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A cliche sci-fi novelette with brief moments of lucidity, but read more like a SparkNotes outline than a book.

Synopsis

When a curious astrobiologist, Phillipa Maxwell, discovers the alien origin of the virus, she’s stunned.

A mysterious illness, peaceful aliens, and humanity begins to die; only to rise again as zombies.

When a virus strikes humanity, turning them into zombies, peaceful aliens offer aid—but the virus has alien origins…

Humans and aliens peacefully coexist… so why is an alien virus turning humans into zombies?

Aliens and humans coexist—a pandemic that turns humans into zombies could spark a war…

Especially when a curious astrobiologist, Phillipa Maxwell, discovers the alien origin of the virus. Stricken with grief after her brother is patient zero and has become a zombie, she turns her eyes heavenward as a group of aliens makes a sinister entry to planet Earth.

Suddenly the zombies are weaponized, becoming soldiers in an ugly war. Humanity must fight. Fight to stay healthy, fight the zombies, fight this new alien threat. Phillipa, caught in the crossfire of battle, watches friends—aliens and humans alike—fall; only the humans are risen into more zombies. With the tides of war turning, she must do the unthinkable; use the fate treasure of the universe. Will she use it in time to save the day?

I have to admit, the ambitious synopsis pulled me in and I was eager to read an enthralling cyberpunk-alien tale with a powerful heroine. This book, or novelette, however, was quite cliche and bland. Unless the genre is just speculative fiction or only one element of the world has changed, there needs to be extensive world-building. I'm not sure if the author had a constrained word count, but the world-building alone should have been the length of this book.


There are also many oversimplifications and generalizations about the nature of the relationship between humans and aliens. For instance, the humans don't seem to have any qualms about the alien presence. How is this possible? Where are the tensions with language, interspecies (interplanetary) interaction, etc?


The main source of these problems is the author's overreliance on telling rather than showing. While I appreciate books that allow the reader to dive into the protagonist's thoughts, there's too much of this here. Additionally, shocking moments that alter the course of Earth are stated in textbook style one-liners. This contrasts with some of the more descriptive, introspective ruminations of the protagonist, but fails to bring cohesion to the book.


I also think there were some grammatical mistakes, or at least some of the sentences were phrased weirdly and I had to reread them.


Nonetheless, there were two things I liked: scenes with dialogue, which made up all of the scanty characterization in this book; and the protagonist's introspections, which had a nice tone that could've been applied to more scenes.

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Synopsis

When a curious astrobiologist, Phillipa Maxwell, discovers the alien origin of the virus, she’s stunned.

A mysterious illness, peaceful aliens, and humanity begins to die; only to rise again as zombies.

When a virus strikes humanity, turning them into zombies, peaceful aliens offer aid—but the virus has alien origins…

Humans and aliens peacefully coexist… so why is an alien virus turning humans into zombies?

Aliens and humans coexist—a pandemic that turns humans into zombies could spark a war…

Especially when a curious astrobiologist, Phillipa Maxwell, discovers the alien origin of the virus. Stricken with grief after her brother is patient zero and has become a zombie, she turns her eyes heavenward as a group of aliens makes a sinister entry to planet Earth.

Suddenly the zombies are weaponized, becoming soldiers in an ugly war. Humanity must fight. Fight to stay healthy, fight the zombies, fight this new alien threat. Phillipa, caught in the crossfire of battle, watches friends—aliens and humans alike—fall; only the humans are risen into more zombies. With the tides of war turning, she must do the unthinkable; use the fate treasure of the universe. Will she use it in time to save the day?

COHABITANTS

Earth had received it's long expected visitors. Before they had entered the earth's sphere, they had signaled for permission, following all the gestures atypical to the non-intrusion of airspaces.

It was a spaceship of aliens from the remotest parts of the galaxy. They did not land in the ocean as was typical to parachuted capsules but amidst a location reserved for some of the activities of man.

 

Finally, aliens were on the earth and they had come in peace. Answering some of the first questions, they assured the world that they didn't plan to tactically and overtly colonize the earth as was long suspected of extraterrestrials. They claimed they had no such interests in overriding the events of a foreign planet.

They had envisioned earth to be the most incubating of planets in the solar system. But if the forms of life therein, or the essence thereof, they hadn't paid sufficient attention to.

They were resettled and cohabited two cities with humans as a really small tribe of aliens. They spread themselves into two cities for strategic reasons to them, which was yet unknown to the humans. In time, the humans were pleased to have them around. One race warming into the other.


But naturally, humans had mixed feelings about their stay. Were they sleeper cells for a grander plan or would they genuinely hold on to their pacifist motives? It was hard to say. These aliens didn't look particularly terrifying. They were slender, towering, had beaming eyes, a pale leathery body and communicated just fine.

Elk, the leader of the aliens had given humans their oaths as tokens of peace. And so all was well. Though the cynical nature of humans ensured that CCTV cameras followed the aliens wherever they went. The aliens, with their superior senses, weren't oblivious to this fact, if it would help the humans to gain their trust, then they needn't violate or bypass these measures.

With their advanced knowledge, they had helped scientists and invariably the world to leapfrog in various fields.


Whereas humanity in turn taught them the finer and frail traits of being human which they so admired.

In daily living in those two cities, they could occasionally be found at the settlements that'd been made for them, also at a handful of functions and at the most recent workplaces that'd become a hybrid of humans, aliens and robots working together to speedily bring forth a better future for everyone into the present time.

For a time, the aliens had helped them make sense of certain obscure things throughout space and time. The two cities they dwelled in saw way more technological development and growth than the rest of the world.

One of the places they had briefly worked at was the observatory in the small town by the lake where Philippa was. She had been one of the most intrigued about the nature of


these creatures for all of her life. Her field demanded it. But it was also a natural inclination. Until it passed into normalcy and for a time there was hardly anything startling from space.

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Fantasy, science-fiction, and thriller writer Naif Makmi lives in Saudi Arabia, where he is known for his extremely imaginative fantasy stories. His sci-fi debut novel Year 2059: Transmutation, a mind-blowing post-apocalyptic sci-fi, packed with action and adventure, alien contact and zombies. view profile

Published on February 24, 2021

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Genre:Science Fiction

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