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What happens when humans and aliens meet? This short story is a good choice for anyone who wants to dip into the world of science fiction.

Synopsis

What if we found an ancient race… by mistake?

Trapped in their ship for an eternity, Mas Gwinyai and his mates toil through their tedious routine, holding onto hope, unwilling to die.

Mas has time in abundance, so he sets out to write the ageless history of conflict between the Karanga and the Scragg. A story he believes no one will ever read.

Karanga are a noble race that tends the gardens, keeping nature in balance since the dawn of time. Scragg destroy the garden. They are a murderous breed that know only war and death.

Dr. Dale Clark and a group of graduate students visit the site of a mysterious obsidian spire, hoping to learn what lies beneath.

What happens when Mas and his shipmates come face to face with the Dr. Clark and his students is shocking.

Can Mas stop the cycle of war and make peace, or is nature a force too powerful to overcome?

Author Mike McCoy’s short story Obsidian: Tales of Karanga combines science fiction and human psychology with threads of an environmental message woven into the narrative.


The story’s main narrator is Mas Gwinyai, a member of the alien race known as Karanga. He, along with his crewmates Banga and Raviro, have been stuck onboard their vessel for countless years awaiting rescue until they are finally uncovered by a group of humans.


The story begins with an interesting alternative to Earth’s history – instead of evolving naturally the Earth has been shaped by Karanga who tend to the planet like gardeners. Everything goes well until humanity arrives. Obsidian emphasises the unfortunate truth that humans are responsible for much of the damage done to our planet. I did not expect to find an environmental message when I began Obsidian but I nevertheless enjoyed and appreciated its inclusion, particularly as such topics do not often appear in science fiction.


As stated, Obsidian does delve into aspects of human psychology. In this case – what happens when humans encounter aliens unexpectedly – or rather, what happens when humans encounter something they do not fully understand?


I was intrigued by the route McCoy chose to go down. Both sides (Human and Karanga) perceive each other as strange and dangerous entities and choose to fight rather than communicate. The majority of the plot moves along at a slow yet peaceful pace so, when the encounter does happen, the sudden introduction of these violent scenes is deliberately shocking.


The reader is given a vantage point and is able to look down on the events and observe what the characters cannot. Based on the reactions of the two races and their inability to go against their natural instincts, the humans and Karanga actually have a lot in common. By the end of the story it was difficult to say which side was truly better than the other.


If I had one criticism it would be that the descriptions of Mas and his fellow Karanga needed more detail. Through the eyes of the human characters we learn that Karanga are ‘ant-like’ but we don’t get much more insight than this. As a reader I would have appreciated the extra detail in order to better visualise this new alien race.


I found Obsidian: Tales of Karanga to be a surprisingly thought-provoking story as it makes the reader think about what they would do if they were in the same position, faced with the unknown. The short story is a quick read and a good choice for anyone who wants to dip into the world of science fiction.


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Thank my parents for getting me obsessed with books and stories from a young age. In 2020 I set up my website 'Lair of Reviews' where I publish reviews on books, films, and plays. I have degrees in both English Literature and Creative Writing. I currently work for a hospice charity.

Synopsis

What if we found an ancient race… by mistake?

Trapped in their ship for an eternity, Mas Gwinyai and his mates toil through their tedious routine, holding onto hope, unwilling to die.

Mas has time in abundance, so he sets out to write the ageless history of conflict between the Karanga and the Scragg. A story he believes no one will ever read.

Karanga are a noble race that tends the gardens, keeping nature in balance since the dawn of time. Scragg destroy the garden. They are a murderous breed that know only war and death.

Dr. Dale Clark and a group of graduate students visit the site of a mysterious obsidian spire, hoping to learn what lies beneath.

What happens when Mas and his shipmates come face to face with the Dr. Clark and his students is shocking.

Can Mas stop the cycle of war and make peace, or is nature a force too powerful to overcome?

I follow a monotonous routine repeated for eternity.

My pod cover slides back with a whoosh. I reach down without looking and pull out the long umbilical tube. I stand, step out of the pod, and walk to the hot sand bath. There’s nothing more pleasing than digging deep and rolling in the warm sand to scrub away ten spans of dead skin, sweat and yuck.

I walk zombie-like to the flight deck, grab a fist full of chika and swallow them whole.

There’s a few minutes of chitchat with Banga or Raviro, my shipmates. Sometimes I pull a double so I can see Raviro, even if it's only for a few minutes. She’s usually in a better mood than Banga. There’s never anything new to report, so whoever is going off shift walks past like a shadow eager to get below deck and into their pod. Hibernation relieves boredom.

Alone again, I move through our small dark vessel. Dimmed lights burn yellow against the black walls and floor.

