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Mike & Alex Part 1, The Defenders of the Animal Forest

By Peter van Wermeskerken

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A children's story for young fans of Charlotte's Web and the Animal Farm

Synopsis

Children's book for 4-10 years old. Also, (grand)parents will laugh about it! It's about Mike, the biggest kid of the family, Rabbit, and Alex, the smallest of the Swine kids. They are close friends. On a good day, they go outside the forest and hide in the cornfield. Dog Mason leads them to the farm. There they meet Sow Sophie and her piglets. Sophie wants to remain a slim lady, and loves having more babies. She asks her friends to eat her leftovers. The friends grow and grow, thanks to the good food from Sophie. They become giants! Now, they can lead the forest animals in actions against all kinds of nasty things humans do against the animals. A glimpse: The guests of a housewarming party will never forget how that party was ruined. The boss of the road workers understands the clear message on a truck as he sees what the forest insects have done. And finally, read how the hunters are hunted in the autumn. All animals from the forest and the farm play their natural role. As a result, each story is not only fun and a bit naughty, but also educational.

Peter van Wermeskerken's 2024 graphic comic series Mike & Alex Part 1, The Defenders of the Animal Forest, is a book written for children ages 4-10 years old, which are very different audiences.


The book begins with the illustrations by Reema Sehga, who has a strong sense of depth, shading, and multi layered images. Some of her shadows seem out of place for the time of day, and the cows are slightly lumpier than most cows, but the animals are otherwise fun and engaging. The style is classic for young readers, cute and colorful, but with only six total illustrations, there are not enough pictures for a children's book. In addition, the illustrations are not synced well with the story. The picture of Liam the Fox and the red Xs, is found thirteen pages after it is first mentioned.


From the reader's perspective, Picture Books are aimed at kids, age 3-8, with between 250-1,000 words. While, Chapter Books are written for kids 6-10 with a range of 8,500-12,000 words. At the upper range, the story is better suited for older readers, who might be content with fewer images, but they would prefer an illustration style that was not for little kids.


The story itself presents the friendship and adventures of Mike the Rabbit and Alex the Swine, who live on the farm of Farmer Jacob, and his wife, Carla. To add to the mix, Jacob can converse with his farm animals, including Jack the horse. The story begins with farm life and new neighbors, then changes to an animal protest against a planned Car-Path and a fight against hunters.


The writing includes grammar mistakes, such as, ".." and "th3y", and sometimes the dialogue is grouped into paragraphs. However, the number one rule for writing dialogue is that each speaker gets a new paragraph and paragraphs are indented. The story also includes a jumble of revolving characters: Alex and Mike, Liam the fox, Jack the horse, Trevor the wolf, Mr. Owl, Jacob and Carla, Farmer Steve, Sophie the sow, Terrance, and Emily the cow. It is unclear if the story is about Mike and Alex or about the farm and surrounding forest.


In summary of The Defenders of the Animal Forest, I give the book two out of five stars (2 of 5) because the story and illustrations are a mismatch of style and audience, and the book wanders between numerous characters. Though written for older kids, the illustration style is aimed at younger children. I believe the book would also benefit from additional editing and a rethink of ideas before kids ask, what does Jacob eat?

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Oh sure, you'll read this, but you won't leave a comment, fine. D.R. Martin is the mind behind the Grim Chronicles series, which he dreamt up in Bangkok, TH. Youngest of 8 kids in a navy family, he has a BA in Film, an MA in Media, and lives with his wife, teenage son, and two cats in Chicago-land.

Synopsis

Children's book for 4-10 years old. Also, (grand)parents will laugh about it! It's about Mike, the biggest kid of the family, Rabbit, and Alex, the smallest of the Swine kids. They are close friends. On a good day, they go outside the forest and hide in the cornfield. Dog Mason leads them to the farm. There they meet Sow Sophie and her piglets. Sophie wants to remain a slim lady, and loves having more babies. She asks her friends to eat her leftovers. The friends grow and grow, thanks to the good food from Sophie. They become giants! Now, they can lead the forest animals in actions against all kinds of nasty things humans do against the animals. A glimpse: The guests of a housewarming party will never forget how that party was ruined. The boss of the road workers understands the clear message on a truck as he sees what the forest insects have done. And finally, read how the hunters are hunted in the autumn. All animals from the forest and the farm play their natural role. As a result, each story is not only fun and a bit naughty, but also educational.

