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One woman's journey of survival with a friend after the lights go out.

Synopsis

Sophie is at work on Friday morning, when the power goes out. As she waits for it to be restored she notices that her fully charged cell phone won’t turn on. A horrifying thought crosses her mind and she runs to look out the window. The street is full of cars that are all stalled and people milling around looking at their non-working cell phones. She realizes that this is much worse than a simple power outage and that she must act quickly if she wants to survive. Sophie convinces a co-worker to join her attempt to get home, even though in her heart she knows deep down that she will be disappointed when she gets there.

I was intrigued by the description of the book, the story of a woman trying to get home to get home after an EMP causes widespread devastation to the power grid, unfortunately the writing detracted from the concept. From the way the book is written, the author appears to be involved in what is called the 'prepper' community or at least did a lot of research. I was not able to connect with the main character and felt like I was reading more of an outline of her journey. There was too much telling and very little showing. In the first paragraph of the book the action begins, which is great but the author made it very unrealistic. The power goes out, phones stop working and the main character says "I think we have been hit with an EMP,” as if she immediately knew what had happened. If all the power went out I do not think many people's brains would immediately know exactly what happened or at least not ask any questions. An example of a time where an action scene could have been shown and not told was when bandits came trying to get food and there is a shootout. No drama, no tension, no fleshed out scene of a fire fight between them. If there is an epic shootout against some bad guys, it should be highly detailed with the reader fearing for the MC's safety and the ultimate question of will she survive or get shot. The MC's journey ends by chapter eight which is what the story was supposed to be about and the rest is a very quick insta-love with Jeb. The story was very flat and one dimension. Overall, the story for me was a one star but I gave it two stars because I am sure there are a lot of people in the prepper community who will be able to appreciate the story a lot more than I was able to. That doesn't mean that there aren't lots of readers out there who won't fall in love with this book and if you are someone who is really into survival skills and prepping you may find this book fascinating. The concept is very interesting and the factual research was very evident but I struggled with the quality of writing and it lacked the warmth that draws me into a book.

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Daniele's travels have taken her around the world and back again, but her favorite adventures will always be found between the covers of a good book. Daniele loves all things Outlander and Disney and can't grow a garden to save her life.

Synopsis

Sophie is at work on Friday morning, when the power goes out. As she waits for it to be restored she notices that her fully charged cell phone won’t turn on. A horrifying thought crosses her mind and she runs to look out the window. The street is full of cars that are all stalled and people milling around looking at their non-working cell phones. She realizes that this is much worse than a simple power outage and that she must act quickly if she wants to survive. Sophie convinces a co-worker to join her attempt to get home, even though in her heart she knows deep down that she will be disappointed when she gets there.

Chapter One



“Your power stations, your cars, your creature comforts. Well, you lived too long. The bill’s due. Today.”

― David Mitchell, The Bone Clocks



It was Friday morning. I was headed to the break room for a doughnut and a refill for my coffee, then back to sitting in an office with two women that hated each other. I was almost back to my office when the lights flickered, then went out. “Well, shit,” I muttered. I made it to my office with the light coming from the front windows, I found my purse and felt around for my flashlight. One of my coworkers lit a candle on her desk. I took a large drink of the terrible coffee and sat down. As I picked at my doughnut, I realized how quiet it was.

I grabbed my flashlight, it wouldn’t turn on. Carefully, I headed out to the front of the store. There were no cars moving out on the street. A few people had raised their hood and were looking intensely at their engine, willing it to work. I walked back to the office and grabbed my cell phone, it was dead, but I had just taken it off the charger before I left home two hours ago.  “Oh, fuck,” I said, out loud.

“What’s wrong, Sophie?” my office mate, Alice asked. 

“I think we have been hit with an EMP,” I said, dropping into my chair.

She laughed, then looked at me. “You’re not joking, are you?”

“I wish I was,” I replied. “I’m getting out of here before the chaos begins.”

