David Mahaffey

David Mahaffey – Editor

15+ years editing for an award-winning literary magazine. I help writers shape their work with clarity and care.

Overview

I've spent 15 years reading thousands of submissions at The Sun, an independent literary magazine known for publishing writing that's honest, intimate, and unafraid of depth. I know what makes an editor stop scrolling and lean in—and I can help you get there.

My approach is collaborative, not prescriptive. I'm not here to impose my voice on your work; I'm here to help you find and strengthen yours. Whether you're untangling a messy first draft, tightening prose that's almost there, or just need a thoughtful reader to tell you what's working (and what isn't), I bring patience, clarity, and genuine investment in your success.

What I offer:

- Developmental editing that addresses structure, pacing, and emotional resonance

- Line editing focused on voice, rhythm, and precision

- Honest, actionable feedback delivered with respect for you and your vision

I believe the best editing feels like a conversation, not a correction. If you're looking for a reader who takes your work as seriously as you do, let's talk.

Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Parenting & Families
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Poetry Short Story
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

Jan, 2008 — Present

The Sun magazine

May, 2010 — Oct, 2025 (over 15 years)
For 15+ years at The Sun, I've evaluated and edited thousands of literary manuscripts across fiction, nonfiction, poetry, and interviews, selecting and developing work from both emerging and established writers for publication.

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