CHAPTER 1:

Mike the Rabbit and Alex the Swine


His mother called him Michael. He was the most active of all the young bunnies. He played with his brothers and sisters in the forest, skipping, running, and digging, which they learned from their Mom and Dad. ‘Catch-me-as-you-can’ was one of their favorite games. It was enjoyable if you were chased. The trick was to let the pursuer come so close he almost had you and then suddenly jump a corner, passing a tree. The follower had to be careful not to bump headlong into the tree.

“Yes,” Mike replied when his mother called for him. He and the other siblings had a good life in the forest. There were lots of different animals to play with. But they had to be very careful for foxes, cats, and ferrets. Mike’s best friend was Alexander, the little swine.

Alexander had lots of brothers and sisters, but he was the smallest. He wasn’t as solid and fast as the others and always got pushed away from the food. When they played, he almost always lost.

The little swine and the giant rabbit liked to play together in the farmer’s cornfield. But once, the nasty farmer sent his vicious dog Mason out into the cornfield. “Get out!” he yelled. The dog paused and gasped. That darned rabbit jumped beside him, and so he lost sight of the swine. Now, he had to go sniffing for a track, which would take much longer. “My boss doesn’t want you digging holes in his cornfield. I’ll keep watch,” barked the dog.

A few days later, Alex and Mike had gathered enough courage, to go carefully to the cornfield's edge. They did not see Mason, and Mike's nose could not smell him either. One day, Mike proposed to Alex that they go along to the cornfield’s edge that night. “Let’s have an afternoon nap so we’ll be wide awake,” he said. 

They walked cautiously along the cornfield that night; beware, the dog would jump out. “Does a dog need to sleep, like us?” Mike asked his friend. “I think so,” Alex growled. “He’s an animal, just as we are.”

Mike and Alex were gradually becoming more grown-up. They were getting more curious and daring and wanted to explore the world. When they arrived at the corner of the field, in the deep twilight, they saw the farmhouse and a large old barn with several doors. The rear door in that row, which was closest to them, was slightly open. It squeaked back and forth, gently in the light evening breeze.

Mike and Alex were curious. Even more carefully than before, the friends approached, creeping along on tip-toes. They sniffed at all kinds of odours that they did not know. They wondered whether they should feel afraid, but their curiosity overcame them. They had promised to continue to help each other. And together, they were strong.

Near the stable, Mike sniffed once more. He smelled the dog and other animals, including cows and pigs. Mike hopped quickly to the door. He jumped inside, rushing when a fierce gust threatened to clamp the door shut. Fortunately, the door did not slam shut. Alex had seen his friend jump through the door, but he was too big to slip inside. With his sturdy body, he tried to give a little push to the boards of the fence of the barn. The boards broke as if they were matchsticks.

Mason heard the creaking sound! The dog rushed out of his cage, furious and barking. “What are you doing? I’m the boss here.” Alex was scared, but he did what his father had taught him. He braced himself. He lowered his head slightly to give the rapidly approaching dog a fierce poke with his nose.

Oops! The long, thick rope that was the dog's lead was too short! Suddenly, the rope cut into his neck. Instead of catching his prey, he flew onto his back. Ouch!!

The dog scrambled up in a daze; he looked in the direction where Alex had just stood. But the door had blown open wide enough for the wild swine to follow his friend quickly inside.

When Alex had settled his emotions of fear for the dog, he heard a soft slurping sound. Gradually, his eyes became accustomed to the darkness. His nose smelled something very familiar. Now he saw it, too: a large sow with her children. “Welcome,” grunted the mother pig, “Do I get companionship?”

“Are you a swine, just like me?” Alex asked

“Come to my front so I can see you better,” growled the pig with the high tone of a female.

Alex walked to her front, taking care not to tread on all those cute little piglets.

“I can see you now. We look very much alike. We're like family, but you have bigger teeth and brown skin with black lines. We have smaller teeth, and our skin is white.”

