Ian W. Sainsbury

Ian W. Sainsbury – Editor

Let a Kindle Storyteller winner help you make your book the best it can be. I'm friendly, experienced, and I love discovering new stories.

Overview

Hi, I'm Ian. Thanks for checking out my profile. I love books, and (like all compulsive readers) I love discovering new writers.

If we work together, I promise to do everything I can to bring out your voice, draw your readers into your story, and make your book compelling and commercial. I'll be honest and transparent throughout the process. My only goal is to help you make your story as unputdownable as possible.

My developmental edit will get straight to the point. I'll tell you what's working, what isn't, and help you identify what you can do about it.

I also offer detailed copy editing, if you want to focus on your writing sentence by sentence. I'll help you to recognise (or recognize—I edit books in British, American, Canadian, and Australian English) areas where your writing shines, and I'll point out any bad habits so you can nip them in the bud. For instance, I'll let you know if you overuse clichés like 'nip them in the bud'.

About me: I've read at least half a billion words of fiction, written over a million words in my novels, and sold hundreds of thousands of books since first publishing in 2016. I've edited most of my own novels, including The Picture on the Fridge, which won the Kindle Storyteller Award in 2019.

No AI-generated manuscripts, please. By all means, use a smart grammar checker to clean up your prose, but it's your voice I'm interested in.

"Ian has a brilliant eye for character, story and spotting all my bad habits. His feedback weeds out the bad stuff, leans into what’s good, and gives me the confidence to go leaping into the next draft. It’s got to the point where I don’t think I can finish anything without running it by him first!" Mark Stay, author of The Witches of Woodville series, Robot Overlords, and The End of Magic series.

"Ian has been invaluable both as an editor and mentor. When I think I finally have a novel or story ready to publish, I send it to Ian for a final read and discover the real work is still ahead of me. He has an amazing eye for detail, both with grammar and sentence structure but also spotting factual, historical, and logical flaws. He has an understanding of story structure and character that is second to none. He makes me look good, and elevates my storytelling!" Andy Chapman, author and screenwriter.

Services
Fiction
Epic Fantasy Horror Psychological Thriller Science Fiction Urban Fantasy
Languages
English (AUS) English (UK) English (US)
Awards
  • Kindle Storyteller Award 2019

Work experience

Martha Gray Works

Mar, 2016 — Present
I've written fifteen novels and one novelette, comedy routines and a Las Vegas show for AGT Season 10 winner Paul Zerdin, pilot TV scripts and comedy sketches. During that time, I've edited other writers' novels, increasingly specializing in developmental editing.

Portfolio

Developmental Editing
The Crow Folk: The Witches of Woodville 1

Stay, Mark

Simon & Schuster UK

Developmental Editing
The End Of Magic

Stay, Mark

Unusually Tall Stories Ltd

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
HOLLY KING

Mark Stay

Simon & Schuster UK

Developmental Editing
The End of Dragons (The End of Magic Book 2)

Stay, Mark

Unusually Tall Stories Limited

Developmental Editing
Jack's Game: (Shelley Town RPG - Book One)

Chapman, Andrew

Independently published

Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Babes in the Wood: The Witches of Woodville 2

Mark Stay

Simon and Schuster UK

Developmental Editing
Ghost of Ivy Barn

Mark Stay

Simon & Schuster UK

Developmental Editing
The Corn Bride

Mark Stay

Simon & Schuster

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
The Blurred Lands

Sainsbury, Ian W.

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Halfheroes

Sainsbury, Ian W.

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Copy Editing
Copy Editing

Ian W. has 4 reviews

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Joshua D.

Joshua D.

Jan, 2026

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Ian is a meticulous editor, worth every penny you’d spend on editorial. Even though I hired Ian only to do copy edits, he put in the extra effort to proofread and also give some inputs on developmental level. Every comment he makes goes a long way in making my manuscript better. His impeccable wo...
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Ian W. S.
Thanks for the review, Joshua. Good luck with the book, the game, and the kickstarter campaign! I wish you every success with them.
Fan L.

Fan L.

Mar, 2026

Great editor! Beyond expectations! I really enjoy our collaboration!
Andrew M.

Andrew M.

Mar, 2026

Ian just finished a developmental edit of my book. He did a fantastic job. He broke down my story lines, plots and characters and provided a chapter by chapter guide on areas that work and areas that need improvement. He also provided an overarching view of how to improve the structure of my book...
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Ian W. S.
Thanks for the feedback, Andrew, and good luck with the book. Ian
Bradley L.

Bradley L.

Feb, 2026

I was very lucky to find an dev editor who had the sensibility necessary for my unusual project. His observations were clear, instructive and useful, and will help me bring my book closer to the publishing finish line.
Ian W. S.
Thanks for the great review, Bradley. Your refreshing and playful novel was a pleasure to work on, and throughout the process you were a communicative and open-minded client. I hope to work with yo...
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