Overview
Are you looking for an experienced fiction editor? Someone who knows all about story structure, character development, and GMCs? I have a BA in English language and literature, and I've worked on multiple NY Times and USA Today bestselling books. I have a collaborative style, and my goal is to help authors get the very best version of their story ready for readers.
A developmental edit from me is comprised of:
~ a detailed evaluation of what's currently working and what aspects need more attention. I focus on plot/structure, character development/arcs, GMCs, world building, dialogue, pacing, consistency, and POV.
~ a chapter breakdown with notes regarding what issues are showing up where.
~ comprehensive notes made in the manuscript.
I'm available to answer any questions and brainstorm solutions if needed. We can do this via email, a call, or a video chat — whatever you're comfortable with.
I also offer plotting sessions.
Do you have an idea or an outline but need help making sure all the building blocks of a solid story are there? Need a roadmap or a little direction figuring out a plot point? We can go over what you have and flesh out a detailed outline for you to work with.
Testimonials
“Heidi is an incredible developmental and line editor. I’ve worked with her on all of my books, including my debut, and I can’t believe how lucky I got finding her. Working with Heidi is like getting a degree in writing and storytelling. She understands story structure and character development on a very deep level. What I love most about her is that she doesn’t hold back when it comes to feedback. If something is wrong with the story, she’ll tell you (very nicely), and then she’ll help you work through it. Her feedback is a critical part of my process, and I can confidently say that it’s made my books 10 times better.”
~ Gabrielle Sands
“I've worked with Heidi on the edits for two dozen published titles, and I can say with confidence she has made me a better writer.”
~ Cat Johnson, New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author
“Once Heidi has done her magic, I feel completely confident sending my story out into the world. She makes every book better!”
~ Erin Nicholas, New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author
“If you’re looking for a professional, reliable, efficient editor with a great eye for detail, look no further. Heidi’s one of the best. Working with her has made me a better writer.”
~ N.J. Walters, New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author
"Heidi Shoham is an extremely talented editor! We've worked together on many of my books, and she makes every one of them better. I highly recommend her!"
~ Eliza Knight, USA Today bestselling author
“Heidi knows how to take my words and make them sing, and she's always careful not to change my voice.”
~ Desiree Holt, USA Today Bestselling Author
Services
Fiction
Languages
Certifications
- BA English Language and Literature
Work experience
HarperCollins
* Provide line edits for multiple imprints at Harlequin Enterprises.
* Check for consistency from scene to scene (GMCs, actions, descriptions, etc.).
* Edit to improve paragraph structure, scene structure, and transitions.
* Revise repetitive words/phrases/structures.
* Check dialogue is authentic, believable, and flows.
* Tighten wordy sentences.
* Check for readability, pacing, clarity, and consistency.
Self-employed
I offer three standard editing packages — developmental, line, and copy edits. I can also tailor a combination of editing packages to suit an author's needs.
I work with authors to get the best version of their stories ready for readers, all while respecting the author's voice.
Entangled Publishing
* Reviewed submissions, prepared and presented acquisition proposals to the acquisition board, provided developmental, content/line edits.
* Developed and maintained the vision and quality of the imprints through controlled acquisitions and QA of every book published on the line.
* Collaborated with the authors, marketing, art, and administrative departments. taking manuscript from acquisition to publication.
* Wrote back cover copy and worked with various departments to design the best marketing tools and metadata.
* Managed the imprint’s production editor and publicist as well the day-to-day editorial operations, including writing outlines for spec projects and approving all acquisition proposals for the imprint before they were brought to the acquisitions board.
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