Philip Athans

Philip Athans – Editor

Former managing editor at Wizards of the Coast, working for 30+ years in fantasy, SF, horror, thriller, literary, and narrative non-fiction.

Overview

“The world of publishing is growing more complicated, but also more interesting for those willing to think outside the box. I know I am, and having Phil Athans out there as a resource takes the scare out of it.”

—R.A. Salvatore, author of The Legend of Drizzt

It's not just my job to find what's wrong with a book, but to preserve and encourage what's right about it.

No two manuscripts, and no two authors, are exactly the same. No two edits will be either. So what do I look for when I start an edit?

Everything.

And I mean literally everything from big-picture issues like story structure and worldbuilding to grammar and usage, always with your unique goals and your unique voice in mind.

I’ve worked with a wide range of publisher, author, and other clients including Pixar Animation Studios, Adams Media, Simon & Schuster, Penguin Random House, Amazon/57 North, Pyr, Wizards of the Coast, Permuted Press, and almost too many indie authors--at all experience levels across a range of genres and categories--to count.

I’ve worked extensively in fiction (primarily fantasy, science fiction, and horror, but other genres as well), non-fiction (from books on the software industry to camping and kayaking guides), gaming (digital and tabletop), and more.

I've been working in publishing in one role or another since 1986 and as a full time editor for every day of the past 30 years.

IF IT’S GOT WORDS, I CAN HELP MAKE IT BETTER.

I'm proud to work with LGBTQI+, POC, indigenous, and all other human authors. I will not work with "AI"/LLM/ChatBot-generated text, nor will I ever use "AI"/LLM/ChatBot "tools" in any step of your edit.

Services
Fiction
Epic Fantasy Gaming & LitRPG Horror Space Opera
Languages
English (UK) English (US)

Work experience

Wizards of the Coast

Sep, 1995 — Jun, 2010 (over 14 years)
I had primary responsibility for the strategic and tactical goals of a multi-million dollar adult and children’s trade publishing enterprise. I created or was instrumental in helping create several brand identities, including the Discoveries and Mirrorstone imprints, led a cross-functional team with representatives from all areas of the company, crafted marketing and sales communications for both consumer-facing and business-to-business strategies, worked with licensees in everything from audiobook creation to electronic gaming, managed P&Ls, scheduling, and other aspects of getting products into the marketplace, and led a staff of professionals through complex and unforgiving workflow demands.

Self-employed

Sep, 2010 — Present
Founder and sole proprietor of a creative services consulting agency, specializing in all aspects of transmedia expression and brand development, such as creative IP development, branding, licensing and distribution, and recruiting. My specific skills in this agency include writing and editing; traditional, e-book, and audiobook publishing; marketing communications (consumer-facing and B2B); copywriting; advertising; and marketing.

Portfolio

What Digs Itself Free

Brooks, Stoney

River-Lily Publishing

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Made with Reedsy
Angry Hornet Nest

Brooks, Stoney

River-Lily Publishing

Developmental Editing
Heiress of Lies

Yuzawa, Tomoko

Tomoko Yuzawa

Developmental Editing
Echoes of Ghostwood (The Warminster Series)

Hilliard, J.V.

Dragon Moon Press

Developmental Editing
Flower World

Biscuit, Baxter

Independently published

Developmental Editing
Realms Of War (Forgotten Realms Anthology, 12)

Athans, Philip

Wizards of the Coast

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Jaga's Bones

McHardy, Simon

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Last Dragon

McDermott, J.M.

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Entangled Lives

Omer, Imran

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The Last Arcenaux

Puglia, George

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Philip has 34 reviews

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J. R. V.

J. R. V.

Aug, 2026

Philip is a god-send. He is a master of his craft (both writing and story-telling). Whatever level you are at, beginning, experienced, or somewhere inbetween, he can meet you where you are and help you grow as a writer. He takes what you excel at, and helps amplify that, while at the same time...
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Trey I.

Trey I.

Aug, 2026

Philip is very good at what he does. As a newbie author I wasn't sure what to expect when searching for editors. I found the line edits and comments rather helpful in pointing out what works and what doesn't. Included with the edits was a document which elaborated further on what I wrote, explain...
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Ian M.

Ian M.

Aug, 2026

I like Phillip alot, he was nice and asked questions that made me think on what to add and how to add it.
Will N.

Will N.

Jul, 2026

Highest possible endorsement. I would definitely employ him again. He knows how to form stories and is very pointed and honest in his critiques.
Kae B.

Kae B.

Jun, 2026

As a debut novelist, choosing an editor felt like a huge decision. Working with Philip Athans has confirmed that I made the right choice. Philip completed a developmental edit of my gothic historical fantasy novel on time and with great professionalism. I am still working through the edit, but t...
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