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Filled with murder, mystery & deadly synthetics, Vise Manor is a clever sci-fi thriller that kept me up turning pages well into the night

Synopsis

Eccentric tech billionaire Winston Vise has invited eight guests to his secluded home in the New York countryside. His mission: to find investors and buyers for his new line of artificially intelligent synthetic humans. After a lavish evening of drinking and feasting, Winston takes the stage in the conservatory to begin his pitch. But when the demonstration takes a sharp turn into murder, his prospective investors find themselves trapped in the sprawling manor with a killer and no way to call for help.

The doors open automatically at sunrise. Will there be anyone left alive to see it?

Reminiscent of the movies Clue and House on Haunted Hill, Vise Manor is a clever sci-fi thriller that kept me up well into the night to see what happened next. Set in a far more technologically sophisticated world than our own, yet still in 2021, synthetics are all the rage. Though few companies have mastered the ability to craft completely human-like synthetic beings complete with intelligence, personality and mannerisms, Winston Vise is claiming to have produced the best synthetics out there. And he needs investors to continue on his path of success.


Vise is an almost unheard of tech billionaire, so when he invites eight carefully chosen members of relevant industries to his manor for dinner and an unveiling of his new products, they RSVP yes, if only to learn more about the elusive man. The disembodied synthetic hand that Vise sent with the invitation as proof of his advances certainly aided in their decision to attend.


But when the attendees show up to Vise Manor, they get more than they bargained for. Communications are jammed, Mother Nature is unleashing her fury, and not everyone is who they claim to be. Throw in a few unexpected brutal murders and the night quickly shifts into survival mode.


Though the story may not be entirely original, and a few parts were even a little predictable, Verastiqui does an amazing job of developing each and every character. I found myself rooting for Carter and Roma, Nancy and Misty (unexpectedly so), and actually shouted aloud during a pivotal character's death just before sunrise. It became almost a game of trying to determine who would survive and who wouldn't, and what paths each character would take along the way.


Once I got to the very end of the story and realized that it left open space for a sequel, I went to Verastiqui's site and learned that this is actually a part of a 7-book anthology series. I will definitely be going back and reading these other stories. Overall, I loved it and recommend to any sci-fi readers interested in a book that walks the line between murder mystery and cyber thriller.

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Synopsis

Eccentric tech billionaire Winston Vise has invited eight guests to his secluded home in the New York countryside. His mission: to find investors and buyers for his new line of artificially intelligent synthetic humans. After a lavish evening of drinking and feasting, Winston takes the stage in the conservatory to begin his pitch. But when the demonstration takes a sharp turn into murder, his prospective investors find themselves trapped in the sprawling manor with a killer and no way to call for help.

The doors open automatically at sunrise. Will there be anyone left alive to see it?

The doorman brought the mail up a little after 3:00 p.m.

Adelai heard the elevator ding from the leather couch in the living room. She’d been there for the last hour, staring at the tall windows, watching a world turned beige by the thin blinds. The last of the birds were migrating through the city; they stopped to rest on the many perches the high buildings provided. Adelai knew the feeling. She too had sought out warmth and safety in her penthouse perch high above the city streets.

The stereo in the corner played classical music at an ambient volume; only during the swell of some passionate symphony could she hear the individual strings and horns. They mixed nicely with the crackling of the fireplace, providing just enough white noise to keep the dead silence at bay, but not so much that she couldn’t hear the conversation happening down the hall in the foyer.

“Afternoon, ma’am.”

Though a small army of doormen worked in Eames Tower, only a handful were authorized to come up to the penthouse. It was either Hector, Raymond, or Harold—three men with impeccable records who, each in their own time, had been personally interviewed by Adelai.

“Good afternoon, Harold. How are you today?”

The silky voice that greeted the doorman belonged to Simone, and Adelai imagined her standing primly with her hands folded and smile beaming.

“It’s quite the haul today, Mrs. Vaught. An entire box of mail and half a dozen packages. All on the small side, thankfully.”

“Oh, yes. I hope it wasn’t too much trouble carrying them up here.”

Adelai smiled as she fingered the rim of her wine glass. She had no intention of getting up and was more than happy to sit and listen to Simone speak. It was one of her wife’s better qualities, the way the words flowed from her mouth like a swarm of butterflies—dazzling the eyes with their colors and comforting the soul with the sound of their gentle flapping.

“No trouble at all, ma’am. Happy to do it. I’ll just stack them here on the table.”

“That’d be great, thank you. How’re the grandchildren? Have they picked out their Halloween costumes yet?”

So polite. So genuinely charismatic.

Harold was ostensibly their employee, and yet Simone went out of her way to be interested in him—and not just to pretend to be interested, but to actually remember that he had six grandchildren from both a son and a daughter. If pressed, Simone could probably even rattle off their names.

Adelai got up and nudged aside the red heels she’d kicked off earlier. She padded along the thin carpet to the tall windows and spied a massive, winged creature on a ledge across the street. It was the color of wet evercrete and looked like a gargoyle had come to life.