“Are these your children?” Alex asked

“Yes, those are my piglets, my baby pigs.”

“So you're a pig, and they are your baby pigs? What's your name?”

“Yes, I'm a pig, and the farmer calls me Sophie the Sow. A sow is a mother pig.”

“You know a lot, Sophie; I'm Alex. Have you seen my boyfriend, Mike?

“You mean that little tiddler, who is smaller than my piglets? You can hear him slurping. He said he was hungry, and I told him he could eat my leftovers.”

Alex suddenly felt very hungry, and his stomach growled.

“Sophie, do you think there is something for me? You must have enough food to feed all your piglets.”

“You're a sweetheart,” Sophie said. “There is enough, and the farmer always gives me too much. It tastes good, but I want to remain a real pig lady, slim enough not to be slaughtered this autumn. Come here; I want to smell your nose.”

Alex did so. Sophie pulled her face back and said, “Go ahead, my boy.”

Boy, it tasted good! That meal was a feast for Alex. "Sophie,” he said between his slobbering, “This food is delicious!”

“Eat up and keep feasting. That's good for a young pig like you, as it will make you bigger and stronger. What do you eat where you come from?”

Alex paused his munching and licked his mouth. “I eat in the forest, which is behind the cornfield. We eat the soft parts of roots.”

“That's far away! Then you’ve made a long and tiring walk,” said Sophie.

“ I'm used to long walks,” said Alex. Sometimes, I run quickly because of a dog or some other animal.”

Sophie had to laugh: “That's Mason. He makes a lot of noise, but he’s harmless. He can’t even properly growl. You can walk up to him and talk to him. He won’t bite.”

“Well, thank you, Sophie. There is some leftover food for you. Mike also has his fill now.”

The rabbit was already waiting. He said, “Yes, that was tasty!”

“Alex, you don’t have to leave me any food,” said Sophie. “Every day, the farmer brings me too much food. He thinks I need so much for my piglets.”

Alex continued to gorge until he had eaten all the food Sophie had given him.

Mike and Alex said in unison, “Thank you, dear Mama Sophie; that was very tasty!”

    “Well done, guys”, replied Mama Sophie, “now you may go to sleep.”

“Dear Mama Sophie,” said Mike, “I think our mothers and fathers might be worried because we ran away and aren’t back home yet. And now it’s dark outside.”

“Well, then go home now,” said Sophie. “But you have to promise me one thing first. No more animals should come here from out of the woods. With the two of you, and my piglets,I find it cozy enough.”

“Yes, Mama Sophie, we promise,” said Mike and Alex.

Mama Sophie, who had experience raising pigs, knew she had to tell her children what was allowed and what wasn’t. Later, they would want to explore and see what they could do and what was too dangerous.

"Mason!" cried Sophie, standing up. “I’ve told the rabbit and swine to go home now. You don’t need to worry about them. And to the youngsters, she said, “I hope to see you again soon. That was fun!”

“Thank you, dear Mama Sophie,” called Alex and Mike. “We'll be back soon!” Alex cried as he struggled to wriggle between the broken slats.





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Peter van WermeskerkenA few comments on D.R. Martin's review: 1. I doubt whether Mr. Martin understood that Mike and Alex stand up for animals suffering from human actions. That is the theme of the entire series. This makes Mr. Martin's criticism of the content questionable. 2. The reviewer did not read correctly: the rabbit Mike and the wild boar Alex come from the forest to the farm every day to eat the leftovers of sow Sophie, who wants to remain a slim lady. 3. I thank Mr. Martin for his comments on dialogues; 4. A professional reviewer in the Netherlands gave the book four stars and found the description of how each species lives particularly strong and that even an element such as "how do baby pigs come into the world" is discussed. 5. There is a 50% (4 years) overlap in the age categories 3-8 and 4-10 years. You should not make such a big deal about that; Peter van Wermeskerken, author
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Born 12-31-1939, Netherlands. Over 40 years as a journalist, mainly at AD Daily Rotterdam as a senior economic writer. After retirement, I got time for writing. First my autobiography, Double Agent. I also wrote the second children's book series, Mike & Alex. Parts 3 and 4 were just published. view profile

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