Donna Freitas

Donna Freitas – Editor

Developmental editor and book doctor with 20 yrs in the publishing industry. Helping writers finish and fix their books is my superpower!

Overview

Over the last two decades I’ve published more than 25 books (fiction & nonfiction, for adults, children, and young adults) across the Big Five houses, and I've taught in three creative writing MFAs, so the world of publishing has become my world too. For the last decade, I’ve worked privately as a developmental editor across genres.

Whether you are on your tenth novel or your first, writing for adults or for children, or even working on a memoir or scholarly trade book, I’ve done it all. I love using my experience to help writers get to the finish line of their dream book, to fix the manuscript they’ve struggled to make work, or even to get unstuck. I can help writers re-imagine their book, or restructure it if need be (I really am a book doctor!). And there is nothing more satisfying than seeing a writer I’ve worked with query agents, land one, and then have their publishing dreams come true.

I will give you critical feedback with a gentle touch, and I will cheerlead you until you believe in yourself. I will answer all your questions about the mysteries of traditional publishing, and I will help you go down that road. I can also help you decide whether a less traditional publishing path might make you happier and give you more freedom and control over your work.

I specialize in fiction of all kinds (Upmarket Women’s and Romance especially, and YA & MG across genres), as well as memoir. I hold a Ph.D. and have worked with many scholars on both trade and university press books as well.

And because I believe writers should not have to toil alone, if you work with me you will eventually find yourself meeting other writers, since I make an effort to gather my writers together for in-person retreats, as well as zoom confabulations because we all—and you all—need one another!

Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Humanities & Social Sciences
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Middle Grade Women's Fiction Young Adult
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-Employed

Sep, 2002 — Present
Book coach / editor of novels and memoirs across genres (upmarket women's, romance, contemporary, YA / MG); Agents send authors to me to fix / restructure manuscripts before they go out on submission; Unpublished writers come to me for help getting to the finish line and preparing their manuscripts to go out on submission to agents. Writer of over 25 books, both fiction and nonfiction, for adults, children, and young adults. My books include, THE NINE LIVES OF ROSE NAPOLITANO (Viking/Penguin), CONSENT: A MEMOIR OF UNWANTED ATTENTION (Little, Brown, 2019), and most recently a rom-com, STEFI AND THE SPANISH PRINCE (Harper).

Adelphi University

Aug, 2018 — May, 2020 (almost 2 years)
Full time professor in Adelphi's MFA in Creative Writing; I taught traditional graduate courses in Fiction, Creative Nonfiction, and also YA, plus taught creative writing workshops in these same areas in the undergraduate creative writing major. Directed student theses (full novels).

Stonybrook's Children's Literature Fellowship Program

Jan, 2015 — Dec, 2020 (almost 6 years)
Faculty mentor to Stonybrook graduate students working on Middle Grade and Young Adult novels across genres - Contemporary, Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance.

Fairleigh Dickinson University MFA in Creative Writing

Aug, 2014 — Present
I work with MFA students in Creative Writing on their fiction, memoir, and children's novels. As part of the MFA I teach craft skills and offer generative workshops, as well as direct MFA theses.

Portfolio

A Million Quiet Revolutions

Gow, Robin

Farrar, Straus and Giroux (BYR)

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Book Coaching
Table for One: A Modern Love Story

Gannon, Emma

Andrews McMeel Publishing

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Girls They Write Songs About

Bauer, Carlene

Picador Paper

Developmental Editing
Acceptance: A Memoir

Nietfeld, Emi

Penguin Press

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Proofreading Query Letter Review
The Golden Years Glitch

Smith, Judy

Wyatt-MacKenzie Publishing

Editorial Assessment
Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Hurricane Season

Melleby, Nicole

Algonquin Young Readers

Developmental Editing
Developmental Editing Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Book Coaching
Developmental Editing

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Margo P.

Margo P.

Mar, 2026

Working with Donna was such a pleasure. I was at a point with my book where I needed guidance on whether or not it was going in the right direction and she was extremely helpful with that in addition to giving me some ideas about how to move forward. After our zoom meeting, I felt reinvigorated a...
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Dorothy V.

Dorothy V.

Feb, 2026

Donna provided a high-level professional critique/edit. It helped me consider new ways to approach my memoir while preserving what worked. She was responsive to questions, open to conversation, and a delight to work with.
Jenny M.

Jenny M.

Dec, 2025

Donna is a talented developmental editor. I am grateful to have found her! She helped take my book proposal to the next level. She understands the publishing world and she is also an expert editor. And to top it all off, she is encouraging and kind. She was generous with her feedback, and support...
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Missy B.

Missy B.

Nov, 2025

Donna’s feedback was invaluable. She is supportive and direct. She knows what’s working, what’s not, and how to address the issue. Although my project requires significant restructuring I feel comfortable she has the skill and knowledge to guide me to the finish line. As a result, I believe ...
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Georgia R.

Georgia R.

Aug, 2025

If you are fortunate to have Donna edit your book, you will gain access to her vast expertise which covers every aspect of your endeavor-from coaching and encouragement to specific industry insights. She is positive, personable and has a depth of knowledge suitable for any level of ambition.

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