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Nemesis is the perfect holiday read for the thriller lover - action-filled, fast-paced and written with clear direction and awareness.

Synopsis

Only open to the public for four months out of the year, White Peak National Park is one of the highest rated skiing experiences in the Rocky Mountains. And with access exclusively restricted to one group a day, enthusiasts from around the world often wait years for a chance at this once in a lifetime excursion.

After securing a window at White Peak for themselves, locals Dustin, Miri, and Riley embark on a thrilling descent of self-discovery through the uninhabited terrain. However, their vacation is short-lived when they discover an injured man taking refuge in the park’s abandoned town of Frostmoor. They soon realize they’ve stepped into the crosshairs of a sinister game of life and death.

Armed only with their camping gear and knowledge of the mountainous terrain, the friends quickly learn they’re in a race against time as a mysterious group of well-funded outsiders make it known they don’t appreciate uninvited spectators.

Nemesis is a well-paced thriller from the start where the three key characters who we follow during the story are introduced to us, namely Dustin, Miri and Riley. Meeting to ski in a restricted area of White Peak National Park, they are excited for the exclusivity of the experience, a pass needed to enter, and the chance to ski some untouched slopes - a real adventure. Equipped for this expedition, it all starts to go awry when they try to get to a place called Frostmoor, an abandoned town, now preserved for the intrepid to visit, and meet a black-clad stranger who is eager to deter them from going any further.


Do they decide to take his advice and turn around? Or do they continue on their planned route regardless?


Well, it probably wouldn't have been such a good read if they'd turned around so I think you know the answer to that. Their decision to continue has consequences and they find themselves in a situation where they are in severe danger and have to draw on their intelligence and knowledge to survive.


This was an enjoyable thriller from the outset to its conclusion. Well-paced and plotted, I found myself getting through this very quickly as the narrative had flow and the characters were well-delineated. Not a great deal of depth here except in the discussion of Dustin's back story but then I'm not sure that this is really what one would expect of a thriller of this sort anyway. It is all about the action and there is plenty of it here.


The concept on which the book is centred is rather dark but Michael deals with it with a light touch; this means the novel is nasty enough for you to feel the threat but not so dark that you are left in despair at the motivations of humanity.


I will definitely read the book that precedes this one and hope that it has the same pace, and I am also looking forward to more books by Tyler Michael in the future.


This one would be a perfect holiday read - nothing too taxing but a great way to while away some time.



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Synopsis

Only open to the public for four months out of the year, White Peak National Park is one of the highest rated skiing experiences in the Rocky Mountains. And with access exclusively restricted to one group a day, enthusiasts from around the world often wait years for a chance at this once in a lifetime excursion.

After securing a window at White Peak for themselves, locals Dustin, Miri, and Riley embark on a thrilling descent of self-discovery through the uninhabited terrain. However, their vacation is short-lived when they discover an injured man taking refuge in the park’s abandoned town of Frostmoor. They soon realize they’ve stepped into the crosshairs of a sinister game of life and death.

Armed only with their camping gear and knowledge of the mountainous terrain, the friends quickly learn they’re in a race against time as a mysterious group of well-funded outsiders make it known they don’t appreciate uninvited spectators.

11:15:32

The morning sun had nearly crested the snowy peak as the crew paused to celebrate their ascent. After three months of planning, six grand in new equipment, one nearly impossible park permit, and a long morning trek, they had arrived at the summit of White Peak National Park. The first, and arguably most difficult, leg of their ski weekend was complete. 

“Coming to you live from the summit of White Peak,” Riley began as he removed a small camera affixed to his ski helmet. Fitted head to toe in brand-new winter gear, his lanky build was nearly unnoticeable as he pivoted in a wide circle to showcase his surroundings. “A harrowing journey that few would ever pursue,” he continued sarcastically while redirecting the camera toward the other male in the group, who was now sitting against a stone slab several feet away. “Dustin, how high are we again?”

“Uh, 12,314 feet,” Dustin replied while looking down at his watch. 

“You heard it here, folks, 12,000 feet,” Riley continued. “An adventure for the ages.”

Only open to the public for four months a year, White Peak National Park, known to enthusiasts as “The Great White,” was one of the most sought-after ski excursion experiences in the Rocky Mountains. The park spanned nearly thirty miles in each direction from the main peak, was carefully regulated by park services, and sported a three-year wait list, which was mostly due to the park only issuing one civilian ski license per twenty-four-hour block. It was through Riley’s alumni connections with the Parks Department that the crew received preferential access and secured a quick spot in a matter of months. 