Maybe it was the wine.

“…a ghost, and Maya wants to be a caterpillar this year.”

Simone’s effortless laughter sounded like kisses bubbling up from a pool of love.

Adelai chuckled at herself and looked down at her glass. She didn’t count her drinks—a real woman never did—but if she had to guess, the number that came to mind was four, maybe five. And really, she didn’t know why she’d had so much. It was just a cheap cabernet she’d picked up at a bodega a block over. Hand to God, the label said it was bottled in 2020. She had shampoo that had been around longer.

“That sounds delightful. You’ll have to show me pictures.”

She wasn’t just blowing smoke. Even if Halloween came and went and Harold forgot, Simone would seek him out and make him show her his phone. Regardless of how cute the children were, she would offer glowing praise. Harold, in turn, would feel better about himself, and somewhere in the back of his mind, a synapse would solidify into a single thought: I feel better about myself when I’m around Simone.

Such was Simone’s gift.

The Eames Tower swayed. It did that sometimes. It certainly wasn’t Adelai feeling the effects of the alcohol. After all, she’d only had three, maybe four drinks, and really it was uncouth to count.

“Is there anything else I can do for you two?”

“No, thank you though.” Perhaps Simone cast a glance down the hallway to see if Adelai was in view. “Adelai is tied up with work at the moment, but we’ll stop by and visit when we head out for dinner later.”

“I will look forward to it.”

Adelai groaned and put a hand on the cold glass. It was true they had dinner reservations at some cramped restaurant nearby, one of those trendy places where the plates were small and the portions were smaller, but she had no desire to go. She’d left work early eager to come home and crawl into a bottle of wine and had done so without considering what the rest of the evening might bring. Perhaps Simone was simply keeping up appearances with Harold. She likely knew that after a few drinks, Adelai wouldn’t feel like going anywhere except to bed.

They traded farewells.

A button chimed.

The elevator dinged.

Soon, the clacking of Simone’s Jimmy Choo heels echoed down the long hallway.

She always wore her dress shoes when she was working, even if she were doing so from home. She entered the room untucking a white blouse from her red skirt. They had celebrated her sixtieth birthday over the summer, but to Adelai, she didn’t look a day over thirty-five. Simone had a youthful face with clear skin and only the smallest of wrinkles around her eyes. Small rubies hung like suspended drops of rain from her ears, and she wore her hair in a high and tight ponytail.

She looked the very picture of business casual, as ready to meet Harold the doorman as Harold the President.

Adelai, on the other hand, wasn’t even wearing underwear under her silk robe.

Simone sat down on the couch and placed a rectangular black box on the table.

“What…” Some foul noise escaped Adelai’s mouth. She cleared her throat and tried again. “What is that?”

“No idea,” said Simone, folding her hands, “but it’s addressed to you. Want me to open it?”

“Was it hand-delivered? It doesn’t look like a shipping box.” She narrowed her eyes, observed the discreet lid and blood-red ribbon wrapped around it. The bow on top would never have made it through the mail intact.

“I don’t see any stamps,” said Simone.

Adelai waved a hand. “Go ahead. Maybe it’s another bottle of wine.” She gave a slight groan and fell into a plush side chair, crossing one leg over the other.

Simone appraised the box as if examining an ancient artifact. She ran her fingers over the edges, and having felt the material, brought them to her nose.

“A little like crushed roses,” she remarked.

“How very posh.” Adelai leaned her head back on the chair and let her eyes take the ceiling out of focus. The faux wood blurred into a grayish fog. She closed her eyes and listened to the sounds of a ribbon coming free, a lid lifting, and a box sucking in air. Something soft touched the coffee table.

“Mother-fuck-me.”

Adelai laughed and sat up. Simone’s eyes were wide; pale brown dots sat alone in seas of white. The rim of the box obscured its contents, and when she asked what was in it, Simone simply pushed the box across the coffee table with an outstretched finger.

Adelai blinked. Blinked again.

It was a hand—a woman’s hand, by the shape of it—with long slender fingers ending in sculpted but unpainted nails. The forearm to which it was attached extended for several inches before ending abruptly in a clean—both in smoothness and lack of gore—cut. The limb sat on a bed of black velvet, and if Adelai hadn’t seen Simone place the box on the table, she would have sworn someone was beneath the glass sticking their hand up through a hole in the bottom.

The skin was pure alabaster.

Adelai reached for her wine glass and drained it.

“Is this for my vagina or yours?”

Simone shook her head. “What?”

“It’s obviously one of those fisting hands you see online all the time, so I want to know whether you bought it for me or yourself.”

“I didn’t order this,” said Simone. “And I really don’t think it’s a sex toy, Addy.”

“Maybe I’m wrong. I’ve had a couple glasses.”

Simone scooted closer on the couch. “If it were meant to go inside you, it’d be made of some kind of plastic. This looks too realistic.”