Mindlessly, I shuffle through my daily chores. The repetition of my duties is burned into my being. Check the power reserve. Grab the bucket of condensate that drips from the limb at the aft of the vessel and pour it into the water tank. Fill the feeding reservoir. Our waste feeds them. The chika must eat. Separate six sets of mature ones for breeding. If the young are big enough, dump them in the storage bins. Gulp down another handful of the squirming grubs, then tidy things up. Raviro keeps a tight ship. Banga is the messy one. The rest of the day is for my idle pleasure.

Without a clock to mark the passing of days and increment the spans I would have no concept of time for there is no night nor daylight. Our ship has no view ports. The forward display can view recorded battle sequences, but the eyes that bring the outside views to the ship's walls are out of service and the hatch is jammed shut.

At random times, the water bucket fills faster, the volume of drips exceed what condensate can normally produce. These are rare, exciting days. The excess water is a blessing. It keeps us alive. Raviro says it’s Mwari watching over us. I’m not so sure.

I dutifully complete my daily chores, sleep when tired, eat when hungry, and keep watch until my shift of five spans is complete, hibernate and repeat. This is the dreary cycle we have followed for thousands of spans.

We keep watch. We have hope.

The only other choice we have is to die. I agreed long ago to not accept that fate. We live for a warrior's death. We will not defile the honor of our families by taking our lives like weak scragg’s, even if no one will ever know. Raviro says we must have faith, but even she must concede by now that no one will ever find us. Regardless, we have agreed to carry on. I have time. While it ticks past, I endeavor to write the saga of how we came to be here. I write for myself, knowing no other being will see this.


My name is Majaya Masimba Gwinyai. I am Karanga. We are a noble, powerful people. Karanga have tended the gardens, forests, and oceans of these lush lands since time began. My first name means brothers. I am the second son born in a single span. Our people considered my birth a great blessing to my family and a sign to all karanga that the power my father wields is great, for it is exceedingly rare that a man can produce two sons in a single span.

I prefer my middle name, Masimba. It means powerful. As a boy I dreamed of growing tall and strong like my father, doing great deeds, winning battles, achieving victory. My middle name fits well with our family name, Gwinyai, which means strength. I am powerful strength. I like that. It’s much better than second brother. My brethren call me Mas Gwinyai.

We are ancient. Karanga have nurtured the gardens since the dawn of time. Over millennia we learned to use the strength that builds majestic mountains and put it to good purpose making metal. We conquered the mystery of the sky, capturing its storm power when it touched our steel. Once we learned to harness energy from the skies, karanga used it to make the lives of our people better. We learned to use the winds and the power of the sky to rise over the garden and view it from above. Like birds and butterflies, we soar through the air in wondrous vessels.

The karanga prospered, but we never forsook our primary role. Our essential purpose is working to keep nature in balance, for our garden is a beautiful green, blue paradise spinning slowly through the galaxy and we must preserve it forever. We used our knowledge and power to care for the garden and the rivers living in harmony with nature, for it is the air, trees, and water that nurture us.

But not everything in the garden should be allowed to live. When weeds infest the garden, stealing nutrients, spreading wide, crowding out the harvest, do you not cull the weeds? Karanga are peaceful beings. We knew the scragg were out there. We left them alone. They weren’t hurting us; the elders said. Their existence is Mwari’s will, said others. When there are but a few weeds in the garden, you may dismiss them. Our tolerance allowed the weed to grow.

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What if we found an ancient race… by mistake? Mas Gwinyai and his shipmates have been trapped in their ship for an eternity, but that’s about to change. Mas is Karanga. He recites a tale of ageless conflict between the Karanga and the Scragg. Karanga are a noble race that tend the gardens, keeping nature in balance since the dawn of time. Scragg destroy the garden. They are a murderous breed that knows only war and death. Dr. Dale Clark and a group of graduate students visit the site of a mysterious obsidian spire hoping to learn what lies beneath. What will happen when Mas and his shipmates come face to face with the Dr. Clark and his students? Can Mas stop the cycle of war and make peace, or is nature a force to powerful to overcome?

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Mike McCoyThe first person to review OBSIDIAN on Reedsy was @miriamatkinson. In her review she commented that she wished I had described the Karanga more. We don't learn what they look like until the humans view them. I didn't want the reader to think of the Karanga as different. How would Mas Gwinyai have described himself? He might have said, magnificent, strong, beautiful. He would not have seen himself as unusual. How would humans describe themselves?
over 3 years ago
Mike McCoyI hope people will enjoy reading OBSIDIAN. There is much talk of aliens and UFO's in the news these days. I've always felt that if there are other entities outside of our knowledge, they come from here, not outer space. OBSIDIAN is a fantasy treatment of this idea.
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Mike McCoy is a novelist. His debut novel ASTEROIDS–Bridge to Nowhere, received high praise from critics and was selected as a semifinalist for the 2020 Publishers Weekly Booklife Prize. Mike is also an international businessman and a serial entrepreneur who has traveled extensively. view profile

Published on February 12, 2021

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Genre:Science Fiction

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