“Are you going to do this the entire trip?” Miri interrupted as she tossed her pack in the powdered snow and plopped down next to Dustin. “We literally hitchhiked the first ten thousand feet and then followed a trail up until a few hours ago.”

“Dude! You are killing the vibe,” Riley snapped as he put the camera back in the bracket on his helmet. “My people have been waiting months to see this.”

“You have ten followers, including us, and you’re not even livestreaming,” Miri laughed. “Get your ass over here and enjoy this view before we hit the slopes.”

“Miri’s right,” Dustin added. “Don’t have a ton of time up here. Parks want us setting up camp below 8,000 feet and before the sun sets.”

Riley rolled his eyes as he dropped next to Dustin. The three sat in silence as the winter winds tossed loose snow across the untouched peak. Each breath was heavy and visible.

“Pretty awesome though, huh?” Riley continued as he took off his helmet and set it on his pack resting in the snow. Without breaking his gaze from the valley below, Dustin patted Riley on the leg. 

“Pretty good hookup,” Miri responded. “Been trying to get up here for years.”

“We are literally on top of a mountain by ourselves,” Riley added. “Every direction, for miles, there’s just nothing.”

Dustin leaned over and pulled a map from his zipped left pocket. Quickly unfolding it, he placed the terrain view in front of Miri. “Alright, we’re here,” he started, pointing to the map. “Slopes are open through this area. Then things will tighten up with forest on both sides around 9,000.” 

“And back to business,” Riley mumbled. 

Ignoring Riley’s comment, Miri leaned over and looked at the map. “Where are we planning to stop for the night?”

“Right here, northwest of where we are now,” Dustin said as he pointed to the lower corner of the map. “Straight shot would get us there a few hours before sunset, so we should have plenty of time to explore Frostmoor.”

“Thought that was during our second day on the slope,” Riley interjected as he leaned across Dustin to get a better view of the map. 

“Today, my friend,” Dustin responded as he pushed Riley back. 

“What secrets lurk in the abandoned village of Frostmoor?” Riley began with a theatrical voice, grabbing his camera and placing it in selfie mode. “Cut off from civilization, only the empty remnants of a time long past.”

Miri lunged over Dustin at Riley’s arm. “Give me that. I’m not doing this for the next two days.”

“Okay, okay,” Riley shouted as he stretched away from Miri. “I’m done, I’m done.” 

Dustin let out a deep sigh and stood, cutting off Miri’s lunge. He quickly examined his boots before folding the map and returning it to his pocket. Dustin, in his mid-twenties, stood over six-foot-two, with broad shoulders, well-groomed facial hair, and a military-style haircut. 

“We rollin’?” asked Miri as she looked up at Dustin and squinted from the sun.

Dustin helped Miri to her feet. “Let’s switch over,” he replied as he gave her a peck on the lips and then stepped over to his pack and ski gear resting nearby.

Miri and Riley followed suit and unpacked their gear. Miri made quick work of her skis and spent most of her time adjusting her helmet and goggles, while Riley focused on setting his boots and snapping his skis into position. Well accustomed to recreational skiing, all three quickly switched their equipment and were ready for the descent.    

“You guys good?” asked Dustin as he shifted his ski pole bands around his wrists. 

Miri and Riley both nodded as they approached Dustin and came to gliding stops.

“Let’s keep our formation tight, and we need to stick together,” Dustin continued. “If anybody needs to stop, just shout.” He turned and looked down the slope. “And watch your speed, especially out of the gate. Descent looks a little dicey down there.”

“I literally grew up two hours from here,” Miri interrupted. “Let’s go!”

“Ready for descent, oh Captain my Captain,” Riley sarcastically said into his walkie talkie. The grin on his face was chin to chin.

Dustin rolled his eyes, hopped up the short incline to Riley, and swiped the radio from his hand. “Give me that.” He turned and tossed it to Miri, who awkwardly snatched it from the air. “That’s yours now.” He turned back to Riley. “And don’t call me that.”

“C’mon, man,” Riley grunted. “Technically, you are the only one of us with military experience.”

 “Military experience that only lasted a few months.”

“Oh, I thought you served for a few years,” Riley continued. “What happened?”

“That’s a great question. He hasn’t told me that part yet,” Miri added as she slid closer to Dustin and glared at him. 

Dustin pulled his goggles over his eyes and shifted away from them. “Story for another time,” he muttered before starting down the steep slope.  

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About the author

Tyler Micheal is a film and video game enthusiast seeking to bring a similar mix of excitement and pace to fiction. He lives in Clarence, NY with his wife and son. His debut novels, APEX and Transcription, is available on Amazon and Barnes & Noble. Contact Information: Tyler@tylermichaelbooks.com view profile

Published on July 03, 2023

50000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

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