“Shouldn’t we just wait for help?”

“Help ain’t coming,” I said. “They don’t have working vehicles either. The military might, but they aren’t coming here to Birmingham to go house to house.” I watched the truth of my words set in. 

“What are you going to do?”

“I’m going to grab some food, water, and cash, then go to my car and get my hiking gear and start walking towards home. Do you want to come? You live on the way to my house, don’t you?”

“You will go by my road, are you sure you should do this? Why don’t you wait and see what happens?”

“Because the longer we wait, the less daylight we will have and the more people will be out being assholes, and I want to get past the cut-off to the prison before they start getting out. Make up your mind, I’m leaving as soon as I get my shit together.” I went back to the breakroom to get my cheese sticks out of the fridge and six bottles of water. Then I grabbed my turkey jerky and meal bars out of my desk drawer. I opened the safe and put in an IOU for $200 and took out the cash in small bills. 

“Why are you taking money?” Alice asked.

“Right now people still think it’s valuable. I can get food and stuff I need on the way home with it,” I explained. 

She walked over to the safe and put in her own IOU. “You’re right. My husband has been telling me for years that something like this was going to happen. He will go get his son from school, then start walking towards me.”

“Go grab some bottles of water and let’s get out of here. Do you have extra clothes or a blanket or anything in your car?”

“My husband put a bag in there, just in case.”

“Thank God. Don’t tell anyone that we are going. No one else lives out where we do and there is no reason for them to tag along.” 

As I was walking out I remembered there was a can of bug spray on the filing cabinet and I grabbed it.  I didn’t want to be eaten by fire ants if we had to sleep on the ground. 

She grabbed all the food from her desk drawer, got some water and we went out the back door to the parking lot. I used the key to unlock the trunk and grabbed my backpack. Then I got in the back seat and changed into my hiking pants and shirt. It was mid-September, but it would get into the mid to low 50’s at night in the hills where we were headed and I had no faith that we would cover fifty-four miles before dark. We would likely be sleeping outside for the next couple of nights. I prayed it wouldn’t rain. 

I got my jacket from the front seat and started stuffing it into my bag. My husband’s small 9MM was in the pocket. I had forgotten to give it back after my walk last night. I stuck it in my pocket and thanked God for my forgetfulness. I just wished I had a pocketful of ammo to go with it. 

Alice changed and dug her bag out of her trunk. I pulled everything out and quickly made sure she at least had the basics. Her husband had done better than I had in some ways. She had an emergency sleeping bag and quick-dry clothing. She had a life straw, a collapsible bladder and water treatment tablets, and a nice knife. Her first aid kit was way better supplied than mine and she had four freeze-dried meals. 

“Do you have a gun?” I asked.

“Yes, it’s in my purse.”

“How much ammo do you have?”

“I have a full clip and two extras and I know how to use it, my husband makes me practice.”

“Put it where you can get to it quickly. I’m not going to put my holster on until we get out of town but I have a small pistol in my pocket. Once we get out of town I’m going to wear mine out where anyone who would want to bother us can see it.”

“Okay, do you really think anyone will bother us?”

“I hope not, but I’m expecting it. You ready?”

“I guess so.”

“You know that there is no way we will walk fifty-four miles before dark, right? I have a small emergency tent, you have an emergency sleeping bag in your bag, we will be fine. Your bag has stuff in it I didn’t think to put in mine.”

She paled a bit, then took a breath. “Let’s go!”

We walked the six blocks out of town without attracting any attention at all. Everyone was so focused on their phones that didn’t work and their cars that wouldn’t run, that they didn’t notice two women walking down the sidewalk in hiking gear. We crossed the bridge out of Birmingham and started our journey north towards home. 

“It was around nine when we left, we have about nine hours of daylight left. I mapped walking with Google maps before. It said nineteen hours, but I think that was a bit optimistic considering half of it is uphill.” I pulled my .22 pistol out of my bag and strapped it on my hip.

