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Synopsis

Abandoned at birth and growing up in orphanages, Ember learned to be tough and survive in the not-so-nice world on her own. But when a team of two serial killers kidnaps her, she finds herself in a trap that no human can escape from.

Sixteen year-old Ember is a lot of things. She’s an orphan who was abandoned at birth. She lives in an orphanage in Wyoming. She’s a science whiz but struggles in P.E. Ember’s a “pet whisperer” with a special affinity for animals. In fact, Ember dreams about being an animal, especially a cat in Maria Merlot’s warm and whimsical paranormal romance, Tracks in Snow.


The first thing you probably ought to know about Ember is that she doesn’t “see” people – at least not the way most humans see. Ember feels them, usually in colors and textures. For example, Ember “sees” one person as warm sand on a beach. Another as aquamarine with sandpaper. And yet another as strong black tea and a smell of cedar. “Furthermore, she finds she can experience the world through an animal’s senses.


Feeling alone, Ember finds an understanding ally in Adam Camp, the elderly maintenance guy at the orphanage. The kindly old man’s son was killed in a recent world conflict, so Adam understands a thing or two about loss. Like: We can’t choose our parents, but we can choose are friends. We cannot choose to be loved, but we can choose to love.” And while we can’t change the past, we can decide to live in the present.


Back at the local high a school, Ember finds herself irritated by the school’s “smug genius,” Gary Morris. But Gary’s arrogance isn’t the only thing to worry about. It seems that Ember’s P.E. teacher, Coach Sid, has in it for Ember. She’s struggling in the class and graduation is in doubt if she doesn’t improve. Another student, Robert Baker, is a whiz in sports but struggles in science. The school principal, Mrs. Pebbles, “suggests” Ember and Robert team up for “help-each other detention.” Ember helps Robert tackle science. Roberts helps her tackle sports. They learn valuable lessons about teamwork and cooperation along the way, and not just in academic subjects.


But then teenage girls start disappearing. Foul play is suspected. It becomes all too real when Ember is abducted by a coupla super creepy dudes. She escapes by “morphing” into a deadly snake. Joining up with some other cats, Ember soon becomes “Spark.” Turns out one of the other cats, Storm, is a “morph.” That’s a cat that can turn into a human. Just like Ember/Spark can turn into a cat. (You’ll never guess who Storm becomes in human form.) The description of the morphing process is riveting.


Tracks in Snow is billed as a “paranormal romance.” It will certainly appeal to Young Adult audiences. But there’s so much imagination, creativity and insight packed into these pages, older audiences will it enjoy, too. Lively and lithe, the narrative imparts some valuable life lessons like the proverbial “Don’t judge a book by its cover.” Also being slow to anger and quick to forgive. Physics. DNA. Sports. Team work. Cooperation. Compassion and kindness. Trust. Family.  The Grandest Chef of Sausages. There’s also a certain Crimson Box of chocolates. Without giving too much away, let’s just say that the chocolates aren’t all they’re cracked up to be. Lots more!


Strong writing and solid characters round out a plot that’s fresh and original. It pulled me in from chapter one. Animal lovers and readers who enjoy The Chronicles of Narnia, The Incredible Journey, or Black Beauty will appreciate this book.


Drenched in creativity and wit, Tracks on Snow will warm up your winter – or any season. Besides. It’s just plain fun! In fact, if we’re rating Clever and Original on a scale of one to ten with ten being highest, Tracks on Snow is an eleven.


I read Tracks on Snow from start to finish in one sitting. (The title comes into focus later.) You can be sure I’ll be keeping an eye out for more for this talented author. Grab this book and you will, too. This one’s a keeper!


My Rating: 4.5

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Synopsis

Abandoned at birth and growing up in orphanages, Ember learned to be tough and survive in the not-so-nice world on her own. But when a team of two serial killers kidnaps her, she finds herself in a trap that no human can escape from.

Morning

The wall was of a nice texture. Ember liked the feeling in her finger pads. Like when you turn on Snapping in a graphic design program – she enjoyed her fingers ‘snapping’ pleasantly to the wall. They were strong fingers, and they carried her light, agile body effortlessly up the wall. 

Ember reached the ceiling. It was bumpier and provided a different sensation in her fingers. She liked it too. She observed the fancy lighting fixture that looked like a clump of exotic mushrooms from Ember’s perspective. She decided to explore it. The mushroom caps were formed by matte glass bowls with elegant lacy etching. Beautiful! And something else … Yes! It smelled enticingly of warm and crunchy yummy insects. The smell reminded her of roasted pumpkin seeds. I hope nobody decides to turn the light on, Ember thought, approaching the fixture slowly. Otherwise, it’s gonna be way too bright.


