Marco Palmieri

Marco Palmieri – Editor

Storytelling is my passion. I help writers take their work to the next level.

Overview

I'm a developmental editor of books, podcasts, games, and screenplays. My career spans nearly thirty years and hundreds of titles, including award winners and bestsellers. I've been a senior editor for two leading U.S. book publishers, Simon & Schuster and Macmillan, and a creative producer for the fiction podcast studio, Realm.


My specialty is speculative fiction, but I'm also interested in thrillers, noir, and psychological suspense. I've helped writers developed everything from media tie-ins to literary fiction, standalones to serials, secret histories to epic futures, family dramas to societal upheavals, BIPOC and LGBTQ+ heroes.


Whether it's improving your plot, refining your voice, shaping your characters, building your world, punching up your dialogue, or honing your craft overall—this is what I love doing. You can count on me to be honest and direct, but also easygoing, upbeat, and encouraging.


Please note: I do not edit A.I.-generated manuscripts.


TESTIMONIALS:


“As a writer, what you need first and foremost from an editor is a combination of the following elements: honesty, knowledge, directness, integrity. You need a partner, a cheerleader, a collaborator, and I was lucky enough to find an editor who had all these qualities when I started working with Marco.”

—James Swallow, New York Times bestselling author


“Marco took a novelette that I had put through months of workshop, and unclogged my brain to release exactly what the story needed. He didn't suggest plot or story elements, didn't want the characters to become different people than I made them; he just tried to listen to them deeply as human beings, discussed their histories and motivations with me just like you'd discuss people you knew in real life. That kind of empathy and insight are rare and valuable qualities in any person. Channelled into editing, they work something like magic. My characters did not feel violated or misunderstood, only motivated to show more sides of themselves on the page. No other editor has helped my work grow so organically before.”

—Mimi Mondal, Hugo Award finalist


“Instead of driving a book toward his own vision, Marco meets every story on its own terms, discovers the best elements in each scene and character, and helps bring those to the surface. He does this while keeping a clear view of the whole novel, the themes and character arcs, the major dramatic beats and subtle emotional rhythms that are the breath and blood of every story. My books would not be what they are without his wide-ranging perspective, keen insight, and gentle guidance.”

—Brian Staveley, David Gemmell Award-winning author


“Marco's in-depth assessment of my work was professional, thoughtful, and candid. His recommendations for areas of improvement were immensely helpful and his sense of humor was a pleasure. Marco is the real deal and I'm looking forward to working with him again.”

—C. L. Schneider, award-winning self-published author


"I trust Marco with my words, and as a writer, I can offer no higher praise.”

—Kirstin Beyer, New York Times bestselling author


More testimonials available upon request.

Services
Fiction
Action & Adventure Epic Fantasy Espionage Historical Fiction LGBTQ Fiction Magical Realism Space Opera Urban Fantasy
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

Jan, 2009 — Present

Independent developmental editing services. My clients include aspiring and established writers, book publishers, audio studios, screenwriters, and game developers. Notable projects: I assisted J. Michael Straczynski in editing the late Harlan Ellison’s The Last Dangerous Visions anthology for Blackstone Publishing; I've edited six novels by Colorado Book Award winner David R. Slayton; I assisted game developers Route 59 Games and So Romantic with story and script development on Necrobarista and Jack Move, respectively; I story-edited all five seasons of the audio series Bookburners for Serial Box (later Realm) before I was invited to join the company.

Realm

Jan, 2019 — Sep, 2023 (over 4 years)

I produced serial fiction podcasts, developing story concepts, managing writers rooms, line editing scripts, and performing editorial review of assembled audio episodes. Notable projects: Orphan Black: The Next Chapter (starring Tatiana Maslany; science fiction thriller); Undertow: Blood Forest (horror); Bullet Catcher (weird western); The Shadow Files of Morgan Knox (supernatural noir); and Stories To Keep You Up At Night (a weekly anthology show of dark short fiction, which I curated and hosted).

Tor Publishing Group (Macmillan)

Apr, 2011 — May, 2018 (about 7 years)

I nurtured new writers and acquired and edited bestselling and award-winning original works of science fiction, fantasy, horror, thrillers, and related genres. Among my authors at Tor were Brooke Bolander, Seth Dickinson, Max Gladstone, Mimi Mondal, and Brian Staveley. During this time I also co-produced my first audio drama, the award-winning, two-million download science fiction thriller podcast Steal the Stars, written by Mac Rogers.

Simon & Schuster

Aug, 1996 — Dec, 2008 (over 12 years)

I conceived, acquired, and edited bestselling novels based on world-renowned third-party intellectual properties from film, TV, gaming, and graphic novels, including Star Trek, Resident Evil, World of WarCraft, the DC Comics universe, and the Marvel Comics universe.

Portfolio

Developmental Editing
The Only Harmless Great Thing

Bolander, Brooke

Tordotcom

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Sea Change

Wheeler, S. M.

Tor Books

Developmental Editing
A Darkling Sea: A Novel

Cambias, James L.

Tor Trade

Developmental Editing
Steal the Stars

Mac Rogers

Macmillan Audio

Developmental Editing
The World of the End

Gafla, Ofir Touché

Tor Books

Developmental Editing
Twelve Days: A Novel

Barnes, Steven

Tor Books

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing
Nomad: A Novel (Marc Dane Book 1)

Swallow, James

Forge Books

Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing
White Trash Warlock (The Adam Binder Novels Book 1)

Slayton, David R.

Blackstone Publishing

Developmental Editing
Batman: No Man's Land

Rucka, Greg

Pocket Star

Developmental Editing
Full Circle (Star Trek: Voyager)

Beyer, Kirsten

Pocket Books/Star Trek

Developmental Editing

Marco has 3 reviews

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Diana S.

Diana S.

Dec, 2024

I hate writing this review. I was beyond excited to hire an editor as I had received actionable feedback from an agent and knew I needed help. $3300 is a ton of money in my world, but my writer friends all said it was totally worth it to get a professional's help. I sent 5 editors my job description, which let them know I suffer from too much exposition and need to know where to cut and what...
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Sven V.

Sven V.

Dec, 2024

Marco and I collaborated on improving a draft synopsis and cover letter for querying. It was really helpful to get his second opinion and we were able to improve the documents significantly.
Mark R.

Mark R.

Sep, 2024

Marco was a joy to work with. He went above and beyond to coach, teach, and help me throughout the query process. He is very knowledge, talented, and collaborative in his approach. I highly recommend him!! You will be thankfully you chose him! :)

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