Those first few hours we walked in silence, each lost in our own thoughts. There weren’t many cars stalled here and the ones that were there had been abandoned already. This two-lane road didn’t have much traffic, most people preferred to drive 80 mph on US 22. 

It seemed to take forever to walk the six miles to the first small town on our route. I turned toward the gas station and diner. “Why are we stopping?” Alice asked.

“Bathroom break, and maybe get some information about what we are facing. It takes me ten minutes to drive here, we just spent like three hours walking here. We should probably get some extra food before people start to panic.”

“Oh, I just want to go home.”

“Me too, I just want to get there safely and in one piece.”

The door to the diner was propped open and we went inside. It was filled with candlelight and we were greeted warmly by the owner and his wife. There were several other people inside eating. “We are emptying the freezer before the gas cuts off, come on in.”

The man pointed at a table, “Have a seat, we are at the Brunswick stew- burger level of the freezer, which will it be?” he said, smiling.

“The stew smells delicious, I’ll have that,” I said.

“I’ll take a burger,” Alice said.

It was quiet in the diner. Everyone either ate in silence or whispered to their companions. The food came and it was even better than it smelled. I had two bowls of stew and probably a half-gallon of sweet tea. “This is probably the last time we will eat in a restaurant, maybe ever,” I said, quietly. 

I didn’t realize that the owner was behind me. “You’re right. I have a ham radio and it seems it is this way over most of the country. Where are y'all walking to?”

“Sipsey,” I said. 

“You have a ways to go. I’ll have my wife put some stew in a jar for you, do you have a way to heat it up?”

“Yes, sir. We have small pots and a folding grill.”

“I’ll be right back. Go on into the store and see if there is anything you need. You have a long walk ahead.”

He came back with two jars of stew and refused to take any money. “That’s no good to anyone anymore,” he said. “But you might find someone on your way who still thinks it is. Keep it, it might come in handy on your journey.”

The only thing we took from the store was a few energy bars and some chocolate. “Thank you for the meal and supplies.”

“You two be careful out there. It’s a whole different world now than when we got up this morning, don’t forget that.”

“We won’t,” Alice said, hugging him.

We stepped outside and back on the road. It had taken us roughly three hours to walk six miles. That would mean two nights at least out on the road. 

“We have about five hours of daylight left. Let’s make the most of it,” I said. “Google was way too optimistic, I think it will take us around two more days to get home.”

“Well, my husband told me never to tell anyone this, but I guess I can tell you now. He has an old truck that he says will run even if we are hit with an EMP. He will go get his son and then come for me. I’m sure he will take you home too.”

“I hope that truck will run, but no one knows for sure because this has never happened before. So, let’s plan like we will have to walk the whole way just in case. I haven’t heard an engine since this started. I was hoping some good ole’ boys would have their trucks going by now.”

“You’re right, but it will be awesome when he comes.”

“Yes, it will.”

It was so quiet. No vehicles running, no planes flying, no televisions or radios playing, even the birds were strangely silent. Occasionally, when we passed a house, we would hear a dog bark, but we hadn’t seen another person since the diner. Which I didn’t think was a bad thing at all. 

“The sun is getting low in the sky, we have about an hour left to find a place to camp tonight, so keep an eye out.”

“I can’t believe this is really happening. I thought Russ would have picked us up by now. I don’t want to sleep outside,” Alice said, with a touch of panic in her voice. 

‘Shit,’ I thought. ‘Why did I bring her? No good deed EVER goes unpunished. Why do I never remember that until it’s too late?’ I took a deep breath.

“Look, the school was chaos, I’m sure. It likely took a really long time to get his son. The truck wasn’t just going to crank on the first try. He had to change the points and stuff first, so don’t panic that he didn’t come today. He prepared you to sleep outside for a reason,” I said, with much more patience than I felt. 

“You’re right, I’m sorry. If it wasn’t for you I would still be at the office in that horrible neighborhood waiting for help that won’t ever come. You probably saved my life,” she said, tearing up.