“Maybe it’s a real human hand.”

“Yeah, sure. Look, you can see little hairs on the forearm.”

Adelai squinted but saw nothing.

“I’m going to touch it.”

“You will not,” said Adelai.

Simone reached her hand out anyway and stroked the top of the limb. Pale fingers stirred at her touch.

Adelai yelped.

Somehow, the detached limb had sensed her.

“Calm down.” Simone rotated the box until the hand was facing her. She slipped her own fingers underneath, as if she were going to bring the back of the hand to her lips for a kiss. In response, the limb moved again, curling around Simone’s fingers with all the care of a lifelong lover. When Simone removed her hand, she was holding a small slip of paper the size of a business card.

“What does it feel like?”

Simone looked up from the card as if she hadn’t heard the question.

“It’s… soft… and warm. It feels as real as your hand.” Her eyes drifted back to the card. “This is an invitation.”

“Read it.”

You are cordially invited to dinner and a demonstration at the home of Winston Vise, founder of Vise Robotics, on the night of October 22, 2021. Cocktails at 5:00 p.m. Dinner at 8:00 p.m. Please RSVP at your earliest convenience. There’s a phone number and an address upstate at the bottom.” She turned the card over in her hand. On the back was another message scribbled in pen. Simone read, “If this is what her hand is like, imagine the rest of her. Let’s discuss. WV.

“Vise Robotics,” repeated Adelai. “That means thisis a synthetic hand.”

“Looks like it. And far more realistic than anything we’ve seen at trade shows. But I’ve never heard of Winston Vise or his company before, have you?”

Adelai shook her head and drummed her fingers on the coffee table. She gasped when Simone grabbed her hand and placed it on the severed limb.

“See? Nothing spooky about it.”

“Marvelous.” It was the only word that came to mind. The hand felt marvelously real, so much like a human’s that if Adelai drank enough wine and closed her eyes, she wouldn’t be able to tell the difference. The fingers were delicately textured and radiated a subtle warmth. Adelai took hold of them as she had seen Simone do, and when the hand grasped hers, she sighed.

An effective demonstration.

An even better invitation.

Adelai looked up to find Simone smiling back at her.

“Falling in love over there?”

“It’s not just holding my hand, Momo. It’s… it’s like it’s caressing my fingers.”

“You’re not putting it in your vagina,” Simone warned.

Adelai shrugged. A sudden chill ran up her spine, and she let go of the hand. “I’m getting more wine.” She stood and retreated to the kitchen, leaving the hand and the memory of its touch behind. From the nearly empty wine fridge near the pantry, she pulled the other bottle of cabernet she’d bought at the bodega.

She couldn’t get it open fast enough.

“What do you think about going?”

“I’m guessing you want to?”

Simone stood and joined Adelai in the kitchen. She leaned against a stool by the massive granite-topped island. “Yes, but how do you feel about it?”

“How do I feel? Hmm.” Adelai put her palm to her chin and pressed for a moment. “Look, I know you’re going to say it’s the wine, but I…” She waved the cork in the direction of the living room. “Having that thing hold my hand made me feel something. It uh…” She took a quick sip. “I got a tingle.”

“A tingle?”

“Not that kind of tingle, but… I don’t know how to explain it. All I know is that it was like touching a real person. I’ve never felt that at a trade show with any of those plastic sex dolls.”

“So we’re going then?” Simone’s teeth shone through her smile.

“I don’t know. It’s really short notice. Don’t we already have plans for this Friday?”

“We’ll cancel them,” said Simone. She tilted her head. “Please?”

Adelai nodded. “Fine, but let’s make sure Rayburn looks into Winston Vise. If he signs off, we’ll go.”

Simone gave her a quick hug. “I’m so excited.” She turned and put her hands on the kitchen island, looked back at the living room where the black box lay open on the table. “And what about that thing?”

Adelai took a long sip. “Let’s see what else it can do.”

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Daniel VerastiquiThanks for checking out Vise Manor! If you have any questions about the book, leave a comment below and I'll do my best to answer. Otherwise, if you like cyberpunk, murder mysteries, and horror movies, then you should love Vise Manor!
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Reyna Miller@danielverastiqui yes can I find this book in the library are you looking for book reviewers
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Evereen Lewii love this book
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Malavika RameshDaniel Verastiqui is a cyberpunk science fiction author from Austin, Texas. He was raised on ‘80s action movies and authors like Asimov, PKD, and Bradbury, so his novels explore themes of identity and humanity in a world of unchecked technological progress and corporate greed. His latest novel, VISE MANOR, is a cyberpunk spin on the murder mystery genre, pitting wealthy elites against the products they buy and sell
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Daniel Verastiqui is a science fiction author from Austin, Texas. His novels share a cyberpunk universe filled with celebrity hackers, virtual reality, artificial intelligence, and synthetic humans. His next book, House of Nepenthe, will be available in late 2024 or early 2025. view profile

Published on March 01, 2022

150000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Science Fiction

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