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This well-written short story is a richly detailed and compelling introduction to the rest of the T.J. Young and the Orishas series.

Synopsis

What happens when a deity needs a human body?

They go to the source, of course.

Eshu the Trickster needs a mortal form for his mischievous plans, but the only other Orisha who can help him swore off the practice ages ago.

It will take careful scheming to convince the Original Architect to come out of retirement. Any misstep and Eshu will be thrown from the Sky Realm.

What’s worse, Eshu hasn’t visited the heavens for several centuries. Would his former comrade even be the same? How can Eshu persuade someone he barely knows anymore?

Find out in this prequel short story to The Gatekeeper’s Staff, a young adult fantasy based on the West African mythology of the Orishas.

Being a trickster god comes with both benefits and challenges. Returning to the Sky Realm for the first time in a while, Eshu shakes the limitations of the Mortal Realm and goes in search of his old friend Obatala. The two Orishas reconnect over a game of ayoayo and a jug of palm wine, despite Obatala’s initial resistance to the drink. Several rounds later, Eshu begins to enact his sneaky plan to convince his old friend to revitalize skills that have long gone untouched.


This short story is the prequel to the series T.J. Young and the Orishas and introduces the characters of Eshu and Obatala in rich detail. Written for an advanced middle grade or young adult audience, the beautiful descriptions place readers squarely in the Sky Realm, where everything is a bit less predictable than the Mortal Realm. Using his Ashe, or power, Eshu is able to easily traverse the space, searching for Obatala and floating at times among his ethereal surroundings. Each carefully crafted, detailed paragraph defines this world and creates a palpable backdrop for the story.


Occasional words are used that are not in English, and these are italicized to stand out from the rest of the text. A glossary is included at the end of the story to help define the potentially unfamiliar vocabulary, but the general meaning of each word is also able to be deduced by context. References to mortal colloquial words and phrases add an element of reality even as these characters are interacting in a superhuman, immortal space.


Whether or not readers are familiar with the mythology of the Orishas, this book serves as an accessible and memorable depiction of Eshu the trickster god. This fast-paced, short story gives readers a taste of what to expect from the remainder of the series and encourages further reading as the tale draws to a close. Fans of the Tristan Strong series will excitedly dive into this similar collection of stories featuring characters from West African folklore. This is a well-written, captivating addition to libraries for teen readers.

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Synopsis

What happens when a deity needs a human body?

They go to the source, of course.

Eshu the Trickster needs a mortal form for his mischievous plans, but the only other Orisha who can help him swore off the practice ages ago.

It will take careful scheming to convince the Original Architect to come out of retirement. Any misstep and Eshu will be thrown from the Sky Realm.

What’s worse, Eshu hasn’t visited the heavens for several centuries. Would his former comrade even be the same? How can Eshu persuade someone he barely knows anymore?

Find out in this prequel short story to The Gatekeeper’s Staff, a young adult fantasy based on the West African mythology of the Orishas.

Eshu didn’t care what the other Orishas said; the mortals had it right. They had bicycles, trains, cars, and most importantly, planes. Heck, even a sluggish air-balloon would’ve done the trick, no matter how slow it was. That would’ve been much better than climbing an endless golden chain to the heavens. 

Sprinkles of water dewed Eshu’s face and saturated his long, drooping hat. He thought it was the condensation of the clouds that wet him, but as he scaled farther and farther upward, the rushing of waterfalls filled his ears.

It might’ve been ages since he’d been up there, yet he knew he was close. He knew this not only because his loincloth and hat were getting soaked through, but because the strain in his arms was giving way to fatigue. 

A few more grabs, pulls, and lifts later, and Eshu finally broke the plane of the tallest and thickest clouds. And it was about time—the strength in his hold was threatening to leave him, forcing him to tumble back to the Mortal Realm. 

Before I get done here, Eshu thought, I’m going to make some changes to this damn sky chain.

A collection of floating mountains spread out ahead of him, dotting the deep-blue canvas between the sky and heavens. The water that had ruined Eshu’s clothes came flowing from the waterfalls that fell into the clouds to cast rain on the mortals below. 

The Orisha grunted and wiped his face clean for the dozenth time. Then, with a long, resounding breath, he lifted himself over the small plot of earth, which served as an anchor for the sky chain.

Eshu took measure of his surroundings. It had been a while since he’d visited the Sky Realm. He remembered then why it had been so long. Everything up here was so ethereal, so peaceful, so perfect. 

And absolutely a bore. 

That’s another thing the mortals got right. They knew how to spice up a place, make it their own. His fellow Orishas, however, especially the ones who lived way up in the clouds, had as much flavor as the human’s oatmeal.

Squinting, Eshu surveyed each mountain atop their floating islands. He scanned for a specific peak… a snow-capped range that housed a certain Orisha of interest. And just there, between the sun’s ray and the moon’s glow, a perfectly angled cap of snow glimmered like a shining pyramid of silver-white. 

Wa si mi,” Eshu said, and a staff snapped into his hand from nothingness. He twisted the wooden shaft around his body, and his clothes dried in an instant. 

“All right, old friend,” he murmured. “Let’s see if you’re still up there.”

With another flourish of his staff, a cluster of clouds gathered around his floating plot of earth. He smiled. Now that he had made the climb, he was free to travel as he pleased, free of the chain that suppressed the full use of his Ashe—his magical energy. 

He tipped his toe on the first patch of cloud to test his purchase. When his weight found proper balance, he skipped along the clouds he manifested before him, one by one.

Eshu chuckled the entire way to Obatala’s domain.

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Julia HooverNote that right now (June 5, 2021), it's free on Amazon Kindle!)
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almost 4 years ago
Julia Hoover(I only mention this because I LOVED the TJ Young that I read - which you may have to wait for. ;) )
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almost 4 years ago
Yolanda BevansThe most captivating YA book EVER‼️
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almost 4 years ago
Chrys MinterAbsolutely loved this story. Antione Bandele writes in a way that intrigues you to want to read more. I really love this author and his art for storytelling. The world's he builds makes his stories leap from the page where you can see and feel it.
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over 3 years ago
Yves HartleighSuch a cool premise. Looking forward to checking this out!
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Antoine lives in Los Angeles, CA with his girlfriend and cat. He is a YouTuber, producing work for his own channel and others. He is also an audiobook engineer. Whenever he has the time, he’s writing books inspired by African folklore, mythology, and history. view profile

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