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Luminary Odyssey: The Children of Stardust 1

By Iago Hyde

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The main characters are forced to battle unique foes on their quest to obtain the wayfinder compass.

Synopsis

We are all made of Stardust.

Deadlines suck. Deadlines particularly suck when you have six months to track down the universe's most wanted criminals - a collective of humanoid weapons made from the essence of gods... The notorious Children of Stardust.

Roanoke is an introverted young man seeking to help his chaotic twin sister Kaleida and her wyvernboy friend, Myth, regain their enrollment in the P-300 training academy - a prestigious bounty hunting organization. Tasked with the impossible mission of finding and capturing one of the elusive Children of Stardust, their best bet appears to be finding the legendary Wayfinder's Compass-an artifact that can guide them to one.

Their task is further complicated when the beat-up G-RV they're traveling in breaks down. Stranded at the sketchiest rest stop for miles, and grounded in the middle of nowhere, it seems as though they've hit another snag in their desperate search.

But all is not lost. An abandoned dungeon, unexpected encounters with a few peculiar travelers, and a long-forgotten melody may be the spark needed to propel the trio back toward their goal... that is, if Roanoke can handle the dangers of the journey ahead... as well as his new team members.

3.5 rounded up to a 4.


This book is a quick and fun read. The cast of characters are quite unique and serve as an integral part of the enjoyment of the book. Particularly appreciated is the banter between the three main characters – Roan, Kal, and Myth. Roan, being more serious and brooding, is the opposite of the more adventurous and impulsive Kal. This creates some amusing situations, but also a plethora of opportunities for Roan to pout. Myth also has his entertaining moments, when he isn't ultra-focused on looking for gold.

 

The addition of various new characters as the book progresses also serves to keep things interesting. The characters are introduced in an appealing fashion; we get a little story time with them before they met the main characters. Additionally, some of the new characters have a mysterious air about them, this keeps the reader guessing as to what is going to happen.

 

Some slight critiques about the book mostly involve wording and repetition. At certain times throughout the book, some of the sentences sound clunky/oddly worded. For example: “Additionally, though the room was mostly empty, the center of it was filled with stone circles that rose out of the ground several feet in the air.” Also, some of the simple language used in the book make certain situations seem a little comical: referring to the antagonists in one part of the book as “troublemakers.”  Lastly, the repetition is a little excessive; Roan was said to blush and pout an exceptional amount of times. If some of these things are tightened up, it would make the book flow better.

 

This book feels like a mix of manga, dungeons & dragons (a party of characters had to defeat various foes), and any number of video games (the inclusion of HP, potions, magic, etc.). It would most likely be enjoyed by anyone that subscribes to one of these niche areas. While the scope of these “fandoms” would make it seem that this book would appeal to many, I am concerned it may do the opposite and that its reach may be limited. Readers who are unfamiliar with HP and such may feel lost while reading.

 

The addition of the character’s drawings and stats at the end of the book is a great bonus. It would also serve to be a useful guide while reading (especially in regards to each character’s powers).

 

Overall, this book is a good read. There are areas that are harder to read due to word choice and repetition, but the story holds its own due to the strong personalities of the characters.

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Synopsis

We are all made of Stardust.

Deadlines suck. Deadlines particularly suck when you have six months to track down the universe's most wanted criminals - a collective of humanoid weapons made from the essence of gods... The notorious Children of Stardust.

Roanoke is an introverted young man seeking to help his chaotic twin sister Kaleida and her wyvernboy friend, Myth, regain their enrollment in the P-300 training academy - a prestigious bounty hunting organization. Tasked with the impossible mission of finding and capturing one of the elusive Children of Stardust, their best bet appears to be finding the legendary Wayfinder's Compass-an artifact that can guide them to one.

Their task is further complicated when the beat-up G-RV they're traveling in breaks down. Stranded at the sketchiest rest stop for miles, and grounded in the middle of nowhere, it seems as though they've hit another snag in their desperate search.

But all is not lost. An abandoned dungeon, unexpected encounters with a few peculiar travelers, and a long-forgotten melody may be the spark needed to propel the trio back toward their goal... that is, if Roanoke can handle the dangers of the journey ahead... as well as his new team members.

