Adina Edelman

Adina Edelman – Editor

Mining Your Message for Gold: Developmental and Line Editing for Memoir and Fiction

Overview

Hey, I'm Adina! I help authors of fiction and memoir figure out what they're trying to say and make sure that's showing up on the page.

I edit with a focus on message over mechanics. Proper grammar is important, but only if it serves your story. Honesty, respect, and collaboration are integral to my editing process. By the time the edit is done, you have a clean, engaging manuscript and a deeper understanding of your own writing.

I have worked on over 140 books in the past six years, both fiction and nonfiction at various levels of editing. Right now I specialize in memoir and the following fiction genres: mystery, historical, middle-grade, and sci-fi/fantasy. I do not take on projects with heavy Christian content or work that has explicit sexual content or abundant cursing.

I love forming strong connections with my authors and supporting them on their book journeys. If you're ready to unearth your gold, reach out for a sample edit!

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"Adina did a phenomenal job not only catching the many grammatical mistakes but also pointing out where the story did not flow well or where the dialogue was not believable. I greatly appreciated that when she said some part of the story didn't work, she explained why and provided suggested changes. In addition to her technical and creative skills, what I might have appreciated most was her professionalism and cheery disposition."

—Phillip Wray, author of The Pontcourt Murders

"Adina was a pleasure to work with and knew how to ask the right questions in order to get me to dig deeper and clarify. Truly a master at what she does. I highly recommend Adina for your editing needs."

—Miriam Hendeles, author of Best Foot Forward

"Adina is an absolute professional and was a pleasure to work with! Everything from the creative commentary of the content edit to the nitty gritty of the proofread was done with thoughtfulness and class... I will be looking forward to working with her again in the future."

—Moshe Gersht, author of It's All the Same to Me

Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Inspirational Judaism Self-Help & Self-Improvement
Fiction
Fantasy Historical Fiction Literary Fiction Middle Grade
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

Jun, 2020 — Present
Since starting my book editing business in June 2020, I have worked on over 120 books, both fiction and nonfiction, at various levels of editing. I provide services to small publishing companies as well as self-publishing authors. Publishers I have worked with include Gatekeeper Press, Israel Bookshop, Mosaica Press, Menucha Publishers, Damn Gravity, and Ramses House Publishing. I hold a B.A. in English and creative writing from Southern New Hampshire University (summa cum laude).

Baltimore Review

Sep, 2019 — Apr, 2024 (over 4 years)
-Reviewed and evaluated submissions in poetry and fiction for publication. -Proofread quarterly online issues as well as annual print issues to ensure quality work, support brand mission, and grow readership through the virtual forum. -Participated in meetings to enhance teamwork and communication and discuss events, regulations, and goals for the journal.

Portfolio

The Woman In Deed: Road to IPO, Bridge Tables, and Beyond

Gupta, Vinita

Vinita Gupta /Adaigh Press

Copy Editing Proofreading
Copy Editing
Wavelengths

Adina Kagan

Israel Bookshop Publications

Copy Editing
Mindful Improv Thinking: Build a Culture of Resilient Trust

Flack-Wetherald, Andrea

The Center for Mindful Improv Thinking

Copy Editing
Within My Walls

Leah Gebber

Israel Bookshop Publications

Copy Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Compatible with Life

Devorah Schendler

Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Even if I'm Not

Devorie Kreiman

Copy Editing
Copy Editing
Developmental Editing
Copy Editing
Proofreading
The Scheme Team

Shayna R. Horowitz

Copy Editing
Eureka

Dina Neuman

Copy Editing
Rocking Horse

Leah Gebber

Copy Editing
Danger Deep Down

Sarah Feldbrand

Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Proofreading
Developmental Editing Copy Editing

Adina has 2 reviews

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Matthew B.

Matthew B.

Aug, 2024

Adina's slogan is "mining your message for gold," and that's exactly what she does. I've worked with her for two rounds on my memoir, and she consistently challenges me, picks out areas for improvement, and responds to all of my questions on areas were I felt stuck. My project is better, by order...
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Matthew B.

Matthew B.

Mar, 2024

What I initially appreciated about Adina was how much dialogue, both via Zoom and email, that we had before she took on my project. She took the time and effort to affirm that this was a project that she wanted to take on, and that I'd be comfortable working with her. So by when the time came to ...
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