“Stop that shit right now! No crying on this trip, there will be plenty of time to cry when we get home. Just start looking for a place to camp. Someplace with cover, but not too far from the road and water nearby would be good too.”

We were coming up on an older farmhouse that I had always admired as I passed. It was a small bungalow-type home with a generous front porch. The house was surrounded by woods and sat way back off the road.  As it came into sight, I noticed motion on the front porch. I stopped to figure out what it was.

“Y'all come on up here, I won’t hurt you,” came a voice from the porch. It sounded like an older woman. 

I looked at Alice, she shrugged her shoulders. “It’s up to you.”

“Let’s go, but slowly. If I run, follow me. Keep your hand on your gun.”

We began the trek from the road to the house. When we were maybe halfway, I could see the woman sitting in a rocking chair with a shotgun across her lap. 

“Where y'all walking to?” she asked.

“Sipsey,” I said.

“That’s a far piece,” she said.

“Yes Ma’am, it is. Could we camp in your yard tonight? We won’t make a mess and we will leave at first light.”

“Absolutely not! I have food going bad in my refrigerator and beds just sitting there not being used. Y'all are welcome to have supper and stay the night. I’m hoping my grandson will come and get me tomorrow and I sure would appreciate the company tonight. I’m Maude, welcome to my home.”

Alice looked at me and I nodded. We still had around thirty-eight miles to go and I wasn’t going to turn down a real bed. “I’m Alice and this is Sophie. Thank you so much for having us.”

“Thank you, Ma’am, we would love to take you up on your offer.”

She smiled a huge welcoming smile. “Y'all come in, supper will be ready shortly.” She opened the front door and the smell of a beef roast cooking made my mouth water. We had eaten the stew, a mouthful at a time all day long, I couldn’t believe how hungry I was. 

“That roast was for Sunday dinner, that won’t happen now I guess. I thought I’d go on and cook it so I’d have it to feed Josh when he comes tomorrow.”

“Where does he live?” I asked.

“Fayette,” she answered. “He told me if anything like this ever happened, he would come and get me. I should have moved over there a long time ago,” she sighed.

We followed her into the kitchen where the centerpiece was an old gas stove from the ’30s or ’40s in pristine condition. 

“The tank was just filled yesterday,” she continued. “Josh always has it filled before the cold weather sets in. I have a well, but the pump is electric so the water’s not working. There is a hand pump though, would y'all mind filling up those buckets with water for me? We can heat some up to wash up with if you do.”

“Gladly, you are doing so much for us we will help you all we can,” Alice said. 

By the time we had finished filling up all the buckets and the bathtub with water, she had supper on the table. Roast beef, mashed potatoes, green beans, cornbread, and peach pie for dessert. 

“I’m gonna have a glass of wine with my supper, if it won’t offend ya’ll and ya’ll are welcome to join me if you like.”

“I won’t be offended at all and I would love a glass myself,” I said. 

“I would love one too,” Alice added. 

She lit an oil lamp and placed it on the table. It was the best meal I had had in a very long time. It sure beat the freeze-dried stuff I thought I would be eating tonight.

We cleaned up the kitchen and washed up with warm water, then we sat out on the porch to finish off the bottle of wine. 

“How long have you lived here?” I asked. 

“I have always lived here,” she said, laughing. “My daddy built this house in the ’30s and I was born here. Two of my brothers were killed in WWII, the other one came back and got married, and went to work in the coal mines near Jasper. He died in a cave-in in the ’70s. When I got married, my daddy had just inherited my grandparent’s house up the road, so my parents moved out and my husband moved in. I turn 93 next month and I have never lived anywhere but here.”

“I would never have guessed that you are 92. I thought you were in your early 70’s,” Alice said. 

Maude beamed at her. “Thank you, young lady.”