“Morning!!” An angry and scratchy voice shouted very loudly. “Get up, lazy bums! Breakfast in 20 minutes!”

Why do people love shouting so much? Ember thought with habitual annoyance. The voice jerked her out of the dream where she was a perfectly nimble gecko. The dream was still vivid in her mind. Ember stretched in her bed and soaked the last shreds of the dream in. 

Ember loved dreams about being an animal. She had them not as often as she would like but a fair amount. Most often, she was a cat. She loved cats and could easily imagine herself being one. In a few dreams, she was a bird and flew vast distances. She never looked at herself in her dreams. So she didn’t know what kind of bird she was, but it was something big. She remembered having big, strong wings. Tonight was her first time as a gecko. Walking on the ceiling was definitely something to savor! So, Ember smiled.

She smiled despite the shouting voice, despite the cloudy sky behind the window, despite her narrow and hard bed, and despite her thin and not-so-warm blanket of undistinguished color after too many washes. She smiled despite waking up in this dull room of the orphanage she called home. All of the above was a norm, was her life. But the gecko dream was special. It was a gem, a morsel of happiness. And waking up from such a dream into Saturday morning, with the whole weekend waiting ahead, that was double nice.


“Ember! I had such a dream!” Margaret exclaimed from the bed next to her, seeing that her friend had woken up. She had a kind face and emanated a feeling of warm orange color and a plush texture. (Some people call it aura; Ember didn’t see anything but had a feeling of a person, usually in terms of color and/or texture.)

“What was it about?” Ember asked, thinking more about her own dream.

“I was dancing with Gary,” Margaret whispered dreamily.

“Was he nice or as arrogant as in real life?”

“He was nice and very … gentleman-y.”

“Then it wasn’t Gary, really.” Ember laughed. “It was somebody else.”

Margaret sighed but kept smiling. They went to breakfast together. Ember wasn’t particularly excited about the breakfast that morning – every Saturday they had porridge. She would rather skip it altogether, but the rules required everyone to come down for every meal. Ember placed a symbolic amount of porridge into her bowl and compensated for it with a generous amount of toast, some fruit, and a huge mug of tea.


Saturdays were for housework – cleaning and maintenance. Kids of all ages were mandatorily involved in it. But kids who had a job were exempted from the work for the duration of their jobs. By law, one could do babysitting or petsitting starting at age 12 (but the orphanage didn’t allow that until 13) and take any kind of job at 16.  Accordingly, every teenager at the orphanage was eager to find a job – for money and the exemption.

For example, Elli and Emma – the girls from the room across Ember’s – dropped high school after their sophomore year when they turned 16 and started working in a hairdressing salon. Most 16-year-olds at the orphanage did the same (not the hairdressing part but dropping school).

Ember, on the other hand, had an ambitious plan to finish school and go to college. She convinced Margaret to continue her education too. Ember petsat for her pocket money. She was amazingly good with all sorts of animals. With kids, too, for that matter, but people in general delegate care of their pets to teenagers more willingly than that of their children. Anyway, Ember grew a reputation as a pet whisperer and had a lot of regular customers.


This Saturday, she had 3 dogs for a morning walk. First, Ember stopped at Mrs. Rapport’s place. Mrs. Rapport was a successful businesswoman and had a burgundy and silk feeling to her.  Her German shepherd, Duncan, didn’t like her cleaning lady. Actually, he didn’t like any cleaning people in general. So, taking him out for a walk at 9:30 sharp was imperative for the house to be cleaned in peace.

Duncan loved Ember and their Saturday mornings together. He was right there, in the hall, already waiting for Ember and the walk. He behaved with great dignity, but according to the magnitude of his tail wagging, he was happy and excited as a pup. Ember smiled at him and scratched him under his chin. “Yes, Duncan, I’m happy to see you too. Let’s go.”

The next stop was at Mr. Cutbrough’s (warm blueish-grey feeling) where a silky-coat golden retriever named Buckster joined the party. Buckster expressed his joy with a couple of barks and jumps around Ember and Duncan. He was on a retractable leash, which he used at its full capacity all the way to their next stop, Mrs. Mulberry’s house, while Duncan kept his noble disposition and strutted importantly next to Ember on her left side. 

There, Ember picked up a very energetic Pomeranian named Albert. Albert ran around, barked, and sniffed both dogs, Ember, his owner, and everything on the porch. In the minute while Mrs. Mulberry was giving Ember his leash and a packet of dog treats, Albert tangled his leash around Ember twice.

“Aww, isn’t it amazing, Ember? Albert is usually intimidated by big dogs, but with you, he is so confident.”

