David Mahaffey

David Mahaffey – Editor

15+ years editing for an award-winning literary magazine. I help writers shape their work with clarity and care.

Overview

I've spent 15 years reading thousands of submissions at The Sun, an independent literary magazine known for publishing writing that's honest, intimate, and unafraid of depth. I know what makes an editor stop scrolling and lean in—and I can help you get there.

My approach is collaborative, not prescriptive. I'm not here to impose my voice on your work; I'm here to help you find and strengthen yours. Whether you're untangling a messy first draft, tightening prose that's almost there, or just need a thoughtful reader to tell you what's working (and what isn't), I bring patience, clarity, and genuine investment in your success.

What I offer:

- Developmental editing that addresses structure, pacing, and emotional resonance

- Line editing focused on voice, rhythm, and precision

- Honest, actionable feedback delivered with respect for you and your vision

I believe the best editing feels like a conversation, not a correction. If you're looking for a reader who takes your work as seriously as you do, let's talk.

Services
Non-Fiction
Biographies & Memoirs Parenting & Families
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Poetry Short Story
Languages
English (US)

Work experience

Self-employed

Jan, 2008 — Present

The Sun magazine

May, 2010 — Oct, 2025 (over 15 years)
For 15+ years at The Sun, I've evaluated and edited thousands of literary manuscripts across fiction, nonfiction, poetry, and interviews, selecting and developing work from both emerging and established writers for publication.

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Mike L.

Mike L.

Feb, 2026

David M is absolutely exceptional. I've written many novels and poetry collections, published by legacy publishers and as an indie author on Amazon. All my books have been proofread professionally. David is by far the best proofreader I've had. I have recommended him to my wife, a nonfiction writ...
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Bill W.

Bill W.

Feb, 2026

Choosing an editor to work with is in large part a game of chance. Once you've made your choice, a writer needs to quickly feel a sense of trust with the editor on several levels. Does the editor get the vibe of the story as much as the intent? Do the editorial comments seem intelligent, thoughtf...
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Luke C.

Luke C.

Feb, 2026

David was great! Surpassed all my expectations. His synopsis and feedback on my book were thoughtful and tough when it called for it. David even brought forward areas I could improve in ways I hadn't considered. He listened to my goals for the project and then provided me with a variety of ideas ...
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David M.
Thank you so much for these kind words! Working on your handyman noir collection was a pleasure—the concept is brilliant, and your voice is distinctive and strong. I'm glad the feedback landed as i...
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