Heidi S. – Editor

Are you looking for an experienced fiction editor? Someone who knows all about story structure, character development, and GMCs?

I have a BA in English language and literature, and I've worked on multiple NY Times and USA Today bestselling books. I have a collaborative style, and my goal is to help authors get the very best version of their story ready for readers.

I offer developmental edits that provide a detailed evaluation of what's currently working and what aspects need more attention. I focus on plot/structure, character development/arcs, GMCs, world building, dialogue, pacing, consistency, and POV. I also make comprehensive notes in the manuscript and provide a chapter breakdown with notes regarding what issues are showing up where.

I'm available to answer any questions and brainstorm solutions after the edit if needed. We can do this via email, a call, or a video chat — whatever you're comfortable with.

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PLOTTING SESSIONS

Do you have an idea or an outline but need help making sure all the building blocks of a solid story are there? Need a roadmap or a little direction figuring out a plot point? We can go over what you have and flesh out a detailed outline for you to work with.

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TESTIMONIALS

“Heidi is an incredible developmental and line editor. I’ve worked with her on all of my books, including my debut, and I can’t believe how lucky I got finding her. Working with Heidi is like getting a degree in writing and storytelling. She understands story structure and character development on a very deep level. What I love most about her is that she doesn’t hold back when it comes to feedback. If something is wrong with the story, she’ll tell you (very nicely), and then she’ll help you work through it. Her feedback is a critical part of my process, and I can confidently say that it’s made my books 10 times better.”

~ Gabrielle Sands

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“I've worked with Heidi on the edits for two dozen published titles, and I can say with confidence she has made me a better writer.”

~ Cat Johnson, New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author

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“Once Heidi has done her magic, I feel completely confident sending my story out into the world. She makes every book better!”

~ Erin Nicholas, New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author

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“If you’re looking for a professional, reliable, efficient editor with a great eye for detail, look no further. Heidi’s the best. Working with her has made me a better writer.”

~ N.J. Walters, New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author

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"Heidi Shoham is an extremely talented editor! We've worked together on many of my books, and she makes every one of them better. I highly recommend her!"

~ Eliza Knight, USA Today bestselling author

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“Heidi knows how to take my words and make them sing, and she's always careful not to change my voice.”

~ Desiree Holt, USA Today Bestselling Author