Made with Reedsy
Dark Side of the Glass

Brown, A.

Developmental Editing
The Shadow in Her Pocket

Koppel Torres, Lorena

Talking Underwater

Melissa DeLorenzo

“Sister” is a sacred word. Cattail Beach is joy. Until one day at its shore, both are lost in a single moment.Family is life, and Amy enjoys a gentle, happy one. Devoted parents, a loving marriage, two little girls, a fulfilling career and a cherished relation... read more
In the halls of Congress, on the streets, in the media, the war on fast food is on. Tofu may be topical, but bacon is eternal. Bacon and Egg Man, Ken Wheaton’s second novel, is a sly send-up of a politically correct food establishment, where the Northeast has ... read more
A freak accident forces a New Yorker to return to Louisiana and confront her Cajun pastThere is nothing more dangerous than a spooked rhinoceros. It is just before lunchtime when Huey, the prized black rhino of Broussard, Louisiana, erupts from his enclosure, ... read more
New York City is one of the most famous places in the world, but it's also home to more than eight million residents. People who are living everyday lives filled with the wonders and fears we all share. "You, Me and the Rest of Us: #NewYorkStories" is a collec... read more
In the 1950s Appalachia coal fields of Solitude, VA... Smiley Hanlon is placed in the "Mentally Retarded" Class... Because he is different...Being different in America has never been easy; being born different and in the wrong body in Solitude, Virginia in the... read more

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Heather O.

Heather O.

Apr, 2024

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Working with Jackie has proven to be a high value investment in the process of publishing my first book. The levels of expertise, detail, care and attention that she provided has not only set me up for success, but she has taught me invaluable insights on how to craft a story that is engaging and satisfying. The quality of Jackie's work, notes, advice and feedback went beyond expectations. The ...
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Scott J.

Scott J.

Dec, 2023

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Pick Jackie! She is an excellent editor and knows the publishing business well. Her comments were very thoughtful and she provided me exactly what I needed in a development edit of my first draft. She provided me with so much to digest, including many questions I need to answer about my story and my characters. Thank you, Jackie! If one day I am lucky enough to get published, I know she wi...
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Alyssa A.

Alyssa A.

Dec, 2022

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First of all, let me start by saying I have never gotten so much value for my money, ever. Jackie offers a fair price for a lot of feedback and I've never been so happy to have my credit card charged. When Jackie sent me her assessment, I almost cried. It was so on-point, like she was looking into my soul and seeing me for exactly who I was. I am so eternally grateful to her for treating my ma...
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Christina P.

Christina P.

Jul, 2024

Jackie is a superb editor. Her notes were extensive, instructive and clear. She was brilliantly encouraging which made the whole experience positive and uplifting. I've worked with other editors, but Jackie is in another league, easily surpassing my expectations. I wouldn't hesitate to recommend her to other writers at whatever stage they are in their careers. She gets booked up quickly but I p...
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Allison K.

Allison K.

Jul, 2024

Working with Jacquelin is a great experience. I found her feedback thoughtful and responsive. I would not hesitate to work with her again. Do yourself a favor, and just hire Jacquelin!

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