“Dogs like company, and Duncan and Buckster are very friendly.”

Ember had an opinion that dogs usually copied their owners’ attitudes. It was Mrs. Mulberry who was intimidated by big dogs, and Albert copied that. But taken individually, he was very playful and curious about other dogs of any size. The really amazing thing was that Mrs. Mulberry agreed to let Ember walk her precious Albert with other dogs. That was the thing with Ember – dogs behaved amiably under her leadership.

They headed toward Willows Park which had a large off-leash dog section. In Albert’s presence, Buckster became more dignified and walked mostly next to Duncan.

At the park, Ember unleashed the dogs. They ran away to greet the other dogs. Later, they would return to play with her. Albert was crazy about fetching small objects for Ember. He could do that the whole time in the park. Buckster liked to do each and every available activity in the park. He would run, fetch, do obstacles, and play with other dogs. As for Duncan, Ember would give him the most challenging tasks, involving obstacle courses and finding objects. That was her way of showing him that she knew how smart he was. Duncan appreciated it very much.


“Hi, Ember!” a familiar voice called her. She turned to see Dilan Johnson, her classmate, and his Rottweiler Sharp. The boy was aquamarine with a sandpaper texture.

“Hi, Dilan.”

“What was your score on the last math test?” Dilan unleashed his dog, and Sharp cautiously went to the other dogs.

“29 out of 30,” Ember said.

“Good! I got 28.”

“I got lucky. Two of the problems were exactly like the ones my group solved during the class work,” she hastened to add because Dilan was sensitive about getting (or not getting) the best score in the class. Ember didn’t care about her score, she just loved doing math.

“Do you know Gary’s score?”

“Nope.”

“Do you think he could’ve got 30?”

“He could, I guess.” Ember shrugged. “You know, part of it is luck. That’s why an A is anything from 27 and up.”

“You’re right.”

Sharp returned to his owner. Ember thought that he was very similar to Dilan in the way that he did not feel very confident among other dogs and needed constant reassurance of his greatness from his human.

Duncan finished his obstacle course and came to Ember. She poured water for him to drink. Duncan sniffed Sharp in a greeting way and then drank. Afterward, he sat down nobly next to Ember to have a rest.

Buckster came, too, for a drink and to check out the new dog. Sharp tried to look as noble as Duncan. In a few seconds, the fluffy ball of Albert emerged excitedly with a tennis ball he had retrieved. Suddenly, Sharp started barking at him. Poor Albert swerved under such a verbal attack. Duncan stood up and straightened his shoulders. He didn’t growl but showed the tips of his fangs to Sharp. Buckster did the same. Sharp stopped barking and stepped closer to Dilan. Albert dropped the ball at Ember’s feet and barked happily. 

“Good job!” Ember rubbed him affectionately. “Fetch!” She threw the ball again, and Albert rushed after it. Duncan sat down again, and the tension was relieved.


After the park, Ember walked the dogs back to their houses and collected her payments. Mrs. Mulberry also gave her freshly baked cookies, and Mrs. Rapport added a good tip.

Maybe I should buy sausages, Ember thought and stopped at a little store with a big sign: “Meats”. The store specialized in all sorts of meat, including game, and they had especially good sausages. 

Ember bought 4 sausages. The sales lady was fair and plump and smiled kindly; she gave Ember a feeling of warm sand on a beach. On her way out, Ember had to step aside to give way to a man who brought store carts inside.

“Excuse me,” he said and smiled politely.

“Sure, no problem,” Ember smiled back. She didn’t know his name, but the face was familiar – he had been working at the store for many years. He was in his late 40s, with no remarkable features, except for a slight limp. Ember once heard that he was a veteran and was wounded while in service. On the rare occasions when their paths crossed, she had a ‘stale’ feeling from him. She felt pity and always tried to be nice to him.



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Maria MerlotThank you, Kristine, for such a wonderful review!
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Kristine L.@mariamerlotYou're welcome Maria. A terrific read!
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Maria MerlotMy new YA novel "Tracks in Snow" will launch this Friday, September 29! Its Kindle edition will also be available for FREE on Amazon this weekend, starting Friday. Three days total: September 29 - October 1! If the preview and review got you interested, read the entire story for free! And if you like it, please rate it on Amazon and share your opinion with other readers.
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Maria MerlotReminder: One more day to download "Tracks in Snow" from Amazon for free! The offer is valid through October 1.
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Hello, I am Maria Merlot. I live in beautiful Colorado and like writing. Actually, the stories come to me on their own accord and ask to be written. I just do my best to write them down. They make me think, and I like it. I hope they will make my readers think too. view profile

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