Matt Henderson-Ellis

Matt Henderson-Ellis – Editor

NYC-trained editor (Doubleday) specializing in manuscript assessments and developmental editing for crime/mystery, and daring genre fiction.

Overview

IMPORTANT: I am booked until early August, but if you want a developmental edit and don't have pressing time constraints, feel free to make a request.


So, you’ve written a novel or nonfiction manuscript and you know it’s good. Your friends think so. Your spouse thinks so. Your cat is a solid supporter. Everybody says that you should get it published, or publish it yourself. But your standards are higher, and you know you need a qualified editor to bring out the best in your book.


Hi, I’m Matt. I’ve been working as an editor for 25 years, specializing in manuscript assessment and developmental editing for genres like crime, true crime, mystery, horror, and memoir. I’ve worked with NYT best-sellers, and award-winning indie authors. Some of my most successful projects have included military fiction, historical mysteries, and neo-noir crime novels. I especially enjoy working with war veterans and first-time authors.


What I will support you with:

—Strong, active opening pages.

—Plot pacing throughout.

—Plot holes, telegraphed payoffs.

—Credible, fully dynamic characters (even the secondary ones).

—Word choice. Most writers have tics and overuse certain words.

—Line-by-line writing, alerting you to monotonous sentence constructions.

—Description that "shows" and doesn't "tell." We have five senses, let's

use them all.

—Boiling your book down to its unique hook.


Recommendations for routes to publication, tips for perseverance, and my discreet support are always included.


But I'm more than just an editor. I have been in the trenches as a writer for years. As a traditionally published novelist, my debut Keeping Bedlam at Bay in the Prague Cafe was called "Darkly comic . . . immersive, nostalgic, and

thoroughly enjoyable," by Booklist. I bring my talents as a writer and

editor to bear on every project I undertake.


Request a quote and ask about my editing process, availability, or whatever. I'm here to help writers.


"Highly, highly recommended. When I sent my manuscript to Matt for a critique and feedback, I feared he’d come back to tell me that the story was broken, the writing was terrible and the characters lame. I worried about that because I believed it was all true. What I got back from Matt was a gentle confirmation of my worst fears. I also got back an incredibly insightful critique." — Frank Freudberg, author of neo-noir crime fiction Baby Please Don’t Go (1207 Amazon reviews)


If you are under 18 years old, please contact me through a parent.


NOTE: At this time I do NOT offer copy editing, line-editing, proofreading, letter review, or author coaching.

Services
Fiction
Action & Adventure Horror Mystery & Crime Psychological Thriller
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs True Crime
Languages
English (CAN) English (US)
Awards
  • My translation of the short story collection The Devil is a Black Dog was nominated for the 2014 Kirkus Prize
  • My translations from Hungarian have twice been nominated for Pushcart Prizes
  • My novel Keeping Bedlam at Bay in the Prague Cafe was nominated for the Virginia Commonwealth Cabell First Novel Award
Certifications
  • Certificate in mindfulness-based stress reduction from Palouse Mindfulness
  • Bachelor's degree with major in Dramatic Writing; studying under Peter Hedges (What's Eating Gilbert Grape), and Gladden Schrock (Letters from Alf).

Work experience

Self-employed

Aug, 2011 — Present

For most of my adult life, I have worked with writers and writing. As a freelance editor, I specialize in developmental editing and composing editorial assessments of genre fiction (crime, horror) and non-fiction (memoir) that has a strong narrative drive.

The Carol Mann Agency

Apr, 2000 — May, 2001 (about 1 year)

Assisted Literary Agents Carol Mann and Gareth Esersky in all phases of signing, editing, and submitting trade hardcover and paperback manuscripts for commercial publication. Agency clients include: Paul Auster, Dame Darcy, and the Eades (Protein Power).

Doubleday & Co.

Nov, 1998 — Apr, 2000 (over 1 year)

Assisted Executive Editor Betsy Lerner in all phases of preparing trade hardcover and paperback books for publication; working with writers including: Patti Smith, Elizabeth Wurtzel, Melanie Thernstrum, Catherine Texier, Harmony Korine, Neil de Grasse Tyson, and A.B. Yehoshua.

Conceived of, pursued, and offered on behalf of Doubleday to acquire the rights to create a graphic novel featuring the multi-platinum rap group Wu Tang-Clan.

Paperback reprint editor for Pink by Gus Van Sant, The Meaning of Star Trek by Thomas Richards, Patti Smith Complete by Patti Smith, Miss Vera’s Finishing School for Boys Who Want to be Girls by Veronica Vera.

Portfolio

The Catch: A Novel

Wozencraft, Kim

Developmental Editing
Copy Editing
Copy Editing
An Idle King

Paterson, Andrew

Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
Editorial Assessment
Made with Reedsy
Baby Girl Jones

Donelson, Cortney

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Made with Reedsy
Jemez

Albertson, Mark David

Editorial Assessment
Pink

Van Sant, Gus

Proofreading
Visegrad: A Novel

Robertson, Duncan

Editorial Assessment
Ragers

Biderman, Seth

Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing

Matt has 17 reviews

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Jason B.

Jason B.

Apr, 2024

Working with Matt on a third novel was an absolute pleasure. He has a vested interest in my success both within the individual work, and across the series—and has played an enormous part in their success. His attention to detail, method, and feedback is invaluable.
Matt H.
Thanks so much for the review, Jason. This has been a very gratifying experience for me. I wish you and the series all the success in the world.
Victor P.

Victor P.

Mar, 2024

Matt far exceeded my expectations as an editor. He is a knowledgeable, caring, and patient coach. My literary effort in a contemporary fiction novel was vastly improved in every aspect by his insightful advice. I am sincerely grateful.
Shawnee B.

Shawnee B.

Feb, 2024

I am extremely satisfied with the work Matt did on my developmental edit. His feedback was precise and incredibly helpful, elevating my story to new heights. Matt communicated promptly and always provided clear answers to my questions. It was evident that he thoroughly read my story and invested a lot of effort into his editorial letter, providing me with valuable insights to work with. As a ne...
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Matt H.
Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Shawnee! It's been great getting to know you and working on your true crime title, Through the Keyhole. I wish you the best with your writing! -- MHE
Victor P.

Victor P.

Jan, 2024

I feel truly privileged to have Matt guide me along my writing journey. His competent advice, thoughtful guidance, and support significantly improved my writing. I am sincerely grateful. He exceeded my expectations.
Alisa D.

Alisa D.

Jan, 2024

Extremely helpful. I really appreciate editorial letter suggestions. And helping me to find a voice as a writer.

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