Bonnie Hearn Hill

Bonnie Hearn Hill – Editor

From memoir and self-help to crime, business, and women's fiction, I can help you find your vision and your voice. Outstanding references.

Overview

I've worked on numerous books, including New York Times bestsellers. I love what I do and believe that passion is reflected in the quality of my work. I am also a novelist and share my picks on a monthly Central California TV book segment.

I start with a free telephone consultation, where we discuss what your book needs and how I would edit it. If we move forward, I will send you sections of the book, usually thirds, and you have a chance to review and discuss the edits and changes with me.

My experience as a traditionally published author helps me assist clients with their publishing goals. I can speak realistically and honestly about writing for publication because it's my life. Let's talk about your vision and how I can help you.

"You were a true pleasure to work with–always attentive to my concerns, diligent in your follow through, unflappable in the face of any deadline."

Peter Borland

Senior Editor

Atria Books/Simon & Schuster

"In my twenty years college administration and teaching, I have never come across any editor or writer who is more capable than Bonnie. She is an outstanding instructor and a sensitive editor."

Professor John Brantingham

Mt. San Antonio College, Walnut, CA

Services
Fiction
Action & Adventure Mystery & Crime Thriller & Suspense Women's Fiction
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Self-Help & Self-Improvement True Crime Writing & Publishing
Languages
English (US) English (US)
Awards
  • First place, essay on writing, The Writer Magazine, 2019
  • First place, genre short story, Writer's Digest Magazine, 2019
  • Killer Nashville, first place, nonfiction (client book)
  • Recipient Harlequin Creator Fund, novel, 2019
  • 2026 Pushcart Prize nominee for an essay
Certifications
  • UC Berkeley, Professional Sequence in Editing certificate (4.0 GPA)
  • MFA Creative Writing, Antioch University

Work experience

Advantage Media/Forbes Books

Nov, 2017 — Present
Have ghostwritten books on investments, wealth management, and written book outlines for books on health and entrepreneurs.

Self-employed

Apr, 2004 — Present
I've worked on true crime, fictional crime, and memoirs (with or without crime). I also love working with authors of prescriptive nonfiction on books that can change lives. My nonfiction book proposals have helped sell numerous books.

Portfolio

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From Chaos to Calm: A Six-Step Strategy to Break Through Anxiety

Kiekhaefer LCSW, Tamara

Post Hill Press

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Buried Secrets: Looking for Frank and Ida

Hanson, Anne

New England Books, LLC

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Prison Rap

Hall Jr, Arthur Lee

Booklocker.com

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Snake Eyes: Murder in A Southern Town

Martin, Bitty

Prometheus

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Memoir of a Milk Carton Kid is the haunting story of a young girl, Tanya Kach, lost in the cracks of the system, forced to spend more than a decade as the prisoner of her middle school's secur... read more
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Brian Cuban was living a lie. With a famous last name and a successful career as a lawyer, Brian was able to hide his clinical depression and alcohol and cocaine addictions—for a while. Today,... read more
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Gail. Hannah. Bridget. Lizzy. Flavia. Each of them has a shameful secret, and each is about to find out that she is not alone… Gail, a prominent Boston judge, keeps receiving letters from her ... read more
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When Fred Fruehan's son Freddy is kidnapped at age fourteen, Fred puts his life on hold and vows to find him. Freddy escapes his captors but not the horror of those thirty-five days. Off The G... read more
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According to the National Cancer Institute, approximately 8.4 million Americans alive today have suffered from or currently suffer from cancer. Newly diagnosed patients and their loved ones ar... read more
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For the first time, the life and mind of Anders Behring Breivik, the most unexpected of mass murderers, is examined and set in the context of wider criminal psychology.*Winner of the 2016 Silv... read more
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The premier guide to combining verbal and nonverbal communication to gain confidence, establish credibility and make lasting impressions Yes—a small word, but the key to opening doors both pro... read more
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Bonnie has 27 reviews

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Amal M.

Amal M.

Nov, 2025

Pinned
Of the first four editors who answered my query on Reedsy for a developmental editor to help me with my memoir, Bonnie was the only one who took the time to read my sample chapter and respond in a way that revealed that she understood the spirit of the entire work. Her criticism was consistently...
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Corey M.

Corey M.

Apr, 2026

Working with Bonnie was one of the best decisions I made for my book. I originally hired her for editing, but she went far above and beyond what I expected. She became a true coach throughout the process, offering guidance, encouragement, and honest feedback every step of the way. She not only h...
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Bill R.

Bill R.

Apr, 2026

Bonnie is true professional in every way. She is very responsive, makes great suggestions and wants to make sure your project is what you want not what she wants.
Barbara L.

Barbara L.

Apr, 2026

If you’re lucky enough to have Bonnie as your editor, you’ve struck Gold! Not only is she a great editor, having elevated my work to an incredible place, but she’s very smart, has a sense of humor, and is so supportive and patient. She reads for technical issues, for flow, and whether the story a...
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Melvin Q.

Melvin Q.

Mar, 2026

Working with Bonnie Hearn Hill was a masterclass in both class and professionalism. With over 30 years of experience and a successful trend as a suspense novelist. She performed a comprehensive editorial and developmental review of my manuscript, and what impressed me the most was her inherent r...
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