Hallie S

Hallie S – Editor

Enthusiastic, engaged editor with agency experience! I am open to all novel genres but specialize in sci-fi and commercial literary fiction.

Overview

My editing experience covers a range of genres, including contemporary literary fiction, science fiction, thriller, and historical fiction. I'm experienced at both line-by-line and macro-level developmental editing, and as someone who read queries daily for years, I'm well-equipped to help craft a polished and eye-catching pitch.

I strive for both compassion and radical honesty in my editing projects, and I welcome pushback and discussion. I believe the best ideas come from teamwork. I'd love to help you work through everything from untangling a tough plot hole to resolving a character arc, and I'm adept at identifying patterns and structures to build a stronger narrative.

My editing strategy is built on finding the story you want to tell and figuring out how best to bring that narrative to readers. What are the prevailing emotions and themes of the work? Do you want your audience to laugh or cry or both? What kind of experience do you want to bring your readers? I'd love to work together to answer these questions and more.

An academic at heart, I will be an especially good fit for anything with intense world building. I find scholarship about fairy tales and cultural myths like King Arthur fascinating, and I love working with alternate or fantastical histories. I am also super interested in works that center a lot of science and math--I work on biology books in my day job and studied physics and math in college, so I love getting to engage with books that have an intense science component.

That said, I love all fiction and have worked professionally on works across the commercial-literary spectrum. My favorite books are those that treat the extraordinary as ordinary or the ordinary as extraordinary. No project is too weird or too niche--if you're passionate about it, I believe your readers will be too!
Services
Fiction
LGBTQ Fiction Literary Fiction Science Fiction Women's Fiction Young Adult
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Princeton University Press

Apr, 2021 — Present

I am assistant acquiring editor at Princeton University Press, specializing in biology books that range from trade science titles to academic monographs. Most of the authors I work with are scientists with little to no book-writing experience, and I have become adept at encouraging authors who might be nervous to take on such a big endeavor and helping them put together a clear, engaging narrative appropriate for a specific target audience.

The Book Group

Mar, 2017 — Apr, 2021 (about 4 years)

I worked with bestselling authors across genres and at all stages of manuscript development while supporting two agents at a boutique Manhattan literary agency. In particular, I gained significant experience with early-stage editing and assessing the viability of different manuscripts in the marketplace. Colleagues and clients have praised my ability to offer tough but kind feedback, and I've heard from many authors that my edits made them excited to tackle revisions, even if it meant radically reframing the work.

Enslow Publishers, Inc.

Oct, 2016 — Jul, 2019 (over 2 years)

As lead editor for various series of up to eight titles each season, oversaw entire editorial process including revision/rewriting, photo research and selection, copyediting, and initial and final layout stages in InDesign.

Portfolio

Reefs of Time: What Fossils Reveal about Coral Survival

Gardiner, Lisa S.

Princeton University Press

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If, Then: A Novel

Day, Kate Hope

Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment
Friends and Strangers: A novel

Sullivan, J. Courtney

Editorial Assessment
The Mother Code

Stivers, Carole

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment
Editorial Assessment

Hallie has 4 reviews

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Rich M.

Rich M.

Jan, 2022

Hallie provided an editorial assessment of the second pass of my novel, The Means of Keeping. She was one of the finest editors I've worked with, and I highly recommend her. Her observations were insightful and focused on the handful of critical areas I needed to address to further the novel. T...
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Tomu W.

Tomu W.

Jun, 2021

I worked with Hallie on a query letter edit. Alongside all the starred qualities, I found her to be positive, detail oriented, on-time, insightful, critical as necessary, and all-around helpful in improving my query. Mash that hire button.
Fin J.

Fin J.

Apr, 2021

Hallie looked over my query letter and sample pages for a SFF novel. She got back to me quickly with invaluable advice on how my materials can be improved and how an agent might respond to them. She was professional and kind throughout our correspondence. I now feel confident getting back into qu...
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Peter L.

Peter L.

Apr, 2021

I enlisted Hallie for a developmental edit and was very happy with her work. In addition to her professionalism, timeliness, and clear communication, the care and effort she devoted to reading, reflecting on, and reviewing my manuscript was readily apparent. The assessment she produced surpasse...
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