Overture

A BLANKET OF WEBBING WOVE itself over the god’s estate, suffocating the screams that emanated from the mountain-top castle. Lifeless bodies were frozen as they had died, some running, some cowering. The countless spiders who had already cloaked the outside with their dark work now determinedly invaded the inside.

The insects’ funerary cloth extended to every bit of the mansion; the winding hallways with their centuries-old artwork, the rooms that held revered artifacts, and the elegantly designed bedrooms all found themselves swallowed by the white spider silk. They took their time consuming the once grand estate, seeming to enjoy the splendor. Their movements were uniform, as though they were an army being led by some unseen general. The fine threads, their weaponry, glimmered across the corpses like freshly fallen snow.

Through the mansion’s labyrinth of hallways, a servant boy in his early teens ran for his life. He wore only his sleeping clothes, and the webbing grasped at his bare feet with each step. Staggering into the estate’s training room, he saw that his only option was to grab a wooden sword; others likely took the more threatening weapons before his arrival.

He wasn’t sure what he could do with a simple wooden practice weapon, but his eyes held the determination of any warrior as he weaved through the halls, even as his hand on the hilt trembled. He dodged the bodies of soldiers and his fellow servants, refusing to look at any of them. The boy heard skittering on the walls and floor around him and, out of the corners of his eyes, he could see small shapes with elongated legs dancing masterfully over the web. His foot stepped on one and he felt the guts squish against his bare feet. Bile rose in his throat, but he stumbled on.

He turned down one hallway and saw an older woman screaming as she swatted at the uncountable swarm of spiders that crawled up her body. She turned to him and sobbed. Whatever she might have said was lost, for the insects invaded her mouth as soon as she opened it. She took a few staggering steps towards him, and instinctively, he stepped back.

While her body froze, the boy whispered a silent prayer. He had never thought he would watch his aunt die. Not like this. The web crawled up to claim her paralyzed body, and the spiders cascaded down—and began the quick race towards him. He pushed aside the memories of her that had briefly taken hold of him. There was no time to mourn. Instead, he spun around and kept running.

As he ran down another hallway, a door in front of him burst open. The head samurai, his face half-shaved with shaving cream still on his chin, staggered out. The boy couldn’t help but stop; he had never seen this proud captain with such a look of absolute fear on his face. The man didn’t notice him. Instead, his hands reached out for something — anything — to save him from whatever was inside the room.

“A Child of Stardust! Hurry, sound the alarms! Help-!”

His words were cut off as the boy watched the white webbing slither out of the room and wrap around his throat, dragging him back inside. His fingers grasped futilely at the edges of the door, but the door suddenly slammed shut—and the boy watched the man’s severed fingers fall to the white floor.

The boy could feel tears running down his cheeks; he wasn’t sure when he had started crying. He just knew that he had to keep going. Above all else, he had a duty to protect the deity of the estate. No one else could distract from that priority.  There was no question of who was more important to save.

So the boy kept running, ignoring the sound of silken threads snaking about as they claimed more victims. Though his lungs ached, he kept moving. He only stopped when he had reached the side door of the meeting hall. This part of the estate had become silent. His breaths were deep and ragged, but they were not loud enough to overshadow the quiet sound of talking coming from the inside of the room.

He froze immediately. It had been burned into his skull to never interrupt the god when he was with someone. Even now, the fear of punishment for that disobedience kept him from bursting inside. His fingers shook as he brought them to the edge of the door frame. He did not open the door, but pressed his ear against it.

“It’s been some time, Lord Yamamoto. You’ve lived a long life, even by a god’s standard. I would have thought that your children would have succeeded you by now. Though when we met, you were practically a child yourself.”

It was a feminine voice, gentle and polite. It was unfamiliar and it made the hairs on the boy’s arms stand on end. He couldn’t help the feeling that the spiders that had not yet reached this part of the mansion were now crawling towards his ears.

"My father may have been the one to fight you, but I’ve had hundreds of years to grow my power. I don't know what game you're playing, Masamune, but do not think your breed's tricks will work on anyone now!” Lord Yamamoto boomed, his voice like a sudden explosion amidst quiet chimes, and his words echoing through the space as strong and unrelenting as the stones he governed.

