Sally Apokedak

Sally Apokedak – Editor

Agent-turned-publisher with decades of experience--mainly in children's lit. Experienced with the general market and the Christian market.

Overview

I'm currently a publisher and a freelance editor, and in the recent past I was a literary agent, I have over twenty-five years' of experience in General Market children's books, and in books for all ages in the Christian market. Books I've edited have won major awards and one series has sold over a million copies.

If you are writing novels, I can help you

1) find a vibrant voice that will make your books sing

2) build rich story worlds that will draw readers in and hold them captive

3) create active characters your readers will love (even long after they finish reading)

4) plan and execute twisting plots that will surprise and delight your readers

5) weave in meaningful themes so your readers will finish your books with a satisfied sigh.

I also have tons of experience editing board books and picture books. With these I can help you with plot (or concept), character development, voice (rhyme and meter and words that wow!), page turns (pace), and theme.

And, after reading tens of thousands of query letters, I can tell you very quickly if your query letter is going wrong and help you shape a letter that will grab an agent or editor's interest and make them flip to the manuscript and give it a read.

I do work on adult nonfiction and novels, but my first love is the children's market. Great children’s books entertain and also teach. The best books show children how to love well, cherish beauty, and think deeply; and they give children the courage to live heroic lives. With every edit I do, I strive to help authors write and publish books that are excellently crafted--books that will entertain children and also encourage them to live large.

Services
Non-Fiction
Children’s Non-Fiction Christian Non-Fiction Inspirational
Fiction
Christian Fiction Fantasy Middle Grade Picture Books Young Adult Fantasy
Languages
English (US)
Awards
  • SCBWI WIP grant 2008
  • ECPA bestselling books over a hundred times
  • Edgar nomination
  • Realm Award Debut Winner
  • Foundations Scholarship
  • ACFW Genesis Spec-fic Winner
  • ACFW Genesis YA finalist
  • Sunshine State Young Readers Award
  • Georgia Children's Book Award nomination
  • Christian Book of the Year nomination
  • YAYOMG! Award
  • Creative Child Preferred Choice Award
  • Realm Award Book of the Year Finalist
  • Realm Award YA Finalist

Work experience

Self-employed

Mar, 2017 — Present
I own a small, traditional publishing company (I pay advances and royalties) with an eclectic list, including YA fantasy, MG poetry, picture books, novels, and even nonfiction.

Udemy

Dec, 2015 — Present
I have four writing courses up on Udemy that cover Voice, Plot, Punctuation, and Query Letters. I have over 7000 students enrolled who live in over 90 countries.

Self-employed

Sep, 2012 — Sep, 2024 (about 12 years)
Specializing in children's books, I have a select few authors, including the award-winning and best-selling Hannah C. Hall and Taryn Souders.

Self-employed

Sep, 2001 — Present
--I’ve done editorial assessments for SCBWI conferences for years. I'm honest, but I've never made a writer cry. I point out where the writer excels, as well as areas needing improvement. --In developmental edits I focus on story world, character, plot, pace, and theme. These all work to pull readers in, keep pages turning, and provide satisfying endings. --In copy edits, I focus on voice. I look for places to use figures of speech, I consider how words sound, and I look at pacing and description. --I’ve gotten tens of thousands of queries. I can help you write a strong query letter. --When editing picture books, I look all of the above—character, plot (or structure in concept books and nonfiction), voice, theme, pacing (page turns), descriptions, and so on. I also consider what kind of opportunities the author has given the illustrator.

Portfolio

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review
Secrets of the Broken House

Souders, Taryn

Sourcebooks Young Readers

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Query Letter Review
Copy Editing
Copy Editing Query Letter Review
I Pray You'll Be . . .

Hall, Hannah C.

Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review
Coop Knows the Scoop

Souders, Taryn

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review
Feelings Bouquet

Yordy, Janine

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
Penguin & Moose

Hall, Hannah C.

Copy Editing Query Letter Review
The Button Girl

Apokedak, Sally

Developmental Editing
Made with Reedsy
Woolly Bear: With Fuzzy Yellow Hair Wants to be a Moth.

Bean, Dr. Persnickety

DrPersnicketyBean

Developmental Editing
Copy Editing
God Calls Me His!

Redrick, Dana

Paraklesis Press

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
Larry's Christmas Cat-Astrophe!: (not really)

Souders, Taryn

Paraklesis Press

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review
Dre Dre Starts His Day!

Redrick, Dana

Paraklesis Press

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
All About Eleanor

Holloway, Suellen

Independently published

Copy Editing
Hamburger Harriet Won't Settle

Gomez, AnnA

Paraklesis Press

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
The Big Birthday for Blue Whale

Hlavaty, Jane

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Benefelence the Elephence and the Wonderful You

William, Todd H.

Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Lotti and the Impossible Dream

Froh, Charly

Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Lotti and the Big Dream

Froh, Charly

Copy Editing
Made with Reedsy
Ellie The Crop Duster Saves The Farm

Victor, Rebecca

Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing
The Healer's Rune

Matuska , Lauricia

Developmental Editing Copy Editing
Book Coaching
Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Query Letter Review
Copy Editing Query Letter Review
Grandpa Love

Hall, Hannah C.

Developmental Editing Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Grandma Hugs

Hall, Hannah C.

Developmental Editing Query Letter Review
Mommy Cuddles

Hannah C. Hall

Developmental Editing Query Letter Review
Daddy Snuggles

Hannah C. Hall

Developmental Editing Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review
Jelly Bean Summer

Magnin, Joyce

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review
That's What Love Is

Hall, Hannah C.

Copy Editing
Query Letter Review
Copy Editing Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Query Letter Review
Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading
Developmental Editing Copy Editing Proofreading Query Letter Review

Sally has 336 reviews

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Leilanie D.

Leilanie D.

Jul, 2026

Sally did a wonderful job with both the copy edit and line edit of my children’s picture book. She was thoughtful, thorough, and helped strengthen the story while still preserving my voice. I truly appreciated her care, professionalism, and attention to detail.
Francie S.

Francie S.

Jul, 2026

This will be the second time Sally has edited one of my stories and again I am thoroughly impressed by her expertise. With her unique background and experience, I feel she’s everything I needed to inspire me in my writing journey. She is a true gem in the publishing industry and I plan on acquir...
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Cindy H.

Cindy H.

Jul, 2026

Sally A. went beyond my expectations as an editor and copy editor. She painstakingly went through each and every detail of my manuscript. I asked her to be honestly brutal and she was so that I could produce the best manuscript possible. Sally zoned in on ideas/sentences that did not fit the stor...
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Mark D.

Mark D.

Jun, 2026

This is the second time Sally has provided Developmental and Copy Editing for us. She has been very responsive, professional and supportive. Out work product is substantially better because of her help.
Colleen S.

Colleen S.

Jun, 2026

We had a wonderful experience working with Sally and really appreciate her patience and wealth of knowledge that she shared so freely.

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