Jessica Felleman – Editor

I am a literary agent who represents fiction and nonfiction authors, with specialties in speculative literary fiction, YA science fiction and fantasy, and prescriptive or 'self-help' nonfiction, including a New York Times Bestseller. I'm also a writer, and received my MFA at CalArts in 2013, so I'm uniquely positioned to understand what it's like to be on both sides of preparing to sell a work to a publisher and love to help writers remain true to their craft while also considering the business aspects of being a writer. Like my client list at the Jennifer Lyons Literary Agency, I most enjoy working with fiction authors who are serious about their writing beyond a single project, but have extensive experience with book proposals for nonfiction works by thought leaders with a message that can help others. I love a fresh perspective and any contemporary set story that brings in a little magic or science fiction, so if your work blends genres, I want to read it!

As an editor, I'm a big fan of providing big picture advice to help authors learn how to take a first draft and turn it into a revised draft that will keep a reader's attention. This means offering everything from honest reactions to pointing out inconsistencies or questions that come up for me as a reader, and that don't feel resolved. Whether the writing needs technical work, characters need better motivation, or the pace of a plot is lagging, I'm always kind but honest with my feedback, which I always strive to explain in a way that will guide authors towards becoming better self-editors in the future. This feedback might look like:

Big Picture

- a letter with my major reactions (positive and negative) to the characters, setting, world, plot and pacing

- including, notes on what, if any of the above made the read confusing or not engaging enough

- and, suggested fixes for the above

Smaller Details

- tracked changes and line notes, pointing out awkward phrasing or clunky pacing

- including sample line edits to show how I'd correct the above

- and, notes on sections where the author is doing something great that I think they should do more

As an agent with 10 years of experience working at New York based literary agencies, I also have a keen eye for pitches and comparative titles and like to help authors hone their query letters to best grab an agent's attention and highlight what's unique about their work and how it will be welcomed in the market. Authors seeking query letting edits can expect:

- line edits and thoughts on their hook

- suggestions for comparative titles that best highlight the market they're writing to

- suggested edits for the main beats of the letter so the important information is conveyed clearly to the agent