Ian Moran
Ian Moran
@johnmoran7979 - Author
Ian Moran
@johnmoran7979 - Author
Ian Moran is a Scottish-Canadian. He is a double Masters holder: LLM, MBA, with undergraduate degrees in Computer Science, History and Commerce. With ... more
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Ian Moran commented on Jennifer Hill's update 9 months ago
9 months agoThank you for your review. I took the comments to heart and changed the structure of the text. The "why" for my book is now revealed only after 100 pages, but I tried to keep a hook at page four. I also turned some of the required info-dumps so that they are acquired by the reader through conversations. A great review with some real insight into story structure. Cheers!
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11 months agoAbout me
Ian Moran is a Scottish-Canadian. He is a double Masters holder: LLM, MBA, with undergraduate degrees in Computer Science, History and Commerce. With a varied educational background & professional experience, it's no wonder that his books cover a multitude of subjects spanning both fact and fiction.
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