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Disjointed narratives, editing and proofreading errors, and lack of cohesion make SOUL a frustrating collection to read.

Synopsis

This book is based on spiritual, and I created it as stories. In this book, including 5 stories. All of main characters are girls. There has a little adventure, and all is fictional stories. I target for anyone, but especially for people who interested in spiritual and kids for bedtime stories. I'm pleasure for your kindness. Have joy by reading my book. Thank you again.

I am confused, but perhaps I read the synopsis of SOUL while half-asleep, and that is my own fault. This is meant to be a collection of short stories that weave fairy tales and spirituality together, sharing lessons on life and the paths we walk. But I didn't really get that.


The real worry overcame me when I read the unedited PROLOGUE. A prologue provides background information, sets the stage for the main narrative, introduces key themes or characters, or offers a glimpse into events that precede the main story. It helps a reader understand the context or significance of the story that follows. The problem is that this is a collection of short stories with differing characters, themes, and lessons; this should have been an INTRODUCTION. What was I getting myself into?


This is a writer who is clearly passionate about many themes and, with this passion, wishes to shove them all into every single story, every single time. The problem is that this didn't serve any of the short stories. It doesn't work. There was no consistency to any of them, no wrapping up of a beginning with a sensible middle and a logical end. One short story begins with a girl who talks to animals and wants to explain how she got this gift, and then it's never mentioned again - and the lesson was completely unrelated.


It was a chaos of fantasies and spirituality woven together with cellophane tape instead of silken thread. It was an attempt at Grimms' Fairy Tales, with stories that did not connect with the final lesson. This collection needs a professional proofreader. In addition, it has not gone through a Native English editor, and it shows.


In the end, while V. Love's enthusiasm for storytelling is evident, it unfortunately can't compensate for their short stories' disjointed narratives and lack of cohesion. The potential for something special is there because it has heart, but it's buried beneath a tangled mess of ideas that never quite come together in any of the stories. With professional editing and a clearer focus for each piece, SOUL could become the cohesive and engaging collection it aspires to be. As it stands, however, it remains an ambitious but ultimately frustrating mess to read.

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A Canadian in France, a bibliophile, logophile, and Francophile. She lives driven by joy and filling her life with passion. When she’s not reading, creative journaling, or writing, she’s lending her clairaudient mediumship abilities to others through her spiritual business Seeking Celestial Grace©

Synopsis

This book is based on spiritual, and I created it as stories. In this book, including 5 stories. All of main characters are girls. There has a little adventure, and all is fictional stories. I target for anyone, but especially for people who interested in spiritual and kids for bedtime stories. I'm pleasure for your kindness. Have joy by reading my book. Thank you again.

Prologue

We all are living in the labyrinth and walking our journey by traveling on this earth, take our way and make a road. We all are forgetting that how to escape from this labyrinth. Life is a journey, walking on our never ended own road. Thus why, I call life journey is walking inside labyrinth.

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About the author

I'm from Myanmar. Now, I live in Republic of Korea as a aboard student in TV Broadcasting and Entertainment major at CAU University. Since I lived in Myanmar, I graduated as a Civil Engineering major at KTU Technology University. But I want to learn about media entertainment and to become a writer. view profile

Published on August 31, 2024

10000 words

Genre:Religion & Spirituality

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