“Breed? Well, I am glad to know that you remember us so fondly. Is that why you were seeking the Wayfinder’s Compass? If you missed me that badly, all you had to do was wake me-”

“You know why I want the compass. Weapons masquerading as people will not intimidate me-”

A whipping sound came from within the room. Then there was only silence. In the eerie peace, the boy felt his body go numb. Lord Yamamoto’s words had been cut off. The boy wouldn’t let himself consider what that might mean. He tugged the door open, daring to peek inside.

The main doors to the meeting hall opened at the same time. A pale woman in a teal and purple dress, her black hair tumbling over her shoulders and her mint green eyes staring dutifully ahead, entered. Her large black animal ears twitched at the silence, while a thick and fluffy tail stayed tight against her backside. Here, too, the spider web had covered the room and hidden the splendor that once existed there. Only the lanterns flickered with dying flames.

At the very back of the room, on a raised platform, stood Lord Yamamoto’s corpse. It was still posed for an attack, his sword outstretched in frozen hands. In front of him stood another woman who appeared completely unbothered by his attempt at an attack; her casual stance made it seem like she was still in silent conversation with the frozen deity.

She was a tall, slender, and dark-skinned woman who wore a beautiful kimono that shimmered in different shades of purple. Her fine violet hair had been drawn up into an intricate sort of bun set in place by a pin with a black and pink spider-like symbol. Pink bangs framed her face, matching the color of the pin.

The black-haired woman bowed. “We found his information regarding the compass, my lady. Its location was the site of one of the Wanderer’s last battles, just as we had guessed. I've gathered Aster, Nuwa, and Clementine. We will head out once you give the word.”

She received a single nod in response and started to leave the room, but paused to tilt her head backward. She seemed to glance back at something, but the boy could not tell what. It was brief, and soon the green-eyed woman disappeared and closed the door behind her.

Back in the meeting hall, the elegant woman stepped towards the covered form of Lord Yamamoto. Her face held a subdued smile, but there was something in her glassy silver eyes that was terrifying to behold.

“Thank you for finding the Wayfinder’s Compass for me. But know this, while the Children of Stardust might be weapons, I…”

She paused, and her head turned to look his way–to look, he realized, right at the door he was peeking out from behind. Had she truly seen him, despite his silence? She did not approach, but raised a single hand up, revealing the webbing extending from her fingertips in thin strands which connected to the threads all around her. He felt cold as her gaze never wavered from his spot.

The boy took a few deep breaths. He knew that it had to be now. Whoever this woman was, she had taken down the God of Stone. Who was he to challenge such a force? But who was he if he did not? She had claimed Lord Yamamoto’s life. Even if he was destroyed…. Even if he became little more than a fly upon her web, he knew he had to fight. His hand went to the wooden sword at his side. His thumb brushed against the rough wooden shaft as he pulled the weapon out for the decisive battle.

“What do you think you’re going to do with that?” A voice mused from behind him.

The boy turned and barely caught sight of the green-eyed lady. His lips parted, but no sound came out. His hand twitched and, in that moment, his sword was hacked into shards by wires that had wound around every part of his form. The sound of the wooden pieces hitting the white floor echoed within his spinning head. Laughter from the main room chilled him and his tear-filled eyes trailed over to look through the door, still ajar.

In the main room, the silver-eyed woman’s smile grew wider.  She stepped forward one more time and chuckled. Eight glowing purple spider's eyes blinked to life around her body.

“I will be a wielder.”

She wrenched her fingers into a fist toward her chest and crushed the God’s body with a sickening crunch. The blood from the body trickled down the pristine snow of webbing toward the woman. The sounds of thousands of spiders approaching covered the last strangled gasp the boy could give before his world became silken white.

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About the author

Iago Hyde is a tired, sleepy, and kind of creative pillbug of a human continually trying to find beauty in our broken world. By exploring the most fantastical of worlds, they seek to expose the rawest truths of our own. view profile

Published on January 21, 2024

50000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Fantasy

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