Elizabeth Thurmond

Elizabeth Thurmond – Editor

20+ year proofreader and copyeditor, incl. Disney Publishing and Hallmark Books. Fantasy, sci-fi, mystery/thriller, horror (Adult, MG, YA).

Overview

I am a proofreader and copyeditor with a focus on fantasy, sci-fi, mystery, thrillers and horror for adult, YA and Middle Grade readers. My experience since 2010 includes work with private clients, small publishers, and well-known brands like Hallmark and Disney. I also worked as a corporate proofreader for over a decade.

When working on a project, I first receive instructions and information about special needs or concerns from the client, such as whether the manuscript is being published or is being sent out to agents. I then provide a comprehensive markup with attention to typos, spelling, punctuation, grammar, syntax, repetition and usage, using Microsoft Word with tracked changes. If I see anything that may need the author's attention -- a character or place name change, a confusing paragraph, etc. -- I flag it in a comment at the margins. Any queries I insert are for the author to consider, and I don't require an answer!

My edits are technical only. I do not offer line editing services (these are content/style-based and collaborative) or instructional support on the rules of grammar or how to use Microsoft Word. I do not use any form of AI assistance at any stage of my editing process.

I have received some requests that I've had to turn down because the manuscript was not ready for my services. The edits I provide are most effectively used as the final review before a manuscript is self-published or submitted to agents and editors -- think of me as the last line of defense against technical errors.

Previous projects include the Kane Chronicles and other books by Rick Riordan, as well as books by other authors in the Rick Riordan Presents line (middle-grade and YA fantasy by multicultural authors); books in the Star Wars High Republic series; Ruin & Roses by Deanna Ortega; $LAY by Scott Sigler; Archipelago by HR Hawkins; The Walls of Delusion by Steven J. Norton.

Services
Fiction
Cozy Mysteries Epic Fantasy Horror Middle Grade Fantasy Psychological Thriller Time Travel Urban Fantasy Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (AUS) English (CAN) English (NZ) English (SA) English (UK) English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

Jan, 2012 — Present
Copyediting and proofreading fiction, screenplays, marketing materials, essays and video captions. In addition to private clients I have worked for advertising agencies, the XPrize Foundation, and Belkin.

Disney Publishing Worldwide

Sep, 2021 — Jul, 2022 (10 months)
Proofread books for electronic release across all product lines, from children's books to Hyperion original YA to Star Wars to nonfiction for National Geographic. Marked up manuscripts for audiobook performances.

Hallmark Books

Aug, 2018 — Nov, 2019 (over 1 year)
On-demand copyeditor and proofreader for sweet romance novels.

Alpha Pictures

Jul, 2016 — Jun, 2017 (11 months)
Pitched adaptations of Chinese intellectual property to the head of development & production. Shepherded projects through the development process, including running and participating in writers'-room-style development meetings and writing story treatments. Evaluated potential writers in conjunction with head of development & production. Wrote and designed one-sheets and pitch decks showcasing IP potential for film franchises or TV series.

Dreamspinner Press

Feb, 2015 — Aug, 2015 (6 months)
Copy and developmental editing and proofreading for romance and YA novels with LGBT themes.

NBCUniversal, Inc.

Aug, 2014 — Jan, 2015 (5 months)
Proofread episode recaps and other text for. Wrote series descriptions for NBC Classic series website. Wrote, proofread and entered data for the Saturday Night Live 40th anniversary iPhone app.

Disney Publishing Worldwide

Apr, 2013 — Nov, 2013 (7 months)
Compared and reconciled hardcopy and electronic versions of children's, middle-grade, young adult and graphic novels for major media/publishing company. Provided electronic markups and rechecked corrections, and queried inconsistencies in original materials. Created electronic versions of long-form graphic novels.

Luna Station Quarterly

Jan, 2013 — Aug, 2013 (7 months)
Evaluated and proofread short fiction manuscripts for online journal focused on genre fiction by women authors.

Renaissance Literary & Talent

Feb, 2012 — Dec, 2012 (10 months)
Converted and proofread backlist titles by literary agent's clients for distribution on electronic platforms. Projects included fiction and nonfiction works by Joan Collins, Elia Kazan, Larry Collins & Dominique LaPierre.

eLance

Jan, 2012 — Nov, 2015 (almost 4 years)
Provided proofreading and copyediting services on fiction manuscripts, academic documents and essays for private clients.

Freelance

Jan, 2009 — Dec, 2013 (almost 5 years)
Script and manuscript analyst for companies such as Lifetime Television, 1492 Pictures and Rat Entertainment as well as private clients.

Portfolio

Copy Editing
To Sway A Charlatan

Cramsie, Daphinie

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Of Envy and Empaths (The Goddess's Daughter)

Parker, Ward

Mad Mangrove Media

Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
The Regression Strain

Hwang, Kevin

Normal Range Press

Proofreading
Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Hazelnuts and Homicide: A Bonne Année Mystery

Carlisle, N.E.

Plot Twist LLC

Copy Editing
The Death of Birth (The Death of Birth Trilogy Book 1)

Blennerhassett, Patrick

The Fatalist Publishing House

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Mademoiselle Frankenstein

Solit, Robin

Midnight River Press

Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
Nawlins: School of the Gifted

Augustine, Deric

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
SLAY (The Man in Gray Series Book 1)

Sigler, Scott

Empty Set Entertainment

Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Culver's Cove: The Trapiche Emerald

Glover, D. M.

Pages of Imagination, LLC

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Demon Summer

Buffet, J. J.

Snaxtime

Proofreading
Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Prince Adam's Quest: An instructive tale for people of all ages – even yours

Walsh, Terrence W

Bent Nail Press LLC

Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
A Southern Charm Christmas

Sjostrom, Seth

wolfprintMedia

Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
Daughter of Fahrowen (The Four Towers Book 1)

Parsons, Leslie J.

Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
Infernum Super Terram: Hell Is coming

Arrendle, the author

Boss Street Books LLC

Copy Editing
The Man God (The Death of Birth Trilogy Book 3)

Blennerhassett, Patrick

The Fatalist Publishing House

Copy Editing
The End of Men (The Death of Birth Trilogy Book 2)

Blennerhassett, Patrick

The Fatalist Publishing House

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
The Smallest Island in the World

Arro, Chris

Chris Arro

Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Of Valor and Vampires (The Goddess's Daughter)

Parker, Ward

Mad Mangrove Media

Copy Editing Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
Of Fear and Fae (The Goddess's Daughter)

Parker, Ward

Mad Mangrove Media

Copy Editing Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
On Emerald Wings

Whipple, Jesse

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Archipelago

Hawkins, H R

Gull Rock

Made with Reedsy
Platirius Infiltration Book I

Hannah, D.L.

D.L. Hannah

Made with Reedsy
Son of Lightning (Descendants of Robin Hood)

West, Maggie K

Jasmine Codex Publishing

Thirteen-year-old Danny Piper-Adams' life is turned upside down when his famous environmentalist father mysteriously vanishes in Cape Town, South Africa. Months later, Danny visits his eccentric Uncle Will, a reclusive yet brilliant scientist who has been work... read more
Made with Reedsy
Monsters of Consequence: Book One of The Time Between Moments

Zint, Nicholas

Independently published

Made with Reedsy
Wings of Starless Night (Kingsdaughter)

Sterling, Sadie

Katherine Sparks

The Last Fairy Godmother: Wishless

Nash, Sibylla

Kamara Press

Made with Reedsy
Digital Dryad

Kyrnin, Jennifer

Kyrnin Design

Made with Reedsy
Exceptional

Fabula, M J

Milton & Hugo

Made with Reedsy
LaGrange's Lullaby

Lockhart, Morgan

Made with Reedsy
The Fall Gauntlet: BEAR

Merkel, J. A.

Worlds Apart Media

Made with Reedsy
The Murders on Tooreen Bog (The Galway Trilogy)

Weeks, Vid

Clipstone

Made with Reedsy
The Forgotten God (Reawakening)

Rylands, Andrew

Proofreading
Made with Reedsy
Ruin And Roses (Cursed Kingdoms)

Ortega, Deanna

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Love, Ace & Monsters: An Ace Anthology

Crowley, Azalea

Proofreading
Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Quetzalli's Last Song (The Brum Hesles Series Book 1)

Calderón De Fawaz , Desirée

Proofreading
Proofreading
Proofreading
This isn’t his sister’s Wonderland….Henry never believed his older sister, Alice’s, fantastic tales about the world down the rabbit hole. When he’s whisked away to the bizarre land, his best c... read more
Proofreading
Since the release of Artemis Fowl in 2001, Eoin Colfer''''s blockbuster series has sold more than eight million copies in the United States alone. Now, in this second graphic novel installment... read more
Proofreading
A collection fit for the (Egyptian) gods! All three books in the blockbuster Kane Chronicles trilogy are together at last! This series will be treasured by readers of all ages, whether they're... read more
Proofreading

Elizabeth has 68 reviews

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Sardoodledom I.

Sardoodledom I.

Oct, 2025

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Elizabeth was a fantastic editor—thorough, professional, and incredibly kind in her feedback. She caught all of my typos, tense issues, and even spotted continuity errors I hadn’t noticed. Her notes were thoughtful and helped strengthen my novel. She delivered everything on time and communicated ...
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Steven N.

Steven N.

Sep, 2025

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Working with Elizabeth is always a pleasure. She is courteous, professional, and gives phenomenal feedback. I hope to continue collaborating with her for future projects.
Daphinie C.

Daphinie C.

Jul, 2023

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Working with Elizabeth was an ABSOLUTE DREAM! I couldn't ask for a better experience! This was my first time using Reedsy to connect me to professionals and working with Elizabeth really took the scary part of stepping out of my comfort zone and hiring someone to take a look at my work. Elizabeth...
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Elizabeth T.
It was an absolute pleasure and I hope we get to work together again.
Stephen D.

Stephen D.

Nov, 2025

Elizabeth impressed me with her sharp eye for spotting all the errors in my manuscript. When I started looking for a proofreader, I read her profile and chose her as my top candidate. I appreciated that she mentioned in her overview, “I have received some requests that I've had to turn down becau...
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Madigan T.

Madigan T.

Oct, 2025

Elizabeth was professional, gracious, and encouraging. Her careful polish took my little project to the next level!

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Most recent contributions

How do you determine a base rate, and what factors lead you to adjust it for specific projects?

My base rate is determined by my experience (20+ years) and the Editorial Freelancers Association's annual survey. While I keep to the lower end of the EFA's range to remain accessible to more authors, this is my full-time profession and I treat it as such. During slow periods, times when I have ...
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What do you need to know about the author and their project before starting an editing collaboration?

The first thing I need to know about a project is the genre, and the second thing I need to know is the author's budget. That's how I determine what requests to bid on and provide sample edits for vs. declining the request upfront. Other information that I prefer to have upfront is content adviso...
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Can a beta reader replace a developmental editor?

No. A beta reader by definition is a non-professional who is a fan of the genre, who provides a reader's-eye view of the book. How did they experience the story? What were their emotional reactions? Were they confused? Were there things they particularly liked? They're a test audience so the auth...
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