She told us stories about her life until the antique clock on the mantle struck ten. “Well, you ladies get some sleep. The sun’s not up good until seven now, so I’ll fix you a good breakfast so you can start tomorrow on a full belly.”

She gave us each a nightgown and showed us to our room. Then she went to her own bed. 

“What a sweet woman,” Alice said. “I hope her grandson does come to get her tomorrow.”

“Me too, I hate to leave her here alone.” We were at the back of the house, so I turned my solar lantern on low and put my gun under my pillow.

“So far this hasn’t been too bad. We’ve had two amazing meals and we are sleeping inside in a real bed tonight,” Alice said.

“We have thirty-eight miles to go. We did around sixteen today and I think the most we can do tomorrow will be twenty unless your husband shows up in his truck, we will still have one more night until we get home.”

“I think I was in shock all day today. I’ll do better tomorrow, I promise.”

“You did fine today. Don’t worry, we’ll get home. I feel bad for the people in the cities though. They will start panicking and dying in the next forty-eight hours.”

“Thank you for getting me to leave this morning.”

“It was selfish on my part. It’s safer with someone to watch your back.”

“Well, I know I wouldn’t have even tried to walk home if you hadn’t done this. Thanks for asking me to come, whatever the reason.”

“Get some sleep. Tomorrow will be a long day and we most likely won’t have a house and a bed to sleep in tomorrow night, so enjoy this one.”





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Stephanie Albright@danielekasper6292 You read this novel and wrote the review in less than an hour? So after looking at your other reviews I'm going to wear this one as a badge of honor. You have lumped me in with Orwell, Bradbury, and Huxley. I'll take that all day long! Please review Hemingway next! Have an awesome day. Thanks!
almost 4 years ago
Stephanie AlbrightThis reviewer read the novel and wrote her review in 40 minutes. When she says that the lights being out and the phones not working are not enough to make someone think it was an EMP, she is proving that she didn't really read the novel. No cars were working as well and she would have known that if she had read the novel and not just skimmed it. The novel has a 4.6 star rating on Amazon. Please feel free to leave your own review.
almost 4 years ago
Beth ConnorWhen I read Long Walk Home: EMP, it was out of the typical genres I read- but I have been trying to expand my reading horizons! I enjoyed the balance of practical information and storytelling this book had and finding myself writing a list of things I need to have on hand for any emergency. The author took a bleak situation and filled it with hope and perseverance. I appreciated the sweet love story that kept the pace of the story going. I recommend this to anyone that is interested in prepping and survival stories and also to those that enjoy a bit of romance. If you are the type of reader that needs a hopeless world with dramatic action scenes and large amounts of drama- this book may not be for you.
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Jenn MitchellThis is already full of telling, not showing. I thought I'd enjoy it as it's exactly my type of book but I won't be downloading it. I hope it does well for the author, I'm sure other people will enjoy it.
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Stephanie Albright@jennmitchell4664 Thank you for your feedback.
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Michael Plymel@stephaniealbright I hate to break this to you, but you're in the same boat as me thanks to the reviewer who gave both of us 2-star reviews without understanding our novels in the slightest. You see, Reedsy buries all books that receive below a 3-star rating, so neither of our books are showing up on their Discovery list. In essence, we paid $50 for nothing. Oh well, I'm done with Reedsy so I don't really care, but thought you'd like to know.
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Stephanie Albright@CureThree I appealed it and Reedsy didn't think a 40 minute turn around was grounds to remove it, but my book is doing very well and I have nearly 500 followers here. Not sure I will spend $50 again. Now that I have looked, they don't have any reviewers for my genre. I applied to be a reviewer for those genres and have not heard back yet.
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About the author

Stephanie Albright grew up in Ohio. In 1986 she went to Mississippi for the summer and never went back. She now lives in Alabama with a small flock of chickens and a very angry cat. Look for me on Patreon! https://www.amazon.com/Stephanie-Albright/e/B00ILHE47E view profile

Published on May 17, 2021

40